Chapter Eleven-
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the sudoku kid-LOL, thnx!
oHmYgOdNoWaY-Um, it's called a fan FICTION meaning it doesn't have to be real. I already know that the characters are OOC, but it's easier to write them like this. I also already know its moving too fast, but if it wasn't this would, like, a thousand chap story, which is way too boring, and I don't do boring, slow, or un-actiony, that's the only reason it's fast. Thnx for reading and your concerns! (Oh, and she likes them because they tortured Snape, what with him calling her a Mudblood. She's actually a personna of me :)
oHmYgOdNoWaY-Ugh, finally! Someone who got the riddle! LOL
emmyleedouglas-OMG, married? Pregnant? No way! It's the Unbreakable Vow, LOL, you're review seriously made me laugh.
LunaSwan-Because....I...Like it....Like this? I dunno, I just liked it more like this. I also don't know why she wanted to carry him when she could have just walked with him. I guess it's more of a sentimental thing, you know? Yeah, the name changed. The After:The Fifth Marauder's Story was long, boring and made NO sense! LOL, I like The Marauderette more. (Oh, and Alice is Neville's mom, but I don't know her maiden name. JFYI)
oHmYgOdNoWaY-LOL, thnx, but they aren't really gay.
oHmYgOdNoWaY-Okay, thnx. I'm glad I'm not going too fast! Fast is okay, but when you bounce around too much it kinda sucks. (But like in Deathly Hallows they had to go kinda fast, that's what I was going for.)Now I am rambling about writing speeds. I have no life.
Last of the Trifecta-LOL, thnx!
FiveObsessionsForEver3749-Thnx!
345 ()-Thnx, I hate it when it's either real rushed or real drawn out, but I'm glad you liked it!
I love Fred weasley ()-Thnx, I'm glad you liked it!
I love Fred weasley ()-Lily's name is gonna be the Marauderette, and James will be okay, but I can't tell you what they're gonna do, that's a surprise!
I love Fred weasley ()-Thnx, I like writing for them, its fun!
I love Fred weasley ()-LOL, yeah. I couldn't resist putting that line in
I love Fred weasley ()-Thnx, I thought the line was cute too, so I'm glad I was right and that you like it!
I love Fred weasley ()-Really? You hate him? *Gasp*, I am shocked! LOL
I love Fred weasley ()-Of course, would it be me if I didn't?
KaceyO-LOL, me too! But I think she goes a bit OOC in the next couple of chapters. Sadly, James is in the hospital.
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Disclaimer-I don't own Harry Potter, but do any of us really own anything? I have a laptop, but does that mean its really mine? Then again, I don't want some random hobo using my laptop, so I guess Harry Potter is JK Rowling's
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"Okay, so here's the plan" Lily began the next day during breakfast. They were walking down the halls and towards the hospital wing, where their best friend had been condemned for an entire week. "We can't just go with silly little pranks, like sending them to Moaning Myrtle's washroom. No, we are gonna make them suffer" she said maniacally, "We're going to torture so badly they'll be begging for two bludgers to the head" she whispered.
"Wow Lily, I've never seen you so excited about pranking someone. I like it" Sirius said, smiling along with her.
"Pranking? No, we aren't pranking anyone, my dear Sirius," she said, "We're annihilating"
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"Bye James" Sirius said lastly as they left the hospital wing. Lily decided it'd be best not to tell James about the plan, in fact, she hadn't told anyone the exact plan either, but only say that all be would revealed in good time.
As they walked they went their separate ways as Lily went to Herbology and the boys to Divination Lily told them to meet her during free period in the library. "The library. Where's that?" Sirius asked. Remus rolled his eyes as he led them to Divination.
As they walked in Professor Chase handed out the glass balls and as he did Sirius smiled wickedly. "These balls are so small" he said.
Remus smiled brightly as well. "That's what she said" he mused. Sirius and him burst out into laughter, Remus clutched his side, and Sirius fell out of his chair. "Care to share the joke, boys?" Chase asked them. Sirius sat up straight, looked his Professor in the eye and said smoothly, "We were just appriciating the vast amount of knowledge we learn in this class" he said, Remus gave him a doubtful expression.
"You made a TWSS joke again, didn't you?" Chase asked them. The two boys hung their heads and nodded. Chase rolled his eyes before asking everyone to do a palm reading of their partner. Sirius looked at Remus's hand and said, "Hmm. I see a very bad time nearing you." Sirius guessed.
"You aren't making a prediction. There's a moon cycle calendar right behind me!" Remus hissed. "Now, give me your hand" he demanded.
"Remus, I didn't know you rolled like that. Unfortunately, I am deeply in love with Melissa..."
"Melissa Jonsohn"
"Jonsohn, I knew that" Remus rolled his eyes before staring at Siruis palm. "Uh-Huh. Hmm, yes. I see a slap making its way to your head" Remus said smartly, "A slap? Wha-? Ow!" Sirius whimpered like a dog as Remus hit the back side of his head.
"C'mon, we have to do the glass ball now" Remus said, silently wishing Lily could have been there to be his partner instead of Sirius, who usually worked with James. Remus began to look into the glass ball, watching a smoke cloud formed, then disapeared. He saw Lily with a water gun, a running figure, James in his dorm with some girl, then finally, a big black dog pouncing on another figure. He pulled his head up in a recoil, blinking rapidly and rubbing his eyes. He then looked at the ball again, and saw nothing. "Blimey" he muttered before Professor Chase dismissed the class.
"Remus, you were looking into that ball for ages" Sirius said as they left Divination. "You were kinda blanking too. I shook you, yelled your name, poured water on you" he trailed off
"You did what?' Remus hissed.
"I dried it right off." Sirius said defensively. Remus rolled his eyes as they met up with Lily in the library. She smiled wickedly at them before leading them over to a dark corner that no one ever went to. "Okay, what's the plan, Lils?" Sirius asked. He sat in a beanbag chair, his body sparled out completely. Remus said down next to Lily in a chair and Peter was on the floor looking up at them.
"First of all, it isn't Lily. It's the Marauderette." she corrected. "I like it" Sirius, Remus and Peter agreed. She smiled proudly before getting back on track. "We'll need a pack of No-Heat Fireworks, four water guns, sixteen dungbombs, fake blood, a couple tazer lasers, and some theme music"
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"Now, show me how to use that spell on my wand. The Communicating Charm you guys made" Lily asked Remus while sitting on James's bed about fifteen minutes later. "Simple." Remus hopped off his bed and pulled out his own wand. "Oriatio Marauderette"(*) Lily's wand glowed green for a second, and Remus smiled. "There you go. Now, to use it, just flick your wrist like that, thinking of nothiing but who you wand to talk to the most." he instructed. She nodded and took her wand.
Thinking of nothing but Remus, she flicked her wrist and Remus's began to beep. "Nice job." he said, "Now, answer it you just tap"
"Just tap?" she asked. He nodded. "Your fingerprint activates it." he explained. She nodded in understanding as Sirius came into the room with Peter by his side. Sirius had a peculiar looking bag at his side, and as Lily and Remus noticed it he smiled wickedly. He walked over to his own bed, and opened up the backpack, that she realised what his own. "There you go,water guns, dungbombs, fake blood, tazer lasers, No-Heat Fireworks, and a James Bond soundtrack." he said while emptying out his backpack.
"Brilliant!" she said looking at the pile. "But, where'd you get all this?" she asked curiously. She crossed her arms and raised an eyebrow at the boy.
"I have my ways" he shrugged. She rolled her eyes at him and sat back down on James's bed. "Now, tell me Evans. What exactly are we doing with all this stuff?" he asked. He raised an eyebrow back at her and crossed his arms.
"First. Don't do that, you look gay. Second. If you want to know, then you have to make an Unbreakable Vow with me that no matter what, you won't tell James what we're doing." she said.
"Deal." Sirius agreed. They got on their knees and linked arms. "This isn't my first Unbreakable Vow" he muttered.
"That doesn't surpise me" Lily said, "Do you, Sirius Orion Black, promise that you will not tell James Potter what we are up to?"
"I promise" The first ring, made by Remus, locked their hands together, it felt as though fire wrapped around them, but they didn't mind it.
"And do you promise that no matter what you will trust me and listen to everything I tell you to do?"
"I promise" The second ring came.
"Finally, do you promise not to tell anyone that we've made this Vow?" she asked
"I promise" The third ring bonded with the others, creating a burning feeling so intense that Lily winced. Finally it disolved and they were freed. "Why don't Remus or Peter have to do it?" he asked, pouting a bit.
"Because Peter and Remus aren't nosy gossipers" Lily snapped. "You're mean when you want revenge" Sirius said. "Not revenge. Getting even" Lily corrected. That's what she called it, since revenge sounded bad. "It's time for class" she said, walking out of the dormitory. "But tonight begins Operation Pay Back" she said, before turning her back and leaving the three boys.
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LOL, Lily was so much fun to write for. You know, her being over dramatic and making up a plan and what-not. I decided to add the Unbreakable Vow just to emphasize Lily's OOC-ness, but sorry if I mis-described it! Thnx for reading!
On another note, I got some suggetsions to write something called How to Write a Great Fan Fic, and after some consideration and deep thought, I think I will. But I need feed back, pleeze tell me if you think I should! I might write it as a fan fic for HP, since I usually write for HP, or I might make it a forum. Personally I think a fan fic would be easier, but pleeze let me know!
*--Oriato-Latin for speak with.
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He non-verbally mixed the shampoo together and wiped his hands on the grass, but the pink wouldn't come out. "it's not coming out" he said worriedly, "Why isn't it coming out?!"
"It's long-lasting you goof!" she said angrily, "If you hadn't taken the bottle from me none of this would have happened!"
"Don't yell at me, you're the one that got hair dye happy!" he retorted
"Don't say it too loud!" she hissed.
"Yeah, because I'd hate for anyone to hear us!" he shouted sarcastically, pointing at the empty field, "Because maybe the Giant Squid'll get giant feet and go tell Lucius!" he mused
"Or maybe it'll take you away!"
"What in Merlin's beard are you two yelling about?" Remus asked, walking towards them.
"Giant Squid feet and pink hair dye" Lily said
"Oh, cool" Remus said, shrugging it off and taking it as normal news.
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