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Here's Chap 11 of Taken Away. I'm so sorry that I didn't upload yesterday, 'cause in the morning I wasn't happy with the number of reviews & then when I got an amount that I was happy with, then my internet decided to drop out! :( It's still not the best today, but at least it stays connected long enough for me to go to a website. (Ps, Who's that Girl readers, I'm not happy with the number of reviews yet...)

Currently in Australia I'm on school holidays, but school goes back on Monday. Between school, work & having a life I'll update the best I can! But likely I'll be able to update one of my stories every night. :D Yay!

Anyway, review & let me know what you think of this chapter! :)

Enjoy the chapter and please review! :) Again, I won't upload unless I'm happy with the amount of reviews...

Chapter Eleven: Unlikely Snaps

Bella's POV

23 hours before

Cleo had just called Emma, when we heard some murmured speech & stirring sounds coming from next to Cleo.

We turned to see Lewis stirring & awaking from his slumber.

Cleo gave him a quick good morning kiss & greeting.

While I skipped the kissing part, I too greeted Lewis saying "Good morning Sleeping Beauty!"

The next thing I knew, Will snapped at me, looking really distressed, shouting at me saying "DON'T SAY THAT BELLA!"

I was completely dazed.

Will was never like this!

"Sorry, what's wrong?" I asked as Will put his elbows on his legs and held his head, looking even worse.

He was really distressed over something, and I felt awful for bringing it on, even though it was for some reason, unknown to me.

Cleo gave a small gasp, before whispering quietly to me, "Rikki said that to him."

I started to say "What?" before I put my hand over my mouth, remembering when I first met Will at Mako Island with the girls, that Rikki said that to him when he was waking up after being knocked out by the tentacle. I'm surprised that he even remembers her saying it.

I put my arm around Will's shoulders comfortingly & half hugged him. I whispered to him "I am so sorry." He just hugged me and rested his head on my shoulder as I rubbed his back.

We all stayed as we were, until a little over three hours later, I got up to go get some food for the mob, when just as I stood up, the doctor came out and walked over to us.

He greeted us before he said "Rikki's still unconscious, but her chances are looking good. You can go into her room now" before he pointed to a door, which inside the room, held my best friend.

We all got up & rushed over to the door, before Will -who had now calmed down- said "What about Zane?"

We all considered the question for a minute, before I said "I reckon we should leave him" but I looked at the others for their opinions.

"Yeah, she's not conscious yet and he needs to sleep, but we can check on him every now & then" Lewis said.

We all nodded in agreement, before we took a deep breath, preparing ourselves for what lay inside the room...

Poor Will! Next chapter they get to see Rikki! Yay... although she's unconscious still.

Will Rikki wake up soon? Will she ever wake up?

Have a good day & review please! :)

CheddarFetta