Hello again. I have posted the first chapter of the re-write and would appreciate any reviews or helpful criticism you may have. I will hopefully be updating it with a new chapter everyday and will probably prolong the story as I found it a bit rushed once I reread the original. Please let me know what you think about it, if you would like me to stay roughly along the same timeline so I finish it fast just let me know. Thank you all for your support and time.