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Mitchie's POV
"How long are we gonna take?" I screamed in anxiety. Nate had come up with a brainwave that Shane, being a jerk, was also smart. He would avoid all loopholes in his death. He knew that we would come and rescue him, so he would opt for a fast yet painful death.
But I thought differently. Shane would want to pass his last moments in a lot of pain and regret, so he would surely go to his hotel room, and then when we would find him, he would be there with his slit wrist and blood all around.
Jason had said I was right. But him saying I was right did not me me feel better, as currently we were stuck in a goddamnit traffic jam. We were 3 blocks away from the hotel. And the traffic was taking forever.
So I did the next best thing I could come up with. I got out of the car and ran. I ran and ran and kept on running till my feet switched from cellular respiration* to fermentation**
I reached the hotel, and missed the lift to the 12th floor by seconds. So I ran again, up the stairs. I was crying as I ran - to save my love's life. I reached the door and banged on it.
"Shane! Shane! Open the door!," I cried. No answer. I tried again, "Shane! Open the door. I forgive you! I forgive you! I love you too! Please! Baby Please! Come out! No! Open the door!,"
Shane's POV
The time had come. I had to do this quick. I was glad that I had ditched all loopholes. That idiot Nate would surely lead them to somewhere else. And I could finally..........
"Shane! Shane! Open the door!," came a voice.
I froze. This was Mitchie's voice. How the hell did she know I was here?
"Shane! Open the door. I forgive you! I forgive you! I love you too! Please! Baby Please! Come out! No! Open the door!,"
She what? How can she forgive a sinner like me? Is she mad? Or has she never read the bible..........
I could not hold it any longer. Mitchie would never get through the door. I raised the knife to my wrist. But then she said something that made me stop - for good.
"Shane! I swear. If you don't open this door this instant, I will kill myself. I swear I will. If you die, I die too, right?"
Mitchie's POV
"Shane! I swear. If you don't open this door this instant, I will kill myself. I swear I will. If you die, I die too, right?" I said. I meant it. Seriously. I did.
Suddenly, the door swung open, and a pair of arms pulled me inside. Once I was in, I started to say something, but my lips were captured in a passionate kiss.
"You. Will. Not. Die.," growled Shane.
"I won't die unless you do," I replied.
"Why are you doing this?"
"Because I love you,"
"Even after what I did?"
"Yeah,"
"I love you,"
"I love you too,"
"Well.... Well... Well. If that isn't Shane and Mitchie standing together inside the room in the cuddly cuddly way. Get a room, kay? There are other people living here too,"
Shane and I broke apart, and faced the door. Standing there was Tess Tyler, looking slutty, as usual.
But that's not what what bothered me. What bothered me was the fact that she had another girl standing behind her. She looked nice. Not at all slutty. If she was not tess' minions, I would've liked her.
Shane began to breathe heavily. I looked at him, alarmed.
"Shane?" said the girl. Sweet Voice.
"A-Andrea?"
Ok done. Please Review. Ok. Next chapter, prepare for the Tess exit contest results. This is your last chance to vote. And next chapter, also featuring Shane's choice b/w Andrea and Mitchie. Who will he choose??
The dorly girl who knows nothing, a.k.a EnchantixTracy