(Sara is crying over in a corner of the room. Awen opens a door and walks in)
Awen: Sara, we might have a prob- (notices Sara crying and runs over) whats wrong? what happened?
Sara: n-no one r-reviewed on my story at all! (cries and buries face in Awen's shirt)
Awen: (completely freaked out and has no idea what to do) there, there?
Sara: why? don't they like me? is it something i did? why-
(door is busted down and Axel walks into the room)
Axel: Sara! you had better have a good reason for taking my Roxas away!
(far off voice in the distance) your Roxas!(Sora, Riku and Roxas run into the room and try to stop Axel from killing authoress) Axel, if you kill her, it will never be fixed!
(Sara suddenly glares at readers) Sara: and it won't be fixed until i get at least one review. so as punishment for not reviewing, i made this chapter really short. Awen, disclaimer.
(Awen opens mouth to argue, but sees Sara's look and closes it.) Awen: Sara doesn't own Kingdom hearts, or any mentioned characters or places. please review! enjoy!
Parings: established SoraxRiku, soon to be RoxasxAxel, PencexOlette, and any others i can think of! if you have suggestions, please review! anything involving any character except those already named, are welcome!
The Usual Place, Twilight Town, Same day:
when the blond next opened his eyes, the first thing he saw was two hazel eyes above him. He shouted in surprise and moved backwards quickly; falling off the couch he was laying on with a muffled groan. He closed his eyes for a moment, trying to assess the damage before he looked back over at the person who had been leaning over him. It was a tall blond boy wearing camouflage pants and shoes was staring at him. the other boys blond hair was gelled back, like he had just come out from a high wind. he was wearing a black tee shirt with a white skull and crossbones over it, covered by a short gray jacket. he wore a necklace with a yellow "x" charm on it, and he was looking down on the new boy with confused hazel eyes. Behind him was larger boy with brown hair, and a pretty brunette girl. "Are you alright?" the girl asked kindly, stepping forward as the blond on the floor inched away.
"Who are you?" the boy asked in confusion, slowly getting up and standing awkwardly.
"Oh," the fatter boy said, and immediately the blond focused sharp blue eyes on him. He shuffled a little uneasily. "My name is Pence, and this is Hayner and Olette. We found you unconscious in the we brought you here. Who are you?" the boy who called himself Pence was slightly large, with brown eyes. his short black hair was pushed up by a black and gray headband, making it look spiky. his shoes were white and blue sneakers, partially covered by long blue jeans. his tee shirt went all the way to his knees, and was red with white and black designs on it. over the collar of his shirt he was wearing a purple bandanna. he seemed like the kind of person that was always smiling and ready to help.
The blond turned thoughtful for a second, and then seemed to panic. "I-I don't remember. The only thing that I remember is waking up in the street there, and then being here. I don't know how I got here." The girl, Olette, stepped forward and put a comforting hand on the panicking blond's shoulder. she looked slightly sunburned, and her dark brown hair was around her neck and spiked up slightly, the bangs falling in her eyes. she was wearing a orange tank top with white flowers on it, khaki pants that went past her knees, orange socks, and white and yellow sneakers with black laces covering her feet. she had on a blue bracelet and matching necklace with only one bead. her eyes showed kindness and concern as she looked at the strange blond.
"Sh, its okay we'll help you," she continued to say soothing things until he relaxed. he looked around at his surroundings for the first time. the ceiling was made of poles to let in light, and most of the walls were brick and concrete. the couch he had been laying on was old and green. there were boxes and old chairs placed in random areas, and a hole leading to a nearby ally was partially blocked by a black fence with a open door in it.
The other blond also stepped forward now that the one with blue eyes was calm."Okay, do you remember anything except that? Anything at all?"
The one with blue eyes shook his head slowly. "No," he whispered looking down, trying to control his panic, "Nothing."
"Well," said the one called Pence, "he must of gotten into Twilight town somehow, sense this is such a small town that if he had been here long we would of met. Maybe we should show him around town, see if he remembers anything or someone around here knows him."
"Great idea, pence!" said Olette excitedly, and the brunette blushed bright red, though she didn't notice.
Hayner rolled his eyes at the other two. "Yeah let's get going!" they were moving towards the door when Hayner turned back. "Hey, do you have a name, kid?"
For some reason the word 'kid' struck a cord with him, and suddenly he was flooded with knowledge, and memories that were just out of reach. He could just barely remember flashes of bright steel and searing flames in a dark place, then one word being shouted just before darkness overtook him "Roxas," he said slowly, as if savoring it. "I think my name is Roxas."
Axel: (begging) please, please Sara! i want to see Roxas!
Sara: (sigh) I'll think about it. (Axel cheers and runs over to hug Roxas) alright people, same deal as last time, no new chapters for a week unless i get five reviews. in fact, if i don't get any reviews, i might just keep Axel out of the story longer!
Axel; (looks up form making out with Roxas) So please review!
Authors note: i am currently looking for a Beta, so if anyone wants to do it, send me a message!