Chapter 3 coming right up! Thank you guys so much for reviewing and reading. I'm so happy that you all like it so much. This is the last chapter I have partly written until chapter 6, I think. So bare with me because these next few chapters will take a bit to work out because I have to completely rewrite the whole thing. Onto the 3rd chapter rewrite:


I was in that blissful, dreamless sleep when I felt something large and heavy land on top of me. Too lazy to open my eyes, I reached a hand out to see what, or who, it was. My hand must have poked whoever it was in the eye because they protests, grabbing my hand in theirs.

"Hey! Watch that hand."

"Hey, get off of me," I complained back, recognizing the person's voice as Kendall's.

I felt the bed shift as he sat up on the edge, pulling my arms in an attempt to get me up too.

"Come on, lazy. Get up," he said, trying to yank me off the bed.

"This is the second time in less than twelve hours that you've woken me up. Do you have a death wish that I don't know about?" I remarked, sliding off of the bed to the floor.

"I had a good reason earlier," he replied, meeting my stare from where I laid on the floor.

Rolling my blue eyes, I was still unaffected. "Yeah, yeah. That's not the point."

"Come on, get up. Please! It's after 9:30. I have a game at noon. It takes you forever to get ready," he pleaded some more and I frowned, sticking my hands up toward him. He smiled thankfully and grabbed them, pulling me up to my feet.

"If I'm up, then you're going to go take a shower. You smell like a disgusting locker room, Knight."

He smirked, quickly pulling me into a hug so that my face was pressed against his t-shirt before I could stop him. I struggled against his grip but he wasn't weak. 'I blame hockey ,' I thought bitterly and finally managed to push him away. He laughed silently, striding out the door and into his own room across the hall. I huffed out an angry breath, slamming the door behind me.


I was still extremely mad at Kendall for waking me up and making me smell his body odor, although it wasn't as bad as I exaggerated. I knew he was only joking and that I shouldn't be this mad at him but I must have been PMSing because I refused to look at him on the ride to the rink and didn't give him a good luck hug before he went out to play.

I started to feel bad about not giving him his hug when he was getting beat around pretty badly. He was out of it today and it showed. The coach had him sit out for a few minutes to clear his head and I decided to go down and apologize. However, before I could say anything he beat me too it.

"Jace, I'm sorry about earlier. Please don't be mad at me anymore," he said, giving me the saddest puppy dog look that he could pull of with green eyes. It usually only worked with James and Logan, who had the big eyes for it. "I hate when you're mad at me, it messes everything up."

I smiled at him and gave him a small hug. "I'm not mad anymore. I promise. Now you've got your hug and you've got a clear head so go win this game back!" I laughed, pushing him up off of the bench and toward the door.

He turned back around before going back on the ice and said quietly," Thanks, Jacie."

I suddenly felt embarrassed and looked down, trying to hide the random blush that popped up on my cheeks.

I was going to need to fix this problem soon.


So I know this one is so much shorter than the original but this turned out to be a filler... And I wanted to incorporate hockey into it more.

Here's what I have as an outline for the next upcoming chapters. Correct me if I'm wrong:

Chapter 4: The boys announce that they're going to LA and the whole plane ride... mile high club thing with Carlos and James, she falls asleep on Kendall and Katie's still mad about leaving.

Chapter 5: They get to the Palm Woods, the closet is divided and Jacie and Kendall trip over each other putting things away.. Major flirting chapter.

Chapter 6: Meeting Camille, admitting that she likes Kendall.. Mostly a filler. Wayne Wayne and the whole bikini thing.

Chapter 7: Big Time Bad Boy, THE KISS SCENE!

Those are what I can remember. I'm not sure if chapter 4 was split into two or if it was all in one... If you remember please tell me. That means leave a review with your opinions of this chapter and what you can remember. :)