Absolute Justice or not
So yeah that was the first chapter :). Hope you liked it , if you did please review and if you didn't then constructive criticsm please , I hope to be on this site for awhile and it would be good to no if people think I'm any good or not.
Here's chapter 2 , it might be short -like the first- but soon I'll be doing longer chapters.
Oh and by the way , I own nothing except for the ideas. Peace.
Chapter II: Uzumaki Enters in the Scene
Naruto Uzumaki stared at the object in his hands with indecision. It was a fruit , a strange fruit indeed. It was a small red couloured apple , that much was normal , but what made it different from other fruits were the strange markings it held. They were odd to say the least , and Naruto knew what they meant. There were flame-like marks on the surface of the fruit , along with dark spirals.
It was a Devil Fruit. Naruto knew that much -he had seen his friend eat one , after all. But what he didn't know was what power it beheld. It could be fruit with powers unlike he had ever seen , that would make him a force to be rekoned with , or it could give him a useless ability. Though if the flame marks on it where anything to go by then it had to be at least something to do with fire or heat. That could bonus him greatly.
But what if the marks meant nothing at all , what if it was just common among Devil Fruits?
His friend grunted beside him , narrowed black eyes staring at the Fruit thoughtfully. Finnaly he pulled away and gave Naruto some much needed advice. «I would eat it.» Naruto started , he had been expecting the raven haired man to say the opposite.
«You sure?» He asked , unsure.
«Positive.» He began , his eyes shooting back at the Fruit. «It has to at least be a powerful one. My one did have a lightning mark engraved on it.» He pointed out. Naruto found that he made sense. That was Sasuke for you.
Shrugging he thought over his decision. On one hand it could be incredibly powerful but also the complete opposite. Though as Sasuke said , the fire symbols must mean that it has something to do with fire. What could be the worse that can happen? The image of him drowning came up but he shrugged it off. He was awesome , there was no way he would die by drowning. When he died he was going out in style.
Steeling himself , the blond got rid of all doubts he had in his mind.
And bit down.
He almost coughed it back out -it tasted like ash! But he forced himself to swallow. He really wished that the taste was the worst of it , but that was nothing compared to what happened next.
He felt his body go on fire. He screamed but his lungs felt like they had been filled with acid. His veins boiled , and he felt like someone had replaced the blood in his body with pure molten rock.
What felt like hours of suffering was in fact only a couple seconds in the real world. When the pain finnaly stopped , he let out a sigh of relief and fell to his knees , gasping for breath. He had never felt something so painful in his life. It was unreal.
«Painful , isn't it?» Naruto turned to his friend , still not having completely recuperated.
«Yeah...» He gasped out. It had never occured to him but Sasuke had went through the same pain as he had. He actually kind of felt guilty that he hadn't helped him out.
«You want to find out what it gave you?» He inquired , and I felt a smile edging it's way upwards. There was nothing better than training , and training to find out what his Devil Fruit had given him seemed even better.
«Hell yeah.» Naruto thought he saw his friend's mouth twitch upwars , but it was gone in a second , making him wonder if the Fruit had messed with his mind.
So the duo set out to do just that. Jumping to his feet ,Naruto wobbled for a few seconds before steadying himself. He was feeling pumped.
The next few hours passed unaventfully , frustrating the two teens -they wanted to know Naruto's new abilities. It was then that Sasuke came up with a brilliant idea.
«I'm going to shoot you.» He stated , his pale face dirtied with grime and sweat.
Naruto stepped back , clearly shocked. «What?!» He shouted.
«Only in the leg.» He snorted. «It's only to see if you have a logia or not.» After listening to Sasuke's expalanation , the blond nodded.
A gun shot echoed throughout the forest they were currently in. No screams followed.
Naruto looked down at the hole in his leg from the shot. The weird thing was , was that it was currently being closed by what seemed to be lava. He stared up at Sasuke , the boy's eyes showing something he had nt seen in a while. Suprise. Naruto's blue eyes mirrored his expression.
«Does this mean…?» Naruto trailed off , unable to continue his train of thought. It was simply impossible.
«Yeah...» The raven haired boy breathed out.
«You are the holder of the Magu Magu no mi.»
They both shared a moment of silence. Then , Naruto grinned. It stretched from ear to ear.
«Well then ,» He began , his grin stretching further than was though possible. «This is interesting.»
And that's how one of the World Government's greatest weapons fell into the hands of a eighteen year old boy.