Hey everyone! Sorry it's a really short chap, but I've been really busy and I will be for the next few days too, but I'll try my hardest to write and update. I've a Japanese Assignment due on Tuesday which I still have to write 5 or 6 pages for, I've got a test on Tuesday which I need to learn for, I've got a few other things I need to finish on top of any other homework I get during the week. Oh the joys of school! Also, my Aunty had a baby yesterday (Welcome Ellie!) so we're going to be seeing her a lot this week and she lives almost an hour away. Then there's work which is another pain! So, I'll be trying my hardest, but don't blame me or think I've ditched the stories! I will definetley be updating some of them this weeks, just maybe not everyday like normal.
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There was several reviews about the boys & their reactions, so this chapter Lewis & Will come back from getting lunch and they find out, and then in chapter 22, Zane will be told. Eeek!
Also, there's been several requests for 'The Girl With Everything' to be uploaded, and I just thought I'd let you know, that I still am planning to upload it, but I've already got 3 stories on the go, a song-fic and a Packed to the Rafters fic too! I also am planning to upload a Zikki story soon as a competition prize for fantasylunargirl and then I'm writing a story that she gave me the idea for, but The Girl With Everything, WILL be up soon! :D
One last thing, I've made story posters or trailer posters for my stories and I was wondering if anyone knew a website I could put them on for you to see? Thanks!
Anyway, enjoy the chapter & please review! Gimme a minimum of 78 and I'll give you Chap 22! :D
Have a great day/night
CheddarFetta xxooxx
Chapter Twenty One: Like Never Before
Bella's POV
Previously on Taken Away - I turned my head back around and this huge sadness cloud of sadness over took my entire body.
I'd lost my best friend.
Cleo, Emma & I walked back into the waiting room at sat down on those same, damn plastic chairs. Some of the doctors that got us to leave the room were trying to comfort us, but I couldn't do, or say anything other than just cry.
I felt this huge aching pain & sadness inside of me. I never knew the true pain involved when someone you love dies, but now I know that this is truly how it's described.
I was looking at my feet and crying, when I was interrupted by a male voice say "What's happened? What's wrong? Why aren't you in the room?"
I looked up at my boyfriend, my eyes were filled with tears and they were probably red, but right now, I didn't care in the least how I looked.
"She's gone. She's never coming back" I said, choking my words out and giving Will one broken look, before fresh tears filled my face, and I started crying like I'd never cried before.
Will's mouth dropped open and his hands let go of the tray holding plates & cups full of food and drink.
The plates shattered on the floor, making me jump. Will just stood there, not moving at all.
Lewis put his tray onto a table and rushed from next to Will over to Cleo. I looked to my left and saw Cleo crying into Lewis' shoulder and Emma, who was sitting in between Cleo and I, wiping tears out of her eyes. I turned and saw Will still standing there, still doing nothing, before he walked like a zombie to the seat next to me.
I wrapped my arm around my boyfriend's stomach and he just held my hand, crying.
I heard sniffles from next to me and I looked at Emma, who was crying on her own, next to Cleo & Lewis who were crying together too.
I put my arm around Emma's shoulders, thinking she had no-one to comfort her and it would be hard on her own.
She gave me a small smile at my gesture. Cleo saw what I did, before doing the same to Em, putting her arm that wasn't attached to Lewis around her.
The five of us were all connected and cried together at the loss of a friend.
How the hell were we going to tell Zane that his Girlfriend had died?
There we are! 3 chaps left! :( Should I do a sequel, I have the ideas, I just need the interest! :D Let me know 'cause I'm more than happy to.
Remember 78 reviews and I'll update! :)
xxooxx CheddarFetta