SO HI people! I have noticed something recently, it seems no one actually cares about my fan fictions, i have now posted 3 stories and only one person has had the decency to review! so seriously it seems the only people who care are the 2 people who i tell to read the damn stories, sierra headrick and samantha sise. they don't have to review because they tell me in person what they think. im sorry but im done writing if no one is going to read my stories or a least review, if anything you could give me advice on how i could improve but seriously nothing at all is bull shit! so if your going to read my fucking stories REVIEW! Show me that at least someone cares enough to say something about it. OK i'm done with my rant now you can read the third chapter of broken home!oh and one more thing the first 2 chapters were telling how crystal got to this point. this chapter introduces a new character and the story from this point on takes place in the present or when ever the show its self takes place. oh another thing im not sure if i should make this story take place in the first anime or the second fma brother hood i might just some how figure out how to make it take place in both so yeah... here it is

Broken Home

Chapter: 3

"crystal wake up you idiot!"yelled my room mate jinx in my ear.

"OK really! why the hell do you have to yell? I'm NOT deaf! i can hear perfectly fine, or at least i used to before you started doing this to me."

"Well if you wouldn't sleep in so late i wouldn't have to come in and wake you up!"

"Fine! I will stop staying up late, are you happy now?"

"yes!" jinx said with a big cheesy grin, some times i just want to smack the shit out of her but then i remember that its her apartment and she could kick me out if she wanted to.

Ah just another usual morning, jinx yelling in my ear to wake me up, me telling her to shut the fuck up, then we go to the kitchen and eat cereal and laugh about how stupid it all is. She is probably the closest thing to family i have now, hell i don't even know if my actual family is still alive, but honestly i don't care anymore.

"Hey crystal don't you have to go see the Colonel?"

"OH SHIT! Your right! he is going to be pissed! man he is going to go all flaming pony on me!"

"what the fuck!" she yelled out with a very confused look on her face.

" uh don't ask, its just a nickname that i gave him. although he hates it when i call him that. I don't know why though."

"well i could see why he gets mad, hell thats worse than when you called Edward the full metal midget."

"hey i only said it once to his face! i haven't since!"

"i know, but you still call him that when he is not around. Now go before the Colonel gets really pissed off because your late!"

"damn it your right! Bye!"

"yeah yeah just get your fat ass out of here!"

God damn it why the hell are there so many stairs in this damn building? I screamed in my head as i franticly ran down 4 flights of stairs. When i finally got out of the apartment building i still had to run about 4 miles, needless to say i get a daily workout going to and from work. Most days i just see the same people walking around and running errands but today there was a large crowd surrounding an alley, me being an idiot i stopped to see what it was. I couldn't see what was going on so i weaseled my way to the front to see a bloody scene and a bunch of soldiers holding back the crowd. among the soldiers was the Colonel, he was standing there shaking his head and saying something to First Lieutenant Riza Hawkeye.

I managed to get up front and show one of the soldiers that was blocking the crowd my pocket watch so he would let me through. Havoc was the first one who spotted me coming and told the Colonel, when he turned his head to look at me he did not look happy at all. I continued to walk over to them, i was finally close enough to see what was the victim of this bloody mess, it was a girl about my age, she had been stabbed repeatedly all over her chest and neck. My first reaction was what the fuck! but that wore off quickly and soon a new feeling came over me, i was utterly horrified that some one would do this to a girl this young.

Colonel mustang pulled me aside and asked if i was OK,i told him i was fine but he didn't seem convinced, of corse i couldn't blame him,hell i couldn't even convince myself that i was OK. After all i did just see one of the most gruesome things that i could have ever imagined, and the really scary part is that could have been me, or it could have jinx. But it wasen't, this time.

OK i think thats a good place to end this chapter! So yeah i hope you enjoyed! but seriously people READ AND REVIEW! or i will find you and go all mion sonozaki on your asses! If you don't know who that is you should really watch higurashi no naku koro ni! she is very creepy, and so is Rena. I'm a lot like Mion and my best friend sierra is a lot like Rena so fear us! seriously. but read and review! do it now! bye!until next chapter!