October 26, 1985

8:10 p.m.

Marty's POV

Doc drove up to my house and Annie and I got out.

Doc said, "If you two need me, we'll be at my lab, dismantling this thing."

I nodded and responded, "Right, Doc."

We closed the door and Doc drove off. Annie looked disoriented.

She mumbled, "Something seems wrong here. It's weird."

I looked around myself and got over to the fence. I tried to open it but it was locked.

I mumbled, "What the hell?"

Annie perked up at this and responded, "This is what I mean. You're fence has never been locked for as long as I've known you and that's a long time."

I started to climb over of the fence and instructed her, "Wait here. If I'm not back in ten minutes, then that means everything is fine."

I hopped over the fence, opened my bedroom window, snuck into my bedroom, and someone was in my bed. It was black girl about twelve or thirteen years old. She started to scream and her father came in, with a baseball bat. He started to yell at me to get out of his house. My heart skipped a beat. Annie was right. Something was indeed wrong.

I ran out the house and yelled to Annie, "Run Annie!"

She shot me a curious look but saw the black man coming out of the house and ran off after me. We stopped in front of several wrecked cars.

I asked, "Annie, what in the world is going on?"

Annie shrugged and answered, "I don't know but we better find a newspaper. Maybe Doc and Timmy were wrong and we're in the wrong year."

I nodded and we walked off to other house. I picked up the paper on the steps, sat down, and the date said, 'October 26, 1985'.

Annie perked up at this and responded, "We are in the right year!"

Just then, we heard a rifle.

We heard a voice saying, "Okay, put the paper down you two."

We turned around, saw Strickland, and got up.

I said, happily, "Mr. Strickland! You have no idea how happy we are to see you! It's us sir. Marty and Annie!"

Mr. Strickland aimed his rifle at us responded, "Who?"

Annie waved her hands and answered, franked, "Marty McFly and Annie Baines, sir!"

Mr. Strickland gave us a curious stare and responded, "Well, I don't know you two are and you two look like a slackers."

Annie perked up and asked, "Wait a minute, Mr. Strickland. You mean you don't recognize us?"

I responded, "You gave us detention last week!"

Mr. Strickland gave us curious stares and explained, "Last week? The school burnt down six months ago! Now, I'm going to give you two ten seconds to get off my property with your guts in tack!"

Just when Annie and I were going to try and make a break for it, a car came over and started shooting at Mr. Strickland. We all took cover and Mr. Strickland went chasing after the gang, calling them slackers. Annie and I took off like a shot and ended up in downtown. We looked down and saw the sign and it read, 'Hell Valley'. We bumped into someone and it was Red.

He slurred, "Watch where you're going you drunken walkers!"

Annie and I said, in unison, "Red!"

We looked around and saw a bunch of bikers. We also saw a hotel where City Hall is supposed to be. A giant sign above the hotel read, in big letters, 'Biff Tannen's Paradise'.

Annie blurted out, "Biff Tannen? What the hell is going on?"

I shook my head and answered, "I don't know, Annie but we better check this out."

Annie's POV

We went over to a museum where we saw a video.

The announcer spoke and said, "Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the Biff Tannen Museum, dedicated to Hill Valley's number one citizen, and America's greatest living folk hero, the one, the only, Biff Tannen. Of course, we've all heard the legend, but who is the man? Inside you will learn how Biff Tannen became one of the richest and most powerful men in America."

The T.V. showed a clip of Biff driving away from a big house with a Ferrari.

Marty perked up at this and asked, "When the hell did he get a Ferrari?"

The narrator continued, "Learn the amazing history of the Tannen family, starting with his great grandfather, Buford "Mad Dog" Tannen, the fastest gun in the west."

The screen changed to a picture of a man with long greasy hair and a cowboy hat.

"See Biff's humble beginnings and how a trip to the races on his 21st birthday made him a millionaire overnight," the narrator stated.

The T.V. screen changed to a picture of a newspaper. Biff was on the front page throwing money up in the air under the headline HILL VALLEY MAN WINS BIG AT RACES!

"Share in the excitement of a fabulous winning streak that earned him the nickname, "The Luckiest Man on Earth". Learn how Biff parlayed that lucky winning streak into the vast empire named Biffco. Discover how in 1979 Biff successfully lobbied to legalize gambling, and turned Hill Valley's dilapidated Courthouse into a beautiful casino-hotel," the narrator continued.

Next popped up a picture of another newspaper reading GAMBLING LEAGALISED in big bold letters.

"I just want to say one thing - God bless America," a video of Biff said.

I rolled my eyes and responded, "Oh brother. He sure does think highly of himself, doesn't he?"

Marty nodded as the narrator continued, "Meet the women who shared in his passion as he searched for true love…"

It showed a couple pictures of women with him. The T.V. cut to a picture of Aunt Lorraine.

"...and relive Biff's happiest moments, as in 1973 he realized his lifelong dream by marrying his high school sweetheart, Lorraine Baines-McFly," the narrator commented.

The T.V. went on to show a clip of Aunt Lorraine and Biff leaving the church. Aunt Lorraine looks unhappy and you can tell she was forced into the marriage. Biff leans over and kisses her. Some news reporters run up to him and ask how he's feeling.

"Third time's the charm," Biff replied simply.

Marty screamed at the top of his lungs, "NO!"

I didn't even notice that Biff goons were behind me and knocked me out. The last thing I saw was Marty being knocked over the head too.

Timmy's POV

Dad and I got to his garage. I got out and Einstein seemed hesitant to go in his own house.

I went over to the dog and asked, "Einy, what's wrong?"

Dad perked up and told me, "Timmy, I think something is seriously wrong here."

I got up off of the ground and followed dad into his garage.

We both got in and we both gasped at the sight.

Dad said, "Great Scott!"

We started to gather up dad's papers. I picked up a paper and read the headline. My uncle was on the front page. The headline read: DOCTOR BROWN AND SON COMMITTED. I gasped at the headline, in a world of shock.

I stammered, "D-dad, you should see this."

Dad took the paper and saw what I saw.

He said, "Great Scott!"

He looked like he was in horrible place. I could tell and I couldn't blame him. After all, we were both committed!

I told him, "We better find out what's going on and fast."

He nodded, still in shock.

I took Einy and said, "Come on, Einy. Let's get out of this spooky place."

Einy followed me and we got into the De Lorean and dad drove off. We got to the library and it was all boarded up. When we got there, we went into the library by un-boarding the front door. We got in.

I asked, "Okay, what should we be looking for?"

Dad answered, "Anything that can help us figure out what the hell is going on."

I nodded as I went through some newspaper archives. A few seconds later, dad called me.

He said, "Timmy, come here!"

I came over to my dad and he pointed to an article. The headlines read: HILL VALLEY MAN WINS BIG AT RACES! I looked at the picture of the man and dad gasped.

He said, "Great Scott, that's Biff Tannen!"

I asked, "But, how can this be happening?"

That's when I noticed something in Biff's pockets.

I turned to my dad and told him, "Dad, take a look in his pockets!"

He perked up, looked in his pockets, and responded, "You're right! There is something there!"

He messed up my hair and told me, "Good work."

I smiled, fixed my hair, and responded, "Thanks."

I picked up a magnifying glass and saw the almanac that Marty had.

Dad saw this too and responded, "Damn, he has the almanac! We've got to find Marty and Annie and let them know what's going on!"

I pointed out, "But, we don't know where they are!"

I accidently dropped the archives and picked them up. But, the page I picked it up on was a terrifying headline. The headline read: GEORGE MCFLY MURDERED. 'Mr. McFly…is dead? Great Scott and I bet any money that Biff is somehow behind it,' I thought.

I told my dad, "Never mind. I know where they might have gone."

He asked, "Where?"

I answered, still scared out of my mind, "Oak Park cemetery."

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