Eyes that burn

Okay ppl im doin a second chapter, weither u like it or not :P

Card carrying villan, thxs 4 the reveiw:) Ill work more on the spelling and stuff:)

Okay, uhh in the first chapter I said Jinx's eyes were violet, ember or amber. They're amber, so I don't confuse/ mess up the readers mind. Oh yeah, Snake eyes maybe OC, and I didn't know how far apart in age Jinx & Snake eyes are so I put 8 years.

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Jinx slammed her fists on the wall, "This isn't fucking fair!"

Sensei had punished her by making her clean the dojo, the weapons and even fix the roof because it was leaking. Then he made her get up at 4 in the morning to train, which was messed up because she had to finish everything, and she goes to sleep at 3:50 am. But the training was the worst: he'd make her spar him having 10 pound anklets, wearing a 20 pound jacket, and they fought on tall pillars, which she'd fall off of.

She faked a smile when he walked by, but it didn't slide when he saw two gaping holes in the wall. He looked at her and pointed at the wall.

"No.", she dropped the mop and she pulled off the sweat bandanna ,"No. I'm not gonna fix the fucking wall!"

She glared at sensei and she could tell he was glaring back. He pointed at the wall again.

"No f u c k i n g way." she said trying to piss him off.

He got her by the neck, and began to haul her away. "Wait, where you taking me?" she thrashed around, hoping it would stall, him from taking her to God knows where.

She saw that he had taken her out side. 'Where the hell is he taking me?' , then she thought the best thing to do was to make him work if he was going to 'kidnapp' her, so she went limp. He grunted when he realized what she had just done, but kept dragging her. She smirked in victory, 'It's working, Sensei's slowing down!' She didn't notice that Snake eyes had seen her smirk...

As Jinx remained dead whieght, she saw that they were further into the forest, 'Awww man, where are we going?' Then "Ouch!", She rubbed her throbbing head. "Sensei, watch were your going!" Under his mask his lips curved upwards. Over and over Jinx would delibratly run into branches. When they were finally out of the woods Jinx was covered in scrapes, splinters and all the other foresty stuff. She saw that they were at a lake, 'Sensei wanted to swim? This time year 'round it was freezing.' it kept puzziling her, 'till Snakes eyes began to walk down the pebble covred shore.

"Sensei?" She asked, but got no answer from the mute ninja. 'Ofcourse, the 'silent treatment' , typical male behaivor' She crossed her arms pouting.

Jinx is then thrown into the freezing water, "What the-" Snake eyes shoves her head in the water, then pulls it back up, she took in breathes, then he shoved her head back in. "Sen-" her head keeps going under water. Then Snake eyes lifts her head, letting her catch her breath. He inwardly laughed, when he saw her shivering.

"Sens-" Jinx then gagged when Snake eyes shoved a bar of soap into her mouth. He scrubbed & scrubbed then shoved her head back into the water, after 10 mins he just threw her head in the water along with the soap.

Jinx burst out of the water & try to get the soap out by spitting and rapidally brushing her hands on her tounge. Then she realized she hadn't breathed & amounts of air came out of her lungs, while she brought in tinier ones. Then she stood up, only to put her hands on her knees to get more air. Then she looked up to see her sensei sitting, with his wrists dangaling on his knees. She stomped over to him, only to lose her footing and fall.

"Damn-", she looked up and saw him, thossing a bar of soap up and down. She stood up slumping over and walked to him.

He put a hand on her shoulder, *Don't ever dissrepect me like that ever again.*

"Then what was the soap for?" She asked, still not facing him.

*For cussing your ass at me. When I talk to you do I cuss? No, so you don't do that to me, I am older, wiser & I am your sensei. So respect me*

Jinx looked up, that was the most he's ever signed. He began to walk away. 'That was weird.'

*Oh and when you get back fix the wall, finish cleaning, do 296 pushups, 30 wall sits, and pick up all the stuff you knocked down, when you were putting up a fight.*

Jinx's jaw fell open, "I'm not gonna do all that shit!" Then she clasped her mouth shut, maybe he hadn't heard. Her eyes widened when she saw a shadow on the water, she slowly turned around, saw saw the menacing ninja.

"Sensei?" She grinned wildly, but it didn't work and she was then forced to eat soap, again, and her chores were doubled.

Months Later

Jinx stood on a pillar, as her hands were clasped in a neat fashion. She slowly opened her amber eyes, and was embraced by the sun's warming rays. She smiled, it had been months since the whole 'soap' thing. Luckily she proved her respect and regret, that sensei let her off the hook, but he still made her train with all the whieghts.

But her smile vanished when she remebered how she attacked him, and how she never thanked him for helping her. 'I was so stupid.' But she was grateful, when he taught her how to be more disiplined, and have more self control. Now she looked sternly over the snow covered land, and spotted her master, walking alone. She leaped off the pillar and began running to her sensei.

When she reached him,she began to walk with him, then she 'faked coughed' and he turned to her, "Sensei I was woundering if we could have a Christmas this year."

She shrunk back when he turned his whole body to face her, *Only, if you can find the best tree & take it down with your bare hands.*

Her hopes of him saying yes, were gone, "Sensei if you don't want to, then just say no."

He shook his head, and pointed to a tree, *I didn't say no, I said that you have to bring the best tree, & take it down with no tools only your hands*

"But-" he dismissed her with a wave from his hand, and walked away.

'Oh, man', Jinx then looked at the massive trees, she felt puny compared to them. She tried to find the best of the best, because Sensei asked for it. But if it was the best of the best, it would have a sturdy trunck and thats hard to take down. So she walked looking or the perfect tree. Then she passed a tree that had a red picture on it, and when she ran up to it she remebered..

FlashBack

Eight year old Jinx followed Snake eyes through the forrest.

"Snake eyes, wait I can't keep up!" she cried as she staggered behind.

Snake eyes (already 16), turned back to Jinx, he smiled as he looked at her and then pointed to where he was standing.

"We're staying here?", he nodded. "But it's cold."

He found a flat rock, good to be a bed, and cleared the snow. He looked at the 'princess' & pointed at the rock. Luckily she didn't say anything, and just laid on the rock. He sat at the base to make sure the princess would be okay. Snake eyes was deep in his thoughts, when he heard chattering, he immediatly turned to the princess: she was curled up and shivering, even more than before. Without a second thought, he crawled onto the rock, and curled up with the princess, pulling her head into his chest, letting his heat being passed onto her. He didn't notice when she blushed alittle, then wrapped her small arms around him.

'I vowed to protect you, until my final dying breath, and I'm gonna do it' she was like a sister to him, so he'd do anything for her. Before closing his eyes, he glanced at the Arasikage blade, and smiled.

Little Jinx awoke, when she felt the warm sun's rays on her skin, and she sat up. She stretched out her short arms, and let out a yawn. Her eyes traveled to her left, "Oh my g-". There was a sleeping Snake eyes in her bed! She knew her father, would never approve such a canidate, 'cause in any relation she would be under his league. Then her face darkened alittle, 'Father..' But the her stomach began to growl, she looked this way and that, but found nothing.

"Aww man.", she said, then quickly turned to Snake eyes hoping she didn't wake him. 'Phew!' Her eyes began to wander again, and they landed on Snake eyes's pack. Quickly, she scurried to it and lifted the lid, her amber eyes widened with interest. There were weapons and other cool stuff, but she focused on the pretty, bright berries. Her hand quickly reached them, but when she pulled it out, it was covered in berry guts. "Eww, grose!" She stopped herself, from wiping the crud on her pink floral kimono. Instead she wiped it on the snow, and saw that it left a beautiful, color trail. Then she stood up & ran to the closest tree, and wrote 'The end is always the begining of another life chapter' in Japaenese.

End of FlashBack

Jinx smiled as she traced the words. Then she pulled her hand away & saw how low the sun was, "Damn! I have to find the perfect tree!". She leaped to the closest tree & tried to get an ariel shot, but it was too dark. With dissapointments high, she jumped off and began walking back to the dojo.

Snake eyes, sat with his right foot over his left knee and vice versa, meditating. Then the door flew open, and his jaw ticked when he heard heaving and something like needles being dragged across the dojo, his dojo!

*You're going to clean up the mess* he signed.

"Oh com'on sensei, look at what I brought, before you start bossing me around."

He broke meditation, pushed himself up and looked at Jinx's 'surprise'. He stood, unblinking and motionless, she did bring a tree, but his neck began hurt from staring at it too much.

"Sensei, this was the best tree of it's kind", she explained

*...*

"And - I used my bare hands." She puffed out her chest in pride, for her acomplishment.

He pointed at the tree, *That is not what I had in mind.*

Jinx too, looked down at the tree, it barely reached her knee, "We could have a Japanese style Christmas!" She clasped her hands together and began to squeal, "Please, Sensei! Please? Pretty-pretty please!"

He looked away from the embaressing scene his apprentice was creating, 'Thank God there's no one else here.' Instead of answering her, he nodded and for the first time he didn't anticipate what she was going to do...

She squealed, running at him and then he blacked out.

"Sensei? You okay?", Jinx asked worryingly.

He sat up and rubbed his head. Then he noticed he was on the floor, he looked up at Jinx, who was standing, then back at the floor, then at Jinx, the the floor, trying to piece everything together...

This small girl actually tackeled the great Snake eyes! He stood up and refused Jinx's hand.

"Attitude, Sensei.", she mumbled when he angrily stomped to his quarters. Then she turned to the small tree, even though it was the 'best' tree it had a dull , almost a dead look to it. The reason she chose it, was that the tree was the best in her eyes, and she knows that Sensei trusts her judgement. The little, dull tree reminded her of her, when she was younger. She quickly picked it up and headed to her quarters, 'I'm gonna try to make it the best first Christmas!'

Days Later

Snake eyes leaned in the doorway, watching his apprentice train. She'd gotten stronger, and her attacks were more precise, more gracefull, and her body would flex and twist with such ease. But he couldn't forget when she turned on him, and he read her personal writtings (which she never found out). When he read, it made a permanet slash in him: the girl was still grieving for her father and the horrible memory still haunted her...

He shook his head, clearing his thoughts, that was his apprentice's problem not his. He then stared at the apprentice herself, no longer evaluating her tactics. 'She's so young...and to have a burden that big, is bound to wheigh her down.'

He elbowed the rim, and Jinx turned to him, knowing he wanted her attention, *That's enough for today, come inside* She nodded and followed him.

"Sensei..." she softly spoke.

He kept walking but slightly turned to her, "Uh- well I wanted to thank-" He put a hand up, signaling her to not continue. She bowed her head, "Yes, Sensei "

When they entered the dojo, he saw silver & black streamers covering the walls, glass - what looked like shot glasses, badly drawn pictures of reindeer or something on the roof's pillars, ugly ass carpets littered the floor, & a ninja star topping the odd looking midget tree.

He turned to his apprentice, "Merry Christmas, Sensei!" she beamed.

*Jinx, who gave you permission to do this to my dojo?* he shot her daggers.

"You said we could celebrate if I brought the tree." she whimpered.

*I -* he grabbed the ninja 'christmas' star and violently threw it.

"Sensei-", she looked at the star that landed just 5 cm, above her head.

*Clean this up, and go to you quarters!*

"But sen-", Jinx protested

*If you argue with me, your punishment will be severe. Now go!*

"No, I worked my ass off, on this Christmas", Jinx stood her ground.

Snake eyes jaw ticked, repeatadly.

"I don't care about the 'soap', I'll just tie a rope around it, and use it as a weapon!" Jinx then pulled the star out of the wall, & held it in a threatning manor.

*Remember the last time you defied me? Well it'll be ten times worse*, he dared her to throw it at him. He saw her drop the star, then raise her arms in a fighting stance. Not that many things could kill Snake eyes, but this annoying girl just might do it. He didn't flinch when she ran at him, he just stood proud & tall. When she stood at close range, she threw a punch, he caught her wrist, pulled her arm behind her, and threw his elbow crease line around her neck. Her eyes widened in shock, and he smirked, she always fell into this lock and she would always resist, but never won.

"Sensei release me!" she thrashed around, kicking and screaming for him to let her go.

*Not, unless you do what I told you to do*, he signed with his free hand.

"No! I worked hard, just to impress you! And you want me to throw it all away? Just because the ball less snake fled around Christmas?", she yelled both hands on his for arm, digging into his flesh. He released her, and walked to stand in front of the Arashikage blade. Jinx realized what she said and reached out for him, "Sensei..". He made no notion, that he heard her, or even cared to. She fell to her knees in shame, this was supposed to be a joyous season, but she ended up hurting sensei. Then an arm forcably grabbed her wrist and pulled her up.

She didn't dare say anything, as he dragged her in front of the Arashikage blade. She stared blankly at it, then was pushed down into a complete bow position. He stood over her, legs on either side of her body, and pulled her head up, to stare at the blade.

"Sensei, I'm sorry for not listening to you", he pushed her head down, and pulled it up, telling her 'wrong answer!'

"I'm sorry, for disrespecting you!" she yelled, hoping it was the right one. He threw her head down, then he signaled two fingers, 'Two more tries, apprentice'

"I'm sorry for being a brat." He repeated the action again, then signaled one finger, 'Last time, apprentice, choose your words wisely'

"I'm sorry for saying calling you a coward", she waited anxsiously for his response, holding her breath and praying it was right. He pulled her onto her feet, and backhanded her face. Jinx violently turned, and fell to the floor. 'You failed.'

Jinx placed her hand on her burning cheek, "Sensei?". She looked up, he was glaring at her through his visor and she shrunk away. She swallowed hard, her father gave him that name for a reason, he possessed the steely gaze of a serpent, and no matter where she ran he would be there, eyes buring into her soul. She couldn't look at him, when he glared at her like that.

'Sensei, even when you die, your scolding eyes will always be seen...in ,those of your very name, serpents.'

"Forgive me", she had gone too far and now she groveled at his feet asking for forgivness. She never wanted to hurt her sensei, he was the one who saved her from losing herself completely, and for a decade he helped her and this is how she repays him?

Alright end of chapter

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hopefully my grammer got better. Oh is Snake eyes too cruel or too talkative?