OK everyone, first of all, I need reviews for chapters 4, 5, and 6. Second, after I redo this story, or if I do, I might make a sequel that runs through KFP 2. I need you guys to tell me if I should, or if I shouldn't, but I still didn't see KFP 2 yet. Disclaimer: I don't own KFP, just Edon and Seff.
Previously, Edon sent a letter to his brother and got permission to visit his brother Seff at the Lee Da Academy and Crane decided to tagged along, so they packed up their stuff and left. Now they're on their way to meet some old friends. On with the story...
Chapter 6: A Long Road Ahead
Edon and Crane were walking through the village when they came to the blacksmith's shop."Hold on, Crane, I'll be back in a minute." said Edon as he started to walk into the shop."For what?" Crane asked."Just for some new gear." replied Edon as he proceeded into the shop.
Edon walked into the shop and looked around for the blacksmith. He saw a bengal tiger forging a sword on an anvil."Hello, Fang." said Edon walking towards him."Hello Edon, what can I do for ya?" asked Fang as he turned from his work and faced him."You have the new gear I asked for?" asked Edon."Oh, follow me." motioned Fang as Edon followed him.
Fang looked all over the shelves until he found a small, silver box."Ah, here it is." said Fang as he picked it up and put it on the table."There you go, you already payed for it so enjoy." said the tiger."Thanks man, for everything." thanked Edon."Don't mention it, I'm still sorry for what happened to your parents, I knew them since I was a pup." said Fang reminiscing."Yeah, I miss them too, I'll see you later." said Edon putting the box in his backpack and putting it back on his back. Fang waved him off and continud his work.
Edon walked out of the shop and walked to Crane."What did you do?" asked Crane."Just got some supplies, let's go." said Edon. Crane nodded and followed him.
After a few hours, they made it out of the valley and they were at the Thread of Hope. Being that the bridge was gone, they stopped."How are You gonna get past here?" Crane asked."Let me see." Edon said as he opened his backpack and took out the silver box. In it was several different tools."What are those?" asked Crane."Lots of different tools." Edon replied.
He took out a small crossbow and tied a harpoon to it. He then clipped it on his vambrace and shot the harpoon at the pillar."I'll see you on the other side." Edon said as he jumped off of the cliff into the thick fog. Crane stared dumbstruck at what he just saw. He shook his head and then flew to the other pillar. Edon then swung back up onto the other pillar and landed next to Crane.
"Hey what's up?" Edon said as he continued walking across the bridge to the next pillar.
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Back at the palace, the Four and Po were in the kitchen for lunch."C'mon Po, I'm starving!" yelled Mantis, waiting for his noodles."Never rush art, young one." replied Po in elderly voice. This recieved a chuckle from everyone except for Mantis.
After a few minutes, Po finished making his noodles and handed then out to everyone."Order up." Po said as he finished and took a seat next to Tigress. They ate in silence until Po broke the ice."You know, I still wonder what pizza is." said Po.
"Yeah, me too." added Monkey.
"He's probably lying." Tigress chimed in."What makes you say that?" asked Po."Well we obviously never heard of pizza." replied Tigress. Po opened his mouth to reply but shut it right afterwords. She was right, they've never heard of pizza before, so there was no way of telling if it was real or not.
"What is this pizza?" asked an interested Shifu standing in the doorway."Edon said it was an old italian recipe and he'll make one for us." replied Viper."I see. Well then, when he comes back, we'll just ask him." said Shifu as he walked back out of the door.
"I'm going to the training hall." said Tigress as she walked out of the kitchen."I'm going to my room." said Viper as she also left the kitchen. That left the three guys.
"Well, what do you guys feel like doing?" Po asked."I don't know yet, I'mma just go training." said Monkey, getting p and walking out of the kitchen."I'm right behind ya." said Mantis jumping onto Monkey's shoulder. Po quickly got up and followed.
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Viper was on her way to her room when she heard Tigress in her room. Due to her good nature, she knocked on the door."Tigress?" Viper asked. She heard a sigh and 'Come in.'. With that, she opened the door and slithered in.
"Tigress, can I ask you something?" Viper asked."Fine." the tiger said."What's troubling you?" Viper asked."Nothing." came Tigress' reply."C'mon, Tigress, I know there's something bothering you."Viper pressed."Ever since Edon arrived, you've been acting mean towards him." Viper explained.
With a deep sigh, Tigress said "Fine. I don't trust Edon because wolves killed my family. I can't ever trust wolves." explained Tigress.
Viper was shocked, she never knew that Tigress hated wolves so much."Tigress, that doesen't mean that Edon is evil. He's even younger than you, he couldn't possibly have killed your parents. Give him a chance, Tigress." Viper pleaded.
With a heavy sigh, Tigress said "Fine, I'll give him a chance." said Tigress."Good, I'll see you later." said Viper as she slithered out of the room.
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Edon and Crane were still on the trail to the academy when Edon felt something."You got the feeling we're being followed?" Edon asked.
"No, not really." Crane replied.
They then heard a leaf crumble behind them. They quickly turned around to see nothing."Alright, this is wierd." said Edon. they turned back around to see several warriors who which seemed very skilled.
"You are coming with us." said the female wolf."Who are you?" Edon asked entering his fighting stance."My name is Hua, and yours is Edon correct?" Hua said entering her fighting stance.
Crane also entered his fighting stance."Attack." Hua ordered to the warriors. Edon jumped back while Crane jumped up and created a powerful gust of wind. This got them off balance while Edon jumped into the air and released a smoke bomb to the middle of the group.
Edon and Crane jumped into the smoke cloud and unleashed mayhem. The warriors swung blindly as they swung at eachother while at the same time being beaten by Edon and Crane. When the smoke cleared, there stood Edon and Crane across from Hua and 4 other other warriors, who happens to be female wolves also.
"These four look more skilled than the others." Edon inspected."I'll get these four, you can take her." Crane said. Edon nodded and they leapt at the wolves. Crane created another gust of wind and dove at the guards while Edon lunged at Hua. Hua ducked under and delivered a kick to Edon's face. However, Edon blocked and flipped over her. No sooner than Edon landed, Hua already threw a kick at Edon, who blocked just barely. Edon then threw a flurry of punches, but Hua dodged all of them. She then threw her own punches at Edon. Being that Edon was slower than her, and that he still had his backpack, he revieved all of them. She finished with a power kick to the stomach, knocking the wind out of Edon sending him onto his back.
Crane wasn't doing so good either. He was slightly faster than the other fighters were, but only slightly. One of them scored a kick to the face, stunning him while another hit him in the stomach, sending him on his back next to Edon.
"Just so you Don't get back up." Hua said as she walked up to Edon and placed her foot on Edon's arm. She then raised har foot and stomped on Edon's arm. There was a sickening cracking sound. Edon screamed out in pain as his arm was broken. He then fell unconscious from the erupting pain. One of the fighters also knocked Crane out.
"I thought that fighting a master would be a challenge, guess I was wrong." said Hua. Then out of nowhere, a smoke bomb fell near them. As Hua and her fighters were blinded, Edon and Crane were picked up and carried into the forest.
Phew, thought I'd never get that chap done. Well anyway, R&R and tell me what you think. I have so many plans for this story. Also, I'm looking for a title, in the mean time, enjoy life.