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Chapter Twelve: Strong & Fragile

Bella's POV

The 4 of us mentally prepared ourselves while we slowly walked towards the door.

We all walked together, holding hands, supporting each other & being there for one another.

I was holding tightly onto Will & Cleo's hands that were either side of me, and I was getting firm grasps back. Will and Lewis both had one free hand, with either mine or Cleo's holding onto the other, but Will reached for the door handle, and slowly turned it.

When the door opened, we took slow, small steps into the room. Our grasps intensified & tightened as we neared her bed. Slowly our hands moved to each others shoulders, forming a semi group hug.

As soon as I saw her, my eyes filled with tears.

It was a moment that would likely haunt me for years to come.

It was really distressing seeing Rikki lying on the white hospital, covered in bruises, cuts, scratches, bandages & dried blood.

It was made it even worse knowing that someone who was so strong, was lying there now looking so weak & fragile.

I looked at the others and saw their eyes & cheeks too were filled with tears, mirroring my own.

Together we stood there crying, hoping that Rikki would wake up.


How awful! :( Is Rikki going to wake up? Will she be okay? Remember 27 reviews!

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