Reviews from the last chapter of Betrayed Moon.
Moonlove - Yes thanks I know it was cute.
Small876 - I hope you know that your constant bugging is what made me write the chapter.
Sailordutchess - I am glad that you think that it is getting better
SerenityX2 - I will continue it only for another few chapters then the ending comes
Now my favorite review
Aleric- Oh, you are sick. Sick, sick, SICK! After a whole chapter dedicated to Serena's soul-searching and angst, her moment of intimacy with Amara finally arrives and you interrupt it. But with a youma? Oh no. A sudden appearance by one of the other Senshi? Of course not. You have to call on one of the most obscene, hellish, diabolical creations ever imagined. A TELEMARKETER! (you heartless fiend)
I am now a fiend? You can blame MCI for they interrupted me while I was writing the chapter. But you are right they are evil. And I accomplished my goal of at least ticking someone off.
Betrayed Moon
Chapter 11
By: ErisInABananaSuit
Dear Journal,
God I think that I could breakout in dance any moment. Two weeks ago I was talking to Erin when Serena's and Amara's shadows showed up and told her that the two had almost kissed. She quickly relayed the message to me. Saying that we were happy was an understatement. We launched ourselves into a plan giving the two that final push that they needed.
After several hours we came up with a plan that would involve Luna who would gladly do it. We decided that this weekend would be the day that we put our plan into action. Lately Serena has held herself up in her office and rarely comes out. And Amara is constantly walking in the park but seems to avoid the gardens. Our plan is simple but lately Erin is getting a little nervous about Sailor Chow. She normally should have raised some hell but is remaining silent. Erin refuses to give up any information that she has on her and which is making me nervous that this is deeper then just a little jealousy over power or something.
As the day gets closer Erin has had the shadows on extra patrol to find the weasel Chow, but with no luck Erin has become cross and when no one was around she confined that she was afraid that Chow was planning something big and that it might make her appear. I am scared that she is right, last night I had a vision of a unmoving Serena in the arms of Amara, and destruction was everywhere. I have no clue when or where but what goes down is going to be Earth shaking. I have yet to tell Erin this but I am going to, but with this vision comes the fact that I am not sure if the Serena in my vision was alive or dead. My hand is shaking just writing this.
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Sailor Eris was walking skyline of Tokyo searching for the disturbance that she had felt. Every muscle in her body was alert for any movement of anything, the shadows were circling her like sharks whispering the constant reports of the city's status. None was out of the ordinary. She had ten minutes to finish up and head to the park to meet with Serena, Amara, Hotaru, and Michelle. After another five minutes of walking about she felt nothing and so she headed toward the park.
When she got there everyone was there waiting for her to show up. She smirked at the extra distance that Serena and Amara had put between them. As she cat like jumped down from the tree she had hidden in and land in front of them, dropped her transformation.
"Why were you transformed?" asks Serena
"Just a small power surge that I had to checkout nothing to lose your head over."
"Are you sure?"
"Are you saying I'm lying?"
"Are you?"
"Why are we just asking question?"
"Why are we?"
"Is something wrong with us?"
"What is wrong with us?"
"Why are you just rephrasing my questions?"
The other three were watching this exchange while smothering their laughter.
"Why am I doing that?"
"Maybe your just crazy?"
"If I'm crazy, what are you?"
"Shut up."
"That was not a question."
"Way to go Einstein."
"Are you two done?" asked Hotaru
"Yes." states Serena
"Good lets go." states Michelle
As the group head out Michelle walked in between Amara and Serena because they were holding a conversation about something that Erin and Hotaru were not interested in. They walked a few steps behind them.
"Was Chow behind the power surge?"
"It was a flash but it felt like her."
"What do think it means?"
"That she attacking soon, but I don't know when."
"What caused this whole fight?"
"It is a very complicated story, I think it would be best if Serena told you."
"I think that it is not as small fight over power, but it is something much deeper."
"Your right."
They continue in silence listening to the conversation ahead of them, but soon both Erin and Serena stopped. They quickly transformed followed by the others who were for the most part confused to what is going on. They were standing when a rumbling sound reached their ears. They began to look around for the source of the sound when there was a small explosion and from the ground a vine came out and began to wrap around Sailor Eris. She began struggling but she could not get free and soon she began to scream in pain as the vine began to squeeze her and you could hear the some of her bones breaking. Sailor Saturn ran forward and tried to cut the vine but was grabbed by a second vine. As Sailor Saturn and Eris were being squeezed Sailor Uranus grabbed her space sword and ran forward cutting the vines and causing two to drop with thud to the ground. Sailor Moon and Sailor Neptune ran forward and began to check on the fallen. But soon there was another explosion and there stood Sailor Chow looking smug.
"I see that the great Sailor Eris is just now what she has always been, a pile of shit."
"Watch yourself Chow." states Sailor Moon
"What are you going to do blondie?"
With that Sailor Chow shot out lighting and hit Neptune and Uranus. If looks could kill then the one that Sailor Moon was giving Sailor Chow would put Chow seven feet under. Suddenly the wind began to kick up and swirl around Sailor Moon. The others were still awake and were staring in awe, except Eris who was trying to roll over onto her back. After a short struggle she raised her arm straight up and whispered in a strange langue and a beam of light shot up in to the sky. Sailor Chow had for a second torn her eyes from Sailor Moon to watch the light go up into the sky, but then her eyes were back on Sailor Moon.
"What a shameful attack, and what are you going to do to me Sailor Moon blow me to death?"
With that said Serena's body started to glow.
"CRAP!!!" shouted Eris and Saturn
"This is bad this really bad." states a slowly backing up Sailor Saturn
"God damn it I can't move, and I have to be the closes." shouts a annoyed Sailor Eris
"What the hell is going on?" shouts Sailor Chow
The light faded and there stood a new form of Sailor Moon. Her chest ribbon was a light pink, with a large heart-shaped broach at the center. Her skirt were blue but had lacy white petticoats under it. The red gems on her odango were pearl-trimmed, and between them was a pearl crown, in addition to the usual tiara. She also wore a ring on her left hand. Her facial expression was cold.
"And who are you suppose to be?" asked smug Sailor Chow.
The Sailor Scout did not answer.
"What cat got your tongue?"
"Leave or be destroyed." states the scout
"Saids who?"
"I, Princess Sailor Moon."
"Princess Sailor Moon? You got to be kidding me, what are you going to do?"
Princess Sailor Moon pulls out a sword and plunges it deep into the ground and the ground responded by rolling and jerking as if there was a earthquake. Sailor Chow struggled to stand and soon she fell to her hands and knees, like the trees that were around them. After a couple of minutes Princess Sailor Moon removed her sword and the shaking stopped.
"You have been warned that if you don't leave you will be destroyed."
"You don't scare me, if that is all you can do then I will be the one to destroy you."
"Your ignorance is noted."
"My ignorance is noted? I'm not leaving so your going to have to try to destroy me."
"You're a fool, Chow. Princess Sailor Moon will destroy this planet to get her way. She can't tell friend from foe, and she dose not feel regret." states Sailor Eris
"She speaks the truth." saids a voice behind Chow
Chow whips around to see a scout with black bows and sailor scarf, her skirt was a golden color with her gloves and boots. In the middle of her forehead was the symbol of the sun. In her hand a long gold staff topped with a sun.
"Sailor Sun how nice of you to come and watch your friend be destroyed."
"That is were you are wrong, she will destroy you to protect what is dear to her."
"And what is that?"
"That is not for me to say." (Three guesses who Serena is going to protect.)
"Well I think that it is time for everyone to be destroyed."
Sailor Chow throw a energy attack at Princess Sailor Moon who did not move. When the smoke cleared Princess Sailor Moon did not have a mark on her. Sailor Chow took a involuntary step back in shock.
"How?"
Princess Sailor Moon did not answer, she just raised her hand an a burst of light shot out and struck Chow in the chest sending her back in till she slammed into a tree. Sailor Chow slowly got up and drew a short sword and charged at Princess Sailor Moon who counted the attack and soon they were dueling. After a few minutes Princess Sailor Moon delivered a fatal blow cutting her throat and as blood splattered on her, Princess Sailor Moon did not blink. Soon Chow's lifeless body laid on the ground and Princess Sailor Moon set it on fire.
Sailor Sun carefully began to approach Princess Sailor Moon, when she turned on her and blasted her backwards.
"You are a unwelcome intruder on this planet. There many more just like you so now I must destroy this planet."
She began to glow in a brilliant white light that was almost blinding. The ground soon began rip and tare and more trees began to fall and soon a geyser of water erupted from the ground signaling that a pipe might have busted. With out thinking Sailor Uranus jumped up and ran toward the glowing scout. When she got there she wrapped her arms around Princess Sailor Moon and was soon covered by the light.
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Hello there my readers. As you may have noticed I have changed my penname from CrazyMonkeyPantsIII to ErisInABananaSuit, just for the hell of it. I think I might be cutting between many different views. So I would ask that you try to stick with me.
Thank you and review.