Coming Soon
Dust to Dust
So, because I realize that this arc doesn't have any of the crossovers mentioned in the author's note – not to mention the completely insane length of the story, I am changing it to complete. Don't panic, it just means that I'm going to be coming out with a sequel that'll be much more – I dunno – fast-paced? This one it feels a little slow to me in retrospect.
Also, though I love the demon aspect in this version, they will hardly be playing a roll in the future. In fact, I think the only reason I had our dear Azazel sweep through Amity Park was so that the amazing Winchester Brothers would be inclined to follow him.
And let's face it; Danny Phantom's specialty is ghosts, not demons. But, the explanation needed to be made on how ghosts were formed and all that fun stuff. Depending on fan requests, I may actually bring back Azazel for a chapter or two.
Also, a question:
Do you really like Webb and Worth? Would you like to see them in the second part? I understand how some readers are hesitant when it comes to OC's - I myself am horribly skeptical of them. And after some pottage on my part here's my decision:
Unless you review and ask for Webb and Worth to STAY, I will be removing them from the story.
If I remove them, Mr. Lancer would take on a much more interactive role - something I kind of missed in this first part of the story. His sister Jazz would also be more evident, since I feel that Webb was taking that position. Another reason I want to take them out is because I am planning an original story staring those two characters.
So, that's pretty much everything.
I can still post another chapter of deleted material if you so wish it - but no one's asked so *shrug*
Also, I've noticed several spelling errors in here. ^^"
Anyone want to be a wonderful Beta for me and edit those little misspellings?
PM me or add it in your review.