This part 2 of my story, I know part 1 was rubbish but I was tired when I wrote it. This ones better. Feel free to review it. okay, okay - it's early, but i'm not a patient person!

School trip from hell - chapter 2

We ended up in this deserted hotel called the Boston. Everyone had just run off, which was kinda sad really because there had obviously been a wedding reception going on before all the alien stuff. We were all going crazy - although, how could you blame us? My Mum and Dad would have turned on the news by now, they'd have found out that we might actually never come home from this god-foresaken place.

The strange bloke In the blue suit had brought a TV from one of the bedrooms and had plugged it in downstairs. As he tuned it in to BBC news, we all gathered around.

Hello, and welcome to BBC NEWS 24 . Our top story today -

Confusion as alien spacecrafts gather over Fleetwood. I'm Julianna Crowley bringing you the news as it happens, and as it happens mankind has made it's first contact with an extra - terrestrial race. So far there has been sightings of four spacships circling over the town, and each one seems to be emmiting a strange green fog, here to tell us more is expert Roald Hartley. Roald?

The strange bloke sat muttering to himself, "Green fog? Green..."

Well, Julianna we're not yet sure about the Fog that these spaceships are giving off but we have had reports of people going in and not coming out.

"Oh my god! We are gonna die. We are, We are!!!" Screamed Alicia Wilson, one of those melodramatic, popular girls.

"SSSHHH!" Hissed the bloke.

So we are warning people to stay at home, or at least well away from the fog and ships. Julianna?

the camera went back to the studio

Well, I have just been told that the milatary has closed off every route in or out of Fleetwood.

"Children," Said Miss. Arndale "We're trapped here"

But I have also been told that people should not panic, as we don't actually know yet whether the race is friend or foe.

The bloke turned to me "Oh, Billie Baker of Wordsworth high school, Just 13 years old. I'm sorry."

My eyes welled up with tears and I felt a lump in my throat as I spoke. "But they don't know yet! You heard, they might not be dangerous!"

He turned back and muttered "Oh, but in my experience, they usually are..."

Sarah was crying too, as she said "What are you going on about? Are you from, like, NASA or SETI, or something?"

"No," He replied, and all of a sudden, he stood up, hopefully, and shouted "I'm the doctor! And I'm going to save every last kid in this class!"

He looked at the class, then fixed his gaze at me and my friends. "Billie, Sarah, Jo and - What was your name?"

"Mel" She replied.

"You're quiet, Mel. Billie, Sarah, Jo and Mel. You're with me. Everybody else, Stay here - and that means you, Miss!"

And we followed him as he ran off.

What is the Doctor planning to do? What is the strange, green fog? And who are the aliens!?

FIND OUT ON TUESDAY, MAY 19th IN CHAPTER 3!!! Thank you xxx