There will be two parts to almost all the chapters. First one will show Hayate's perspective, while the second part shows Hinagiku's perspective. To not confuse people more than I already do, the second part will continue on from where Hayate had left off. Review with constructive criticism. Even though I like reviews that say the story is good, I'd appreciate it more if you were to point out why you thought it was good, if possible. Please and thank you. Here starts the another chapter of a poor blondie that never go-
"Shut up shut up SHUT UP! This story is about Hayate! STOP CRITICIZING ME ABOUT STAYING INDOORS!"
Gah! Nagi! Stop throwing chairs! They cost over a million yen!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter 3: Hayate's confusion~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hayate wakes up. He looks around and finds himself sleeping on the floor inside a red walled room filled with pictures of Saki. 'Saki... She's narcissist? That's not it...' He gets up and looks around. 'This is... Wataru's room?' There's a bed that stood next to a window, a closet across form the bed that's filled with hentai, a dresser to the right of the bed that seems to be filled with normal boys clothing, a nightstand on the other side of the bed, and a bookshelf large bookshelf that seems to be filled with normal animes and mangas. '...Either Saki is a huge pervert, or Wataru is a normal boy that is obsessed with his maid. No matter what the answer is, I need to get out of here. Ojo-sama needs me! She might've tried to cook again! Agh! I have to go back now! Who knows how much she's already burnt?' Hayate looks for the window. 'Where's that window I can jump out of?' He feels a breeze near the bed. It was camouflaged with red curtains. 'That is a perfect red. It matches the wall. But...' He pulls open the curtains and find shades behind them. 'That explains why it hid so easily. The light was filtered.' Hayate pulls the shades up and jumps out the window. He lands on the opposite side of the store front. 'Got to go before Ojo-sama tries to cook!'
Wataru!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Hayate!" Wataru yells as he bursts into the room Hayate was in. "Hayate?" Asked the confused little boy. "Where did he go? I hope he didn't think this was my room. If so, I would have to explain to him that this was an extra room where I store my stuff." Wataru looks around the room to see if Hayate was hiding. "Oh well." He leaves the room, hoping with all his heart that Saki doesn't find this room. Wataru runs out the store "Saki! Come back! I still have to explain that incident to you!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Hayate~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hayate reaches his destination after 1 intense minute. He stops at the front door of the mansion, gasping for air. "Good. *gasp* It's still up and I don't smell any smoke." He looks at his watch. "It's good that she didn't go hungry for two hour." He stops to think about what he had said. "Two hours?" He stares at his watch, registering what he had said with reality. "How is she not hungry after two hours?" He opens the door and quickly rushes in, only to see his oh so lovely Ojo-sama sitting down, eating a sub sandwich and Maria standing next to her, smiling. He trips and slides across the floor, stopping under Nagi's chair. "I'm back."
"Welcome back." Maria replies, still smiling. "Where have you been? Nagi only told you to return..." She turns and glares at Nagi, who looks away. "some DVDs..." Maria says with anger.
Hayate crawls away from under the chair and gets up. He dusts himself off with a duster that happened to be next to him. "Some unexpected things came up. I'm sorry." He finishes dusting himself, puts away the duster and bows. "I'm very sorry."
"It's ok Hayate." Nagi replies, still avoiding Maria's eyes. "It's not like I expected you to get into trouble..."
"I'm sorry Ojo-sama," Hayate says, still thinking it's his fault that Maria was mad at his master because of him, "It's all my fault..." He starts to tear up. "It's all..." His mind starts to drift away. "because..."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Past~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"...of me... Hayate-kun!" cried a sobbing little Hinagiku. She picks up Hayate and hugs him. "You can't die yet... You can't die... Hayate. Hayate!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Present~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Hayate!" Hayate wakes from the scream of his master. He looks around and realizes that his mind had wandered. Nagi looks at him and pouts. "It's not nice to ignore people when they are talking to you."
"Hayate-kun? Is something wrong?" Asked the curious maid. "You look like you've seen a ghost." She turns around to see if there really was a ghost. "What are you looking at?"
Hayate shakes his head. 'Focus!' Hayate closes his eyes. 'I have to focus what's in front of me for now' He opens his eyes and smiles. "Sorry." He says while scratching the back of his head. "I haven't had much sleep so I can't seem to focus." 'That's a lie.'
Maria and Nagi look at each other, as though asking each other questions in their minds. Nagi sighs and turns to Hayate. "You should get some sleep then. Just make sure you wake up to help Maria with dinner." Nagi gets up from her chair and tries to walk away, but Maria grabs her shirt's collar. "Maria!"
"You shouldn't go before I'm done 'Punishing' you." Maria says with a smile. She reveals something to Nagi, who turns bright red at the sight. Maria, putting away what she had revealed, looks at Hayate. "You should go to sleep. Don't worry, the 'punishment' is... it won't hurt her that much, especially since she enjo-"
"MARIA!" yelled the blushing little girl. She pushes Maria away from the room. "Let's just go and get this over with!" They both exit the room with haste.
"...Eh?" Hayate ignores what happened and walks to his room.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*Transition!*~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hayate enters his room and jumps onto his bed. He sighs and starts thinking. 'I don't get it. If I was killed, how am I still here? Even if someone changed the past, I wouldn't be here. Why? Why can't I remember what happened?' Hayate thinks deeply on the reason as he slowly falls asleep.
"Hayate!"
"Hinagiku, now is not the time to worry about him! We've got a fight on our hands!"
"Yeah Hina-chan! Please, we can't do this without you!"
"...Sorry...Hayate-kun. I promise...I'll come back for you."
A strong gust of wind is heard. 'Don't...Leave...Hinagiku-san...'
What do you guys think of the trasitions? I hope it helps a bit, making you guys less confused. Hope you all enjoyed it, because I sure did. Why? Because I only thought of what would happen in the past, and me writing about the present kind of helps me... It allows to to elaborate on the past, change it a little and refine it. Basically, it's changing and even I don't know where it'll end(Just kidding). Sorry, hope you all enjoyed it, Nagi isn't in any serious trouble, just some girl on girl stuff... you know, the usual.
