Im sorry if you think my story is lame. Cuz I think it is. Im going to keep writing and see if my writing gets any better. I hope it does! but if it dont plz! review and tell me! this is my 1st story and so far its ok but i think it could be better. soon im going to start a new story based of the book the host. sorry! i babbl when im nervous...anyway review review review! I dont care if its mean just review! Thanks! Oh! And my spelling sucks! but i am getting better! so just work with me here. ;)
Max POV
"What was that for?" He said with a smile on his face. I steped away and let out my wings as far as they could streach.
"I'm sorry...I just need some time alone," I wispered. I let myself drop of the edg of the cliff and flew as fast as I could to a cave I found with Fang. It's on the side of the cliff a few miles away from the house. Flying as fast as I could made me think of the old days. The flock and I flying away from earasers at about 200mph. Teaching Ari some moves he didnt know (that didnt take long cuz he knew a lot from when we were fighting eachother). Thats when the flashbacks hit. Ari! My little brother! Gone? I just cant believe that he is really gone. I tought him how to read and write his name in a cell this lady who said she was my mom put us in. I miss him so much I just cant stand it! I see Fang and Ari telling jokes to eachother, laughing and having a good time. More flashbacks. This time they hit harder then ever befor. Images of Fang and Ari flooded through my so fast and so hard it caused me to put my wings in and drop like a rock. The images wouldnt stop and kept hitting me harder and harder till I just couldnt stand it anymore! I screamed at the top of my lungs. Trying to let out all of the pain in that scream was not enough! I could see the ground comeing closer and closer. Panic rushed through me. My wings would not open! It felt as if someone had guled my wings to my body! The images did not let up. Fang. Ari. Fang. Ari. Over and Over. Not stoping. Not holding back their blows. They came faster and harder! Another scream, but this one was for Ari, Fang, and my life. I'm falling faster and faster and cant help it! Seeing the ground come at me faster made me think of all the things I will miss. I will never get to see Fang again. I wont ever see my sister. I wont see my mom. Jeb (falling to my death makes me want to see him). Iggy. Angel. Gazzy. Nudge. Dylan (I just kissed him! So yes I will miss him!). All the people I care about. Gone. In a matter of seconds. "Voice where are you when I need you?" I said alowed. I closed my eyes tight not wanting to see it comeing. The next thing that came to mind was; is this going to hurt? If not, is it over? To scared to find out I kept my eyes shut. Wings still not wanting ot open. Hands. Arms. Holding me. I'm flouting! I stopped falling! I'm dead. I know it. I'm dead. Well at least it didnt hurt. Too scared to open my eyes and see Hell, I kept them shut and tight. Turning my mind over to the bad things. Fang. Ari. My Family. Tears flooding my eyes now. Not being able to stop them from comeing! I baried my face in a chest, and cried my eyes out. The way this person-thing was holding me felt familier. He smelt the same way I remembered. But this cant be him! I'm dead. And the only way this could be him was if he was dead with me. But that cant be. And then I heard him.
"Max, it's okay. Everythings going to be alright," It was that same deep sweet voice just as I remembered. Hearing it made me cry harder.
"Max, I've never seen you cry so much. I understand if you never forgive me," He said this with worry in his voice and I couldnt stand not opening my eyes to see who really was holding me. As I started opening my eyes I relized that I couldnt. I knew it wasnt him because if it was he would have told me to open my eyes so he could see my perfect eyes. But he didnt. The Fang I know would kiss me till sun down. This one just held me close and said this.
"I'm now going to lay you on the ground, Max. When I do I want you to keep your eyes closed and fall asleep. when you wake up your going to be in the cave we found together. I wont be here when you wake up, but when you do your going to go about your life befor any of this ever happened. And Max, I need you to do one more thing for me," As he said he gently put me more he talks the more he sounds like the real Fang. He seemed to be waiting for an answer so I resonded.
"What is it?" My voice cracked as I said it and he flinched when I talked.
"I need you to be more careful and remember that I will always love you," He said this slow. I could hear the crack in his voice like he was about to cry. But when he said 'I will always love you,' that was when I knew it was him. The thought filled me with joy! I shot my eyes open to see the opening of the cave and a black wing! Just barly did I see it! As much as I wanted to get up i couldnt. My legs and arms felt like noodles and my wings were aching from holding them in so tight from the fall. The hope drained just as fast as it had came and I began to cry once more. I fell into a deep sleep and woke to the sound of...