Chapter 2 (or is it actually 3?)- A Parallel Universe...Part II

After Mary Sue surprised everyone with her fantabulous wings, the gang started walking in silence. But everyone stopped when an advertisement flashed. "...you can trust me! wink" said the balding man on the screen. No one gave it much thought except for Rose.

"Um, Doctor? You said that parallel worlds are made by making choices, right?" she said in a meek voice. "Yes, why?" said the Doctor. "Well in this world, my dad's alive." said Rose. Everyone stopped except Mary Sue. While the Doctor was trying to convince Rose not to visit her long-lost father, Mary Sue had wandered into the nearest technology shop.

The first thing to catch her eyes was a pair of sparkly pink things that looking like a Bluetooth. "o hai excuse me?" she pondered, her melodic voice catching the fancy of a young employee. "Can I help you Miss...?" he asked sheepishly

"mis chan, but u can call mee mary sue! wat r the shinee pink tings? teh blootooths?"

"What? Oh these are the latest in Cybus Industries! Broadcast everything into your brain!"

"orly? how much?"

"$$$$. It's a lot, but definitely worth it, Miss Mary Sue!"

"no problm! im rich!1" she said as she handed him a thick wad of money.

She walked out in style with her new Cybus things. Her pink shimmering locks bounced behind her, framing her heart shaped face. Her mini skirt rode high on her long legs, and a form-fitting shirt showed off her curves. For such a young girl, she looked so mature!

While walking down an alley, she noticed a large white Cybus van drive by. With her x-ray vision she saw large, scary looking machines inside behind a veil. "teh noes! tey r gonna do sumthin BAD!1!one" she cried, and sprinted towards the van. She hid cleverly behind a shrub and watched.

Some old farts made some hobos go inside the van, and Mary Sue couldn't bear to watch the tragedy. She covered her ears and cried.

"You know, Susan's changed since the last time I met her. Back in the 1960s if I'm not mistaken! Really grown-up." said the Doctor to Rose while they served party guests little shrimps (While Mary Sue was busy buying and strutting, the Doctor and Rose snuck into Pete and Jackie Tylers' party disguised as waiters). "Um, Doctor? Didn't you say your granddaughter's name was Susan?" pondered Rose. The Doctor stared at her as if she was an idiot. "Yes...I just said that...?" he replied.

"I don't think that girl is your granddaughter."

"'Course she is! She said she was a time lord, and she knows who I am!"

"I don't know how she knows that stuff, but she's definitely not..."

Rose stopped short; an idea was forming in her mind. Mary Sue is obviously in "luv" with the Doctor, she thought, and I don't want him falling for her...best idea not to let him know..."

All of the sudden, Mary Sue burst in a panic (not to mention a very slimming pink, straplesss party dress with diamond jewelry) and found the Doctor. "doctr doctr! Teh cybus vans! Teh hav bad masheens! (FLUEF TIP: if you don't know what she's saying, say it aloud. Or ask me :3) she cried. Although she was quite frazzled, she had a chic windblown look to her hair.

"Wait what?" asked the Doctor, handing his serving tray over to Rose. "teh masheens! Teh wite van!" she cried louder, grabbing even more people's attention. Rose set her trays on the ground and followed the Doctor and Mary Sue down the hall to a computer.

While the Doctor was busy on the computer, Mary Sue brought up a tender situation. "so is dat ur dad?" she asked innocently. "Yeah, that's my dad."

"y r u so hapy 2 see him now?"

"You see, back on our own Earth...he's uh, not around anymore." Rose replied sadly

"orly? Did ur dad leev ur mum? She looks oldd"

"No he's dead you twit!" she cried

"o im sry. I thot ur mum got lazzy or fatt and he left her."

"WHAT?"

Just then, glass breaking was heard. A scream rang throughout the halls. The Doctor and Rose rushed over to where the scream was heard. A metal man, or as the Doctor called them, a Cyberman, was talking to the Prime Minister of Britain, and the Doctor was trying to negotiate a life.

Meanwhile, back on the computer, Mary Sue opened up a super-duper Top Secret page the held the answer to life to the metal men! A password was required, so she typed in her Universal-Access Code (sparklygirl12).

"Doctr! teh metal men! Teh r CYBERMEN!" she burst, not knowing that he was no longer in the room. She looked around then walked down the hall. People all around her were dead, and the Doctor (and annoying Rose) were no where to be found.

Through the broken window she found that the Doctor, Rose, and her father were surrounded by Cybermen! She rushed out to save her true love and Mickey Smith plus Friend appeared! They were about to shoot them with large guns when the spikey-blonde boy looked over and saw Mary Sue standing perfectly outside of harms way. He blushed then ran over to rescue her from no apparent harm.

The Cybermen then grabbed hold of all of our heroes. Boo Hoo. They all got electrocuted and fell.

"NOOOOOOOO!11one" Mary Sue cried, stunning the Cybermen. She ran over to the bodies of her once true love and his annoying friends, and decided to sacrifice 5 seconds of her life* to bring everyone back to life with her epic Time Lord skillz.

*The Doctor gave up 10 years of his life to bring a tiny piece of the TARDIS back to life.