I have been way too lazy to update for the past month. I had ¾ of this written weeks ago, but I really wanted to add the ending. So anyway there is this thing on fanfiction where you can see who visits your story. So I know a ton of people have not been reviewing. Is it really that hard? Actually it is kind of is since I never know what to say. I usually just say cool or awesome but at least I say something. My best friend still has no review so PLZ PLZ PLZ help her out. Her username is pinkos98.
FANG: Stop whining. Nobody likes you.
Me: Thats because everybody loves me not likes me... unlike you.
MAX: burn.
FANG: shut up
IGGY: I think we all know how you can get her to shut up. *wiggles eyebrows*
GAZZY:
MAX: Iggy you scare me.
IGGY: not as much as Lydia when she finds out that she doesn't own Maximum Rde
Me: What?
MAX
I was thinking of many things all night. I was thinking of the conversation I had with Ella. I starting to think it was very soap opera of me to leave Fang. I mean the slut did control him, and he obviously still likes me because he kissed me. If he ever finds me, I am now positive that I will forgive him. Unless he has a slut attached to his lips like that Lissa girl. I was also thinking of the words I heard Isabella whisper. When I heard that, my heart tore a little bit. I never really thought of what my actions could do to her. I was thinking about all this, Fang shirtless, cookies, and Taylor Lautner. Hey I am still young. Any guy with abs makes me swoon, but don't get me started on Fang's rock hard body. So that's what I was thinking about as I slowly drifted away.
FANG
"Fang, lets set up camp," Iggy stated. I nodded and flew towards the ground. I remember when Max was mine. We would sneak away at night and kiss until morning. I remember all those times I got to carry her bridal style. Good times, good times.
"I think we should have a plan to get Max back," Gazzy said.
"I agree," I replied. We discussed and decided to use our secret weapon, Ella. It turns out she has been talking to Iggy since, well, a while. We called her and told her the plan.
"I think I already solved the problem," Ella whispered through the phone.
"How?" I asked. I was really curious.
"I'm going to let you suffer and not tell you," she answered. I groaned in frustration. On top of that, she hung up. This day just keeps getting better and better. First the stalker, now this.
MAX
You know in movies, they wake up to birds chirping. That's exactly how I woke up. I woke up in the mood to fly. I put on some of Ella's jeans and headed out. The air was so clear. I loved it. In the back of my mind I felt like something big is going to happen. I didn't know if it was good or bad. All I knew was that I was really in the mood for a movie.
"Hey Isabella, do you want to watch a movie?" I asked as I entered the room.
"Sure Mommy. Can we watch Snow White?" she answered. Her favorite movie was Snow White. I have no idea why. I put the disc into the DVD player and sat down on the couch. I had Isabella cradled in my arms. I put a blanket on us and looked up to watch.
We were disturbed by the door bell. Ella came skipping down the stairs and towards the door.
"Max come here!" she called. I walked through the kitchen, into the hallway, and turned to the door. I was greeted with none other than Fang. My eyes widened and I sucked in a I remembered what Ella and I talked about. I sprinted at him and kissed him with all my might. He enthusiastically kissed back.
(A/N I am switching POVs a lot sorry.)
FANG
We are almost there. So close. We are about an hour away from Dr. Martinez's house. I still have no idea how to get Max to forgive me. I mean sure we have Ella, but what if that doesn't work? I was so stressed out that I didn't realize we were here. It took four bird kids yelling to finally descend down to the oak brown house. Angel stepped up and rang the door bell. The door opened to reveal Ella. She smiled at all of us, but her eyes lasted on Iggy. They so like each other.
"Max come here!" she called to the back room. My heart thudded in my chest. Max carefully walked into the hallway and turned to face us. Her eyes widened when she saw it was us. I thought she was going to run away by the way she gasped. She did the most unsuspected thing possible. She kissed me. I'm not complaining, but it was random. Of course I kissed her back. We were interrupted by a cough. Were the flock there the whole time? Oh well. I hoped she didn't regret anything. I could tell she didn't because she looked up and smiled at me. Her smile said that she forgave me, the kiss showed she still loved me, but her eyes showed she was worried. What was she worried about? I pulled her to another room and gave her a quick kiss.
"Why are you worried?" I asked her. Her smile faltered a little. She probably didn't expect me to notice it. She sighed.
"I don't know, I just have this feeling," she answered.
"Feeling?"
"I just feel like something big is going to happen."
"Good or bad."
"I can't tell yet," she whispered. That reminds me of the chat I had with Ari.
"Maybe its Ari," I answered.
"What?"
"Ari found us. He said he was looking for Isabella."
"When have you and Ari ever had a civilized conversation."
"He didn't look for a fight, just Isabella."
"Did you tell him anything?" she asked. I slowly nodded. She gasped and punched me in the gut. I lost my breath and held my hands up i surrender.
"Calm down. I told him she was in New York," I answered. Max sighed in relief. She buried her head in my chest.
"Thank god," she mumbled into my shirt. She looked so beautiful in my arms. I carefully lifted my hand and rushed it across her cheek and tucked a piece of hair behind her ear. She smiled up at me. Her smile made me smile. (A/N U Smile I Smile Justin Bieber. I'm not a belieber but I had to say that.) Her lips were so kissable. I seem to lose control whenever I am near them. I couldn't resist anymore. I attacked her lips with all I have.
BOOOM! I were thrown off eachother with an explosion. It was obviously a bomb. It was probably just Iggy and Gazzy. They really missed Max yelling at them. I would usually see Iggy and Gazzy laughing their heads off, but it was too smokey. When the smoke cleared, I didn't see Iggy or Gazzy. I saw the man I hated most. (A/N Can you guess who without reading below?)
"Someone lied to me," he snarled.
Ari.
Hey wanna know what would be really cool? Its called reviewing. Yeah I know its amazing, so do it. Or Fang will play the harmonica until you go crazy.
