Thank you for the awesome reviews. If you have any ideas for the story please let me know. For the question about Isabella being like a Mary Sue. If you read my profile, it said that I still don't know all the meanings to stuff. I read one story with Mary Sues and they were pretty and manipulative. Isabella is four so of course she is cute. Since she is an only child and cute, Max spoils her. I think Alexandria is more manipulative. If you are curious about the ages it is on my profile. It is the ages five years ago when Alexandria messed Fang up. So Max, Iggy, Fang is 23. Nudge is 21. Gazzy is 18. Angel is 11. What does OC mean?
Angel: she doesn't own us *uses mind control* read and review
FANG
How could I be so stupid? I let the love of my life get away. What? No, of course I'm talking about Max. As soon as Alexandria came, my mind went fuzzy in a bad way. I remember me catching her then Iggy slapping me saying that Max left. We found out Alexandria was evil and her power was to seduce anyone. I literally threw her out the window. I am still looking for Max. It has been five years and I still don't know what Max was hiding behind her back the day Alexandria ruined our lives.
"Fang, I'm hungry," Nudge whined. That was the shortest thing I ever heard her say.
"Are you sure Max is still alive?" Iggy murmured. How can he say such a thing? Of course she was alive. Right? RIGHT?
I nodded my head and swooped down. We landed by a grocery store. We walked in and went to the isle with the most calories.
"No, Vicky!" a strange voice whispered, "Max nothing, Isabella can not fly on her own." Max? The girl is Max. Who is Isabella?
"Max?" Angel called out the girl whipped her head around. Max was even more beautiful than I could imagine. Max's eyes popped out of her head. She whipped around so fast it seemed like she was a blur.
"Follow her!" I yelled. The flock ran after her. As soon as she took flight we were on top of her. She landed near a royal blue house with a gray, stone chimney. She took out her golden keys that matched her golden hair. Her brown eyes commented her hair in the most beautiful way. Her lips were so full and kissable. She, um, sorry off subject. Anyway she dug her keys in the lock and stormed in.
"Fang, ring the doorbell," Angel commanded. She was hiding in the tree with the rest of the flock. I stood in front of the door and rang the bell. A small girl with black hair opened the door.
"Mommy, there is a man here," she hollered. Max walked to the door. MOMMY? WHEN DID SHE HAVE A KID?
MAX
I began to walk to the grocery store. I would fly, but this is a crowded town. I walked towards the chocolate chips, but my phone rang.
"Hey it's Vicky," the person on the other side of the phone said, "Isabella wants to go for a fly." I will explain how she knows about our wings later.
"No, Vicky!" I answered. Isabella knows she can not fly without someone with her, me.
"But Max, she really wants to!" she exclaimed.
"Max nothing, Isabella can not fly on her own." I replied. Suddenly, I heard a familiar voice.
"Max?" the familiar voice called. The voice belonged to Angel. Crap! The flock is here. Fang is here. Is Alexandria here? I turned my head around. My eyes widened at the fact that Alexandria wasn't with them. ISABELLA! I have to make sure she is safe. I quickly stormed out of the store and flew home. Next, I jiggled the keys into the lock.
"ISABELLA!" I screamed.
"Max, calm down," Vicky whispered, "She is sleeping." I ran into the living room and found my baby sleeping on the couch.
"The flock," I murmured.
"What about them?" Vicky replied.
"They are here, in town!" I exclaimed.
"Seriously, this is like destiny!" Vicky screamed.
"Or a nightmare," I muttered.
"I'm going to leave so you can talk to FANG," she spoke joyfully. Sometimes, I regret telling her my life story. I only told her because I was drunk. She also saw my wings that hazy night. Well that was the past, this is the present.
*Flashback*
I finally found a babysitter and was going to a party. There was a girl in my night courses. Her name was Victoria. She couldn't be a eraser because those sexist pig scientists decided to only make male ones. She was very nice. She had brown hair that was in a pixie cut. She had piercing green eyes. She was sarcastic and didn't take shit from anyone. She was a human me.
We arrived at the party with style outfits. I wore a loose, ripped bright blue t-shirt with skinny jeans.I had no makeup on. Vicky wore a red miniskirt and a low cut black shirt. She wore black heels and I wore blue converse. The party smelled worse than Gazzy's farts. It was a mixture of beer, vodka, and throw up.
"Drinking will help with smell," Vicky slurred while noticing my pinched nose. I figured it could help so I downed a shot. Then another. Then another. My vision blurred.
"So what is your secret? How are you so perfect?," Vicky came over to me.
"I have wings!" I shouted as I pulled out my wings. Let's just say everyone's eyes bugged out. We both tripped walked home and have been best friends since than.
*End Flashback*
I was interrupted from my thoughts by Isabella.
"Mommy, there is a man here," she hollered. Man? I walked to the door and found...Fang. Great ( note the sarcasm). I told Isabella to go inside, set a force field up behind me, and turned to face Fang.
"Where is Alexandria?" I asked jealously. I know what your thinking. I am still hopelessly in love with the boy who ripped my heart out, ripped it, and stomped on the pieces. I can't let him know that though.
"I threw her out a window after I found out she was using her power to seduce me," he shrugged. SHRUGGED! He just told me a valuable piece of information and all he could do is shrug. Wait! He said Alexandria was using her power to seduce him. Maybe he still loves me. Who am I kidding, of course he doesn't.
I walked through the force field and walked into the kitchen. Since I made the force field, I could walk through it.
Bang! I guess Fang's face met my force field. I think they dislike each other. I do not tell good jokes so shut up. I spent twenty minutes making cookies, but he was still shouting. I better go talk to him.
Me: *pokes Fang*
Fang: *silence*
Me: *poke* your silence annoys me
Fang: *silence*
Me: I honestly think your emo *poke*
Fang: *squirms*
Me: *poke* you are boring me...Wanna go kill Dylan?
Fang: Hell ya!
Me: Gasp! He speaks.
Fang: I'll get the shovel
Me: hmm a talkative criminal
Fang: C'MON
Me: only if people reveiw
Fang: PLZ reveiw I really hate Dylan
Dylan: What you guys talking about?
Me: What are yo doing in my lair?
Dylan: Its your room.
Me: *glares* Fang, sick 'em
Dylan: AAAAAAAAHHHHHH
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