Jc okay this is well the second chapter so R&R PLZ!

JJ Of course this is the 2nd chapter

Jc I was just-

Jenny please don't get into another fight…

Jc we're not going to fight

JJ yes we are

Jc why must you always disagree with me

JJ cause I simply can…

(Both the writer (Jc) and apparently the 'friend' (JJ) get in a fight)

Jenny*sighs* please continue to read the story as I settle them down

Disclaimer I'll say this very clear; me no owny the game…y

Torn was glad that he was now in the vacant atmosphere of the Pumping Station. Though he wasn't all glad for he didn't know the station well. The last time he set foot here was back in his training days. Thankfully he remembered a decent amount to not get lost and to find the vault.

As he made towards the up and down pumps he heard a twig snap. He knew the vacant atmosphere wouldn't last. He quickly swiveled to see who was behind him to find that 15 of those green creatures were looking right at him. Torn mentally cursed at himself for not bringing any weapons. Even with the war over some of the buggers survived. Torn had no other choice but run since he couldn't fight in a dress. Torn shortly found it hard to run for he kept tripping and falling. After falling for the 20th time he realized that he wasn't getting attacked. As he sat on the ground he looked at the green creatures. They just sat there watching him with what it seems with giant grins. Torn felt inside they were making a joke out of him.

"Aren't you going to attack me!?" Torn yelled. His only response was some sort of noise. Torn couldn't believe it. He was being laughed at by some dumb creatures. With an angry grunt torn stood up and quickly went towards to the moving pumps.

After a while he finally reached the top surface.' Not only can't you fight or run in a dress you can't entirely jump as well' Torn thought as he turned left to find that he had to jump to the other edge.

"Great" muttered Torn as he took a couple steps back to have a running start. Torn made the jump but landed on his face mostly. As he muttered to himself he walked and made another jump but this time landed on his hands and knees. He began to see that this was easy just make some jumps and that's it. Though he was proven wrong when he reached the square tube metal which turns every 5 seconds. He was hoping to remember another way but only remembered that there was none. He waited until the metal turned then once it did he jumped. Before he could make the other jump he tripped on the fabric of the dress. He lay flat as the metal vibrated signaling that it will turn. Torn didn't get up in time and fell in the mud below. He lay there for a moment wondering hoping that this wasn't happening. After a while he finally got up as he did he mentally cursed at a certain orange fuzz. As he stood there his little audience returned laughing at him more.

"Don't you have anything better to do!?" Torn yelled at them with annoyance. He couldn't believe he just yelled at some dumb green creatures. Torn then realized he was a little shorter than he thought.

"Oh no…" Torn said a he looked down. Like he thought he was in quicksand. He at first just stood there asking himself why the Precursors hate him. Afterwards he tried to move but only sunk in deeper. He struggled some more until he saw a rope that was attached to the metal wall next to him. He reached for it until he saw one of green creatures come towards the rope. Torn was actually happy that the creature came. Maybe he came to help… Torn thought but once again proven wrong. Instead of helping like Torn hoped the little critter took the rope in its mouth and pulled it farther from Torn. With that done he went back to the others laughing.

Torn's eye twitched and he just stood there. After a while he reached for the rope but it was too far for his reach. As he began to lose hope he remembered a documentary he once saw. A man was in his position and he basically just moved in the quicksand slowly and eventually made it out. Torn did what the man had done and made it out.

Standing on the edge of the quicksand he looked around. He was lost. Torn decided to go to the left and began walking. He walked until he realized he was back where he started; at the two moving pumps. Torn grumbled to himself as he jumped on a pump. Once again he did the same routines until he reached the moving platform where he had fallen. This time Torn decided to run to the other side non-stop till he reached it hopefully the surface wouldn't move. When the surface moved Torn made a dash for it. Right before the surface moved Torn made it to the other side. He was more confident in the other jump but his confident slowly crumbled when he reached the surfaces where electricity was scanning through it. Thankfully this one only had one electricity wire going through so it was a little easy. Surprisingly Torn made it through without getting electrified. Though the same could not be said when he went through the surface where there was two wires going through. After getting electrified Torn had to just walk up to the valve and turn it.

"Finally!" Torn exclaimed as he turned the valve off then on again.

On the way back he had fallen on the quicksand once again. Due to the fact that he said many colorful words(not to mention illegal) I will not describe what he had done or repeat what he had said since this is K+ rated…

(Back to Naughty Ottsel)

Torn finally made it to the bar covered with the sand from the quicksand. Everyone covered their mouths so they wouldn't laugh.

"I finished the dare." Torn said with a fake calm smile.

"So you took the shortcut or the long way?" Jak asked without laughing.

"What shortcut?" Torn asked with his eye twitching a little.

"There's a shortcut where you go to Haven's Forest jump some jumps and you're at the valve." Jak answered as if it was the most obvious thing in the world.

"There was a shortcut?" Torn asked again in disbelief.

"Yup" Jak answered.

Torn just stood there saying nothing. The gang just stared at him. Finally Torn moved to the back and changed into his normal clothes came back outside and sat at his seat. It was silent for a moment till Daxter ruined it.

"Okay let's continue!" Daxter said as he spun the bottle. After a while it stopped…on Torn.

Jenny I pity Torn some times…

Jj You pity anyone.

Jenny everyone deserves some sort of caring.

Jc okay so Torn completed his dare and he is once again chosen by the bottle to do another deed or to tell the truth. So review and if you have any ideas of any dare I would be happy to possibly use it so review and I'll give out cyber money…once I get some money of my own…

(also just so you know there is a shortcut the forest and pumping station is connected but it leads you to the surface above the two moving pumps…)

Peace

~DLC GIRL~