Chapter 17 (page problems!)
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I woke up the next morning and had an urge to take a look at the names on the note again and then I saw the names for the children. In my very soul I
knew it, and then Jacob sat up in bed and yawned "why are you so excited? It woke me up you know." He smiled to make the words softer and less
rough than they sounded. Excitement shone out of me as I told him my discovery "Jacob I have finally found the right names for them!" he stared
blankly at me for a second and then realization found its way to his face "oh you meant the kids?" I rolled my eyes at his stupidity "yes dummy I have,
gee are you always this slow in the morning?" he just grinned cheekily at me and gave me a big sloppy wet kiss right on the mouth and said "well good
morning to you too, so what is the names?" I laughed and put my arms around his neck like I often did when we were alone and talked "well I have
decided on Faolan and Aliya, I mean Faolan means Wolf and Aliya means Defender and it fits them." I smiled and kissed him softly on the cheek. Jacob
smiled lovingly at me and held me closer to him while mumbling something that sounded like you're right. We did our morning routine and had
gotten Sara in the clothes when I instantly felt sick and I ran off to the bathroom. While one of pregnancy's less gracious sides showed, I felt a hand
hold back my hair so I wouldn't throw up on it. This was a simple gesture, yet it held so much meaning; he held my hair and patted me softly on the
back, Jacob was very patient and loving. He was always there when I was feeling bad. When I was done, I brushed my teeth and splashed some water
on my face. "Do you feel fine enough to go to school?" Jacob asked with a concerned look, for answer I smiled and answered; "I'm fine, it was just one
of pregnancy's less positive sides that showed up this morning, let's get some breakfast." I wasn't lying, I did truly feel fine. For a second I felt him
roaming my feelings, just to ensure that I really was ok and then he visibly relaxed as he was confirmed by our bond that I was absolutely healthy. In
school I sat down next to Leah "so have some names on your mind?" she asked me with a smile, Leah was so excited by the whole baby thing. It's not
that strange when you think about it; Leah was one of those who practically lived in our house along with Seth and some of the others. In fact the
whole pack was going crazy about the whole baby thing; Sam, Emily and Jacob and me where the first couples who got babies in this pack. Chuckling I
whispered; "Faolan and Aliya." Leah seemed to approve of those names by the happy grin on her face "they will fit them perfectly, Bella." We chatted
some more before class started. Suddenly Seth came bursting through the class door, right behind him was Jacob. Both looked worried as they
steered right towards us "we just got a call from Charlie, there is trouble on the home front and it seems like you girls are the only one who can bring
peace and order again. His words didn't make sense and because of that I think we all better head home NOW!" those words came from the mouth of
Jacob Black, my future husband and father of my unborn child. Right now he was taking the leader role though. A quick excuse was given to the
baffled teacher before we nearly ran off to the parking spot and jumped in our cars. Leah and Seth took Leah's new car while I hopped into Jacob's
car. Within moments we had left the parking spot and sped to the house.
We came to the house and saw a strange sight; Sara was sitting on the couch next to Joshua, in front of them was Charlie walking up and down the
floor with his hands on the back while frowning. Behind me I heard a gasp and I felt a tad lightheaded as I looked at the children; they were older!
Both looked like they were eight years old, but they had only looked like four years old in the morning! "Mom why am I older than this morning?" she
looked me into the eyes and suddenly I couldn't lie to her "Sara this have something to do with the change you went through yesterday. It will
probably be like what happened to Jacob when he became a werewolf." The power in her eyes faded and I had my free will back again. As I sat down
the doorbell rang and Seth went to answer the door "Bella we have visitors!" behind Seth there was a person I had never imagined to see in my own
house; Kayla. "Well I guessed that you needed some explanation." She smiled and sat down, facing Jacob and me "years ago, when the first Princess
was turned, there was a threat facing the Quileute wolves. They were vampires whom had a grudge against the werewolves, they had killed some of
their mates and as revenge the vampires had decided to kill the wolf pack. There was a great battle between the vampires and the werewolves; of
course the wolf pack had the demons on their side as they were loyal to the Princess, so they won the battle, but the Princess was sad over the killings
and therefore she made the prophecy; that the day the Princess over them all, was to come she would have children, those children was to grow up
fast so they could use their incredible powers fully. When the children had grown up they were to be able to live forever until the day that they
decided to leave the planet. That is why Sara is growing at this alarming pace, you must pull her out of the kindergarten immediately and wait until
they both are gown fully, then you must send her to a new school in Nature Ville; just like you, she will lose much of her human features and become
scarily beautiful. This growing will also affect Joshua as they are soul mates, like any other magical and living creature they have bonded with their
soul mate by magic." I gasped as I remembered the day Sara had stood in front of the house and had held Jacob's and my hand "it was the first day
Sara arrived, she held my hand and then took Jacob's hand in hers. That's when I secured the bond as a family without realizing it and thereby made
her supernatural." I half shouted in surprise and Kayla nodded, she took the word again; "after that very moment she would be able to find her soul
mate. By coincidence Joshua and Matthew were on their way towards Forks, of course they met and bonded instantly; because of both of them being
full of magic their bond is really strong. As a matter of fact it's just as strong as yours, but in a different way; Sara's transformation will affect Joshua
and like her, he will be immortal. The growing spurt has kicked in with him too; all his senses and powers will become stronger too. Jacob and Bella;
your descendants will have possible immortality and special powers, while others might gain abnormal strength/high speed. Oh and the same thing
count for Sara and Joshua. So congrats; you are the beginning of the royal line in the demon and werewolf world and maybe some others too, but
now I really have to leave or the food might get burned." And by that she vanished into the blue air.
After a moment of disturbance and confuse Emily, Leah, Kim and me got everybody to calm down. I phoned Matthew, he promised to come over
immediately and soon he stood on the front porch. When he saw the kids his eyes widened slightly (actually they looked like they would fall out of his
head any minute.) "Why are they both looking like they're ten? As far as I can recall I'm absolutely positive that they were four years old this very
morning." And then I showed him the whole sequence with Kayla. For a moment he sat down looking a bit overwhelmed, but then again; it's not
every day you send your kid to kindergarten and an hour later they are six years older. "Well I do hope that the clothes in Joshua's closet have
changed size by now, because he can't fit into the tuxedo I brought him, that's for sure." That was the first thing he said after a torturous silence. This
made us all crack up and lightened the tension in the room.
After getting ourselves under control we all went to Sara's room (well we were only three or four people in there all the time; otherwise it would
surely get claustrophobic because of the size of the boys) when we stepped in the room was a lot different; it was a teenager room. Just like Sara
preferred it, of course. The walls where a sandy color with posters hanging on the walls, her bed was a large king sized bed with nice blankets in a
light blue color. There was an empty bookshelf in the corner, next to it stood her drawers filled up with clothes in the right size for tonight where she
was supposed to be grown enough to be a teenager. On her bed I noticed a handwritten note, curiously I picked it up "read it mom" Sara told me. I
looked at her and read it out loud; " I forgot to tell you that when she reach the teenage years, her growing spurt will slow down and from then on
she will age normally until she reach 21 years. From then on she will not age, both count for Joshua – Kayla." A lighthearted smile found way to my
face "well at least we now know how old you will be before you stop aging." We relaxed for a few minutes until Leah did a double glance on her
watch and screeched; "HOLY CRAP! WE ONLY HAVE THREE HOURS TO GET READY IN GIRLS!!" and then she unceremoniously dragged all of us to my
room.
Have I ever mentioned that Leah have a clothes obsession that can match Alice Cullen?
After I put on my dress the others decided to put makeup on my face and do my hair; I let them do it knowing perfectly well that otherwise they
would go against me and tie me to the chair. After a while they were finished and proudly led me to the mirror in full body length. The image made
me gasp; in my place there was the most beautiful woman; the dress was olive colored with a few embroidered flowers, it was made of a silky
material "the original dress was made of polyester, but one of the demon born cloth professionals thought that it wasn't good enough for any of us,
so he changed the material to silk." Leah smiled apologetically to me and I laughed out loud at the story. My curly brown hair was put up in an elegant
bun. On my eyelids they had applied an olive green eye shadow and they had put on a lipstick that looked natural on me "wow you've done a great
job, thanks!" I smiled and hugged all of them, even Jasmine (she was just only getting used to living with all of us) then the others finished their
makeup and put on clothes. When we left we had spent two hours, so I had time to get Sara dressed and apply a tiny amount of makeup to her face
(but ONLY a little, she was 15 by now and my daughter.) when I walked in she was sitting on her bed next to Joshua, they were talking quite excitedly
together. None of them had put on their formal clothes yet. Firmly I got Joshua out of the room and made Sara put on her dress, it was a simple dress;
it was a soft rosy color, around the waist was a simple black bow, after applying some makeup she was done. As I stepped back a soft knock sounded
at the door "are you finished? Jacob says we have to go now!" it was Seth. When we walked out Seth smiled and said loudly; "Jake come over here,
you have a lady waiting here! Others might steal her if you don't hurry up!" just then Jacob and Joshua walked up the stairs to take a look at them and
the result was this; as Jacob laid his eyes at me he stopped moving at all and his jaw fell slack. Joshua who hadn't looked at us yet poked him and
asked what was wrong, when he got no response at all, he looked in the same direction and as soon he saw Sara he was doing the same; he was
ogling her. Sara looked confusedly at me and I whispered ginning; "it's girl power. Joshua is deeply in love with you and that is girl power to look this
good." Sara giggled a bit and we moved both over to our men "wow you look good." Jacob mumbled into my ear and had a goofy look on his face
when he looked at me, then we both looked at Sara and Joshua and nearly doubled over with laughter; Sara stood in front of Joshua and waved her
hand in front of his face, trying to get in contact with him. That obviously didn't go very well as he was still staring at her with a dreamy `fallen in love´
face. All there was missing was him drooling over her. Sara looked frustrated at him "Hey Joshua wake up! We're going to be late!" she said loudly
and shook him, finally he snapped back to reality "huh? Oh yeah the party. By the way you look really beautiful Sara." He sent her a big smile that
melted her heart, well that's what it looked like from over here. We walked down the stairs and looked at the others who waited for us "finally, I was
beginning to think you had decided not to show up." Charlie sent us a annoyed glance and looked into the mirror with a pleased smile; earlier today
we had found a nice suit for him in Nature Ville. That new suit thing was important, because well the other suit was downright ugly. Imagine a white
suit that was by accident washed with a pair of red boxer shorts, the result: A pink suit. This was just too much for me; I would not let him go in that
suit, so the guys hurried down to a store and bought a stylish black suit to him.
When we arrived at the party/ ball people did something weird; they bowed to us and high ranked persons were almost tripping over their own feet
to shake hands with us. There were photographers all over the place and they surrounded us immediately. I felt like a superstar all of sudden. When
we got to the table everyone stood up for us and only sat down when I did. The first meal was served and there was chattering at all the tables. When
the waiters carried out all the dishes, Jacob and I stood up "we have a great announcement to make; we are expecting twins." The response was
applauds of happiness from the whole gathering. Some were shouting positive remarks, others cheered and some whistled in joy. After the meals
where done, people came over to congratulate us and news reporters were asking for comments. Then there was dancing for a long time and of
course I danced with Jacob and some of the others from the pack, Sara danced a lot with Joshua, but she also danced a bit with the pack members.
While Seth and Sara danced, Joshua sat down next to me "well Joshua, have you gotten any feelings for Sara?" Embry asked him going straight to the
core like usual. As we all expected Joshua went bright red "maybe." He said clearly avoiding eye contact with us so we didn't see that the answer was
a yes, this made all of us smile knowingly to each other, we were perfectly clear of the blossoming love between them. I felt an arm around my waist
and a husky voice whispered; "may I have this dance, my lovely future wife?" I turned my head and looked into the smiling face of Jacob, I chuckled
and answered; "yes you may, my dear." He took my hand and we danced like they do in a fine ball. After my transformation as I call it I have gotten a
better balance and I'm a lot more gracious so I have learned to dance and that's without tripping at all. It was very late when we went home and I
think that some of the guys would have a massive headache tomorrow morning, when I entered the house I made buckets float into every room of
the ones who seemed to be most drunk. We all said goodnight and went to bed.
In our room Jacob helped me with the dress as the zipper of course was in the back, before that I had helped Sara with her dress. Sara was absolutely
sober, she had only been drinking a very little amount of alcohol and from then on cola or water; she had spent most of her time dancing with Joshua,
suddenly she had turned and looked me in the eye, wearing a serious expression, but she also looked a bit unsure and slightly hopeful "mom how do
you know if you're in love with somebody?" this made me smile and I told her how I felt "Sara my situation is a bit special but so is yours if it's the guy
I think it is. Whenever I look at Jacob I feel like I'm about to explode with happiness, he makes me feel safe and happy and I know that we belong
together, is that how you feel?" relief crossed her face and she nodded happily "is it Joshua that have captured your heart?" I asked her smiling
slightly; she blushed and nodded with a huge smile. In the bedroom I told Jacob about this whole sequence before we went to bed, for a good night of
sleep.
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