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ALLEGIANCES
WINDCLAN
LEADER: Silverstar—large gray and white she-cat with a tabby tail and blue eyes
DEPUTY: Flashstorm—bright ginger tabby tom with green eyes
MEDICINE CAT: Mosswhisker—small brown she-cat with green eyes
Apprentice, Stripepaw (cream tabby she-cat with a brown tail and paws; amber eyes)
WARRIORS
Hawkstripe—brown tabby tom with white paws and yellow eyes
Apprentice, Lilacpaw (brown and white she-cat with blue eyes)
Morningcloud—golden brown tabby she-cat with a white flash on her chest and blue eyes
Dawnpool—ginger she-cat with blue eyes
Maplethorn—tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes
Rabbitstalk—black and white tom with amber eyes
Apprentice, Brackenpaw (brown tabby and white tom with amber eyes)
Ravenstrike—pitch black tom with amber eyes
Peachsong—beautiful tortoiseshell and white she-cat with honey amber eyes
Amberflower—bright golden tabby she-cat with white paws and dark amber eyes
Suntail—white tom with a shocking ginger tabby tail and amber eyes
QUEENS
Heathershine—dark brown and cream tabby she-cat with white paws and blue eyes (mother of Flashstorm's kits: Mistkit (dark brown tabby she-kit with blue eyes), Thornkit (ginger tabby and white tom with blue eyes), and Swiftkit (brown and white tom with green eyes)
ELDERS
Brownear—white tom with brown ears and amber eyes
THUNDERCLAN
LEADER: Willowstar—smooth-furred gray tabby she-cat with green eyes
DEPUTY: Juniperfrost—long-legged dark gray and white she-cat with blue eyes
MEDICINE CAT: Blossomtail—tortoiseshell she-cat with soft white paws, a fluffy white tail, and green eyes
Apprentice, Brindlefall (dark brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes)
WARRIORS
Nightblaze—black tom with dark amber eyes
Apprentice, Sweetpaw (golden tabby she-cat with amber eyes)
Puddledawn—light brown tabby she-cat with green eyes
Leafwhisker—dark ginger and white tom with green eyes
Tansybreeze—diluted tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes
Apprentice, Frostypaw (gray and white she-cat with blue eyes)
Acornpelt—light brown tom with white paws and blue eyes
Branchclaw—dark brown tabby tom with green eyes
Starlingfang—bright ginger tom with amber eyes
QUEENS
Rosemask—cream tabby she-cat with a brown face, white paws, and blue eyes (mother of Acornpelt's kits: Robinkit (brown tabby and white she-kit with amber eyes) and Applekit (cream tabby and white she-kit with blue eyes)
ELDERS
Twistedtail—small gray she-cat with a twisted tail and amber eyes
Jayscar—big gray tabby tom with unkempt fur and amber eyes
SHADOWCLAN
LEADER: Shiningstar—tortoiseshell she-cat with white paws, a fluffy white tail, and blue eyes
DEPUTY: Fernshade—dark gray and white tom with green eyes
MEDICINE CAT: Redpoppy—ginger tabby and white she-cat with amber eyes
WARRIORS
Owlflight—brown tabby tom with amber eyes
Sleekpelt—black and white tom with blue eyes
Apprentice, Flamepaw (bright ginger she-cat with yellow eyes)
Lionstripe—golden tabby tom with green eyes
Petalheart—gray and white she-cat with green eyes
Lizardstep—large dark brown she-cat with white paws and amber eyes
Timberflower—brown tabby she-cat with a white flash on her chest and green eyes
Vinespark—gray tom with green eyes
Apprentice, Plumpaw (fluffy gray and white she-cat with amber eyes)
QUEENS
Dusksnow—speckled brown and white she-cat with blue eyes (mother of Sleekpelt's kits: Tawnykit (light brown and white she-kit with blue eyes) and Oakkit (brown, black, and white tom-kit with blue eyes)
ELDERS
Snailfoot—gold tabby tom with orange eyes
Yellowstrike—black and white she-cat with amber eyes
RIVERCLAN
LEADER: Cloverstar—golden tabby and white she-cat with green eyes
DEPUTY: Creekwhisper—black tom with blue eyes
MEDICINE CAT: Dovetail—gray she-cat with two white paws and blue eyes
Apprentice, Stormpaw (blue-gray tabby and white tom with blue eyes)
WARRIORS
Lightpool—golden tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Crowgaze—brown and white tom with frosty blue eyes
Wolfheart—big gray and white tom with amber eyes
Apprentice, Streampaw (dark gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes)
Splashcloud—gray she-cat with a white underbelly and blue eyes
Ripplewhisker—gray tabby tom with green eyes
Apprentice, Daisypaw (pale gray and white she-cat with blue eyes)
Aspenfrost—brown tabby tom with blue eyes
QUEENS
Brightfeather—golden she-cat with a tabby tail and green eyes (mother of Wolfheart's kits: Ivykit (dark gray she-kit with green eyes) and Talonkit (golden and white she-kit with amber eyes)
ELDERS
Snagpelt—brown tabby tom with patches of fur missing and amber eyes
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Chapter One
Amberflower despised her sister.
The golden tabby scowled, glaring at the WindClan warriors that were flocking to Peachsong. She didn't understand why she always got so much attention. Even when they were apprentices, it always seemed that Peachsong received special treatment from everyone. She hated to admit it, but she felt jealous and bitter.
Amberflower shook her fur, getting to her paws. She felt annoyance prickle through her as she padded past her sister's idols. She was going hunting to distract herself.
She padded onto the moor, the chatter of prey drowning out the voices of her Clanmates. Amberflower took a deep breath, trying to calm herself. She knew she would be a terrible hunter if she tried while she was angry.
She spotted a rabbit chewing on the grass a few paces away from her and tensed, immediately slinking into a hunting crouch. After checking to make sure she was downwind, Amberflower stalked forward, careful to not make a sound. After she felt that she was at a close distance, she leaped.
The golden tabby was prepared for her claws to sink into the rabbit, but instead, it sunk into the dirt. Amberflower frowned, looking up and seeing the rabbit dashing away. Looks like hunting wouldn't be an option.
She stood up, walking in a random direction. Maybe taking a nice walk around the territory would help clear her mind instead.
Amberflower felt the springy grass turn dry and crunchy underneath her paws, and knew that she was nearing Twolegplace. She frowned, but kept moving. The bitterness and jealousy from earlier pierced through her. What if she left WindClan…?
"Hello!" a voice suddenly meowed.
Amberflower jumped, dark amber eyes wide. She spotted an unfamiliar dark brown and white tom with a blue collar a few paces ahead of her, gazing at her with a friendly smile.
She immediately fluffed up her fur, trying to look threatening. "What are you doing on WindClan territory?" she demanded.
"WindClan territory? Oh, it wasn't my intent to trespass…." The tom looked embarrassed before continuing. "I just wanted to see the moor. My mother always told me of how wide it was and how far you could run."
"Well, you shouldn't be here. The moor is no place for a kittypet." Amberflower narrowed her eyes.
"Why can't WindClan share the moor?" the tom asked, sitting down.
"We've already claimed all of it. We've been here for many generations now," Amberflower responded, lashing her tail. "Now go back home to your Twolegs. I'm sure you'd rather be there than here."
"You're not very friendly," the tom noted. After a few moments, he meowed, "My name is Chocolate. I'll leave if you tell me yours too."
Amberflower frowned contemplatively, but then meowed, "It's Amberflower. Now go."
"A pretty name for a rude she-cat," Chocolate snorted. He got to his paws. "Goodbye!" He waved with his tail and then padded back towards Twolegplace.
She waited until she couldn't see him anymore, and then relaxed. Hopefully he wouldn't come back.
Just as she thought that, excitement prickled in her paw pads. She chased off a kittypet! That was more than Peachsong had ever done, right?
Amberflower dashed back to camp, eager to tell Silverstar the news.
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"Silverstar? May I come in?"
"Yes," the gray and white leader responded, her blue eyes glowing in the shadow of her den.
Amberflower walked inside, settling down across from her. She immediately cut right to the chase. "I saw a kittypet near the Twolegplace border. I chased him off, so hopefully he doesn't come back." She puffed out her chest proudly.
Silverstar's expression didn't change. "Great job," she meowed. "I'm glad you're spending your time chasing off kittypets."
The golden tabby flicked her ears, detecting a faint note of scorn in her leader's voice. She felt her stomach twist involuntarily, and she shuffled her paws. "T-Thank you, Silverstar," she mumbled.
"Kittypets are no harm to WindClan, Amberflower," Silverstar meowed, her eyes narrowing. "What you did today was of no value. Why didn't you go hunting like your sister? She seems to care about the Clan much more than you do."
Amberflower reeled back as if she had been struck. She felt her fur bristle. "Peachsong is not better than me!" she hissed, feeling hot with anger. Even Silverstar loved her sister more!
"I never said she was," the gray and white she-cat responded calmly. "You just need to follow her example more."
With a burst of annoyance, Amberflower stood up and stalked out of the leader's den. She immediately headed to her nest in the warrior's den, too frustrated to talk to anyone.
Peachsong this, Peachsong that… why does she always get so much attention? Amberflower turned her body away from camp, glaring at the wall of the warrior's den. I'm a good warrior too! Why can't anyone see that…?
She decided that she wasn't going to just sit in Peachsong's shadow forever. She wanted to be even more popular than her, and she'd stop at nothing to achieve that goal.
And no matter what, she was going to become better than her.
And that's the end of the chapter! I'm still not very confident in my writing, but I'm mostly writing this to get better so it's finefine~
I'm gonna do QOTD's for people who may want to review but don't know what to say, so here's the first one of this story!: How do you feel about Amberflower?
That's all~ See you all next time! 💓
~ Orangeflight of ShadowClan