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Chapter Twenty Two: Another Shock
Bella's POV
An hour passed of sitting in the waiting room and crying. Us girls all still had our arms around each other, with Will in my other side and Cleo on hers.
In my current position, I was leaning against Will, with my head then rested on his shoulders, and my arm was around Em.
My head was faced towards the right, so I didn't see him coming.
"What's wrong?" I heard a male voice say from behind me. I looked around and saw Zane standing there puzzled like Will & Lewis were an hour ago.
I looked at Will to see what he was thinking, before I then turned and looked at Emma, Cleo & Lewis.
Lewis stood up silently and walked over to Zane. He was so quiet that when he reached him, I couldn't hear what he was saying, but I saw him put his arm on Zane's shoulder and next thing I saw Zane's face drop, before he rushed over to the nurses bay.
As Lewis turned around I saw his eyes were all teared up from having to break the news to the person who would probably get hit the hardest.
"Where's Rikki Chadwick? I need to see her!" Zane said shaking visibly.
"She died an hour and a half ago. I'm sorry" the nurses said but Zane just walked away, rushing over to the room where she was before and he just walked in. Seconds later he came out and I could see his mouth moving, but I couldn't hear the words.
He walked over to the seat next to Lewis and sat down leaning his arms on his legs and rapidly running his hands through his hair and I realized what he'd been saying was "No, no no."
I felt water trickling down my own cheeks too at seeing the impact of Rikki's death for others too. It was just so sad.
Little did I know that a new surprise would be revealed and throw my world upside down and make it even harder to heal the pain.
Time went by, but I'm not sure how long exactly. The room was silent except for the occasional sniffle.
I felt my eyelids closing after they'd felt like they were carrying the weight of the world on them for so long, but I was interrupted by noise. I opened my eyes and watched as Zane was searching through his pockets trying to get something.
I felt Will's head move to locate the noise too, but I just continued watching what he was doing.
Finally Zane pulled his hand out and stopped searching, but I couldn't see what he was holding. Was it his phone maybe?
He opened the palm of his hand and revealed a small box, opening it using his other hand.
I gasped, putting my hand over my mouth and I felt tears stream down my face as I saw the gold banded ring, with a large diamond in the middle.
I could feel water drip onto my head from Will's tears, but I didn't mind at all right now.
I could hear Cleo & Emma crying too and Zane just slowly said "We going to go on a date the night of the accident."
I was crying heavily now and I heard the other girls doing the same. I felt sick to my stomach with the heart-wrenching pain of the last few hours.
I'd lost my best friend and I found out her boyfriend was going to propose to her. It was like something off a movie, but there was no stop button and life wasn't going to go back to normal at the end of the credits.
Ahhhhh! That was so sad to write! Poor Rikki & Zane :( :( :( Soooo 88 reviews and I'll update! Also please check out 'CheddarFetta' on Youtube and comment on my H2o vids! :D
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