Hmm I'm gonna try something different this time. Reviewers at the top. I'll see if I like this better. Again, thank you guys for reviewing! You really have no idea how much it means to me.
Sillygoose97618 – Not sure yet. I haven't written anything past the 8th chapter, but that could be a nice plot twist or something to throw in here so it's not JUST about Jade and Griffin.
Millena48 – Yeah, I tried to model Griffin after how I would want a guy to treat me, so it's more realistic. And yeah, 5 whole days without internet. I almost died.
Jade Lautner-JogiaXD – Like I said earlier, I haven't written anything past the 8th chapter so I don't know. But probably not. Just judging by the story so far, they probably won't. But just for you, I'm going to write a Bade story :D I'll try to start tonight or tomorrow and get it uploaded next time I have the computer.
Chapter 5
The next day before school, I go pick Jade up, because she called me.
"Hey Jade, what's wrong?" I ask her when I got to her house.
"Well… I think I'm having an anxiety attack…" she says.
"Why? What happened?" I ask her, panicking.
"I'm just afraid Tori is gonna tell everyone about us… and I don't think I'm ready for everyone to know."
"If she tells everyone, we could just deny it… or just tell them… but don't worry. You're a strong girl! You can do it!" I said. "And if she does tell everyone, she'll have to deal with me." I add, smiling.
"Thanks Griffin. I… love you" she tells me.
"I love you too, Jade." I said, pulling her in for a quick hug. She has the cutest smile – smirk thing on her face. It was adorable. "Come on, let's go to school."
When in my truck, she turns on the radio and immediately starts singing along. It happened to be "Show Me" by Big Time Rush.
Guys like me…
Like girls like you…
And girls like you…
Like guys like me
I blaze the night in Harbor lights
You dressin' right, it's fittin' right
I hear the waves, I see you wave
I'm stayin' put you say no way
The track begins, you pull me in
I touch your skin, you tremblin'
It's in your eyes you're here to win
So let the game, the game begin
I I I I, wanna see you you you you
Tellin' me that that, that you got what I need
Do pretty girl, don't speak
Baby show me by the way you hold me
Way that you control me
Speed me up or slow me
Oh when I'm lonely
Full of stormy weather
Can you make it better
I hold what you told me, so oh oh show me
"This song is so sexual." I say.
"You should see the dance." Jade responds, with a smirk on her face.
"Oooh I'll have to see that sometime." I said, winking, she laughs.
Know what you want, my number for
Ain't talked enough, let's talk some more
You're kinda cute, don't hit the mute
Just aim and shoot, or get the boot
I I I I, wanna see you you you you
Tellin' me that that, that you got what I need
Do pretty girl, don't speak
Baby show me by the way you hold me
Way that you control me
Speed me up or slow me
Oh when I'm lonely
Full of stormy weather
Can you make it better
I hold what you told me, so oh oh show me
Guys like me…
Like girls like you…
And girls like you…
Like guys like me
Guys like me…
Like girls like you…
And girls like you…
Like guys like me
Baby show me by the way you hold me
Way that you control me
Speed me up or slow me
Oh when I'm lonely
Full of stormy weather
Can you make it better
I hold what you told me, so oh oh show me
La la, la la la la la la
La la la la la la
La la la la la la
After we get to school, Jade takes a deep breath and gets out of my truck.
"Hold my hand." she tells me.
"But I thought you didn't want people to know about… us." I said, confused.
"I changed my mind." she said, grabbing my hand. "People should know about is." she added.
"That's the Jade I know. There's my girl." I said proudly. We walk in the front door and everyone becomes quiet and stares at us.
So I know this kinda ends randomly during the chapter but it was my lame attempt at a cliff – hanger. Lol I know, it was a fail. But I have the 6th chapter written so I know what happens.
And another note, I tend to switch between the tense in which the story is told (present, past, and future). I realize that, but I can't do anything about it. It's just how my brain works and if I try to fix it, it'll only confuse me more. Sorry if it's hard to understand!
I'm also thinking of doing chapter dedications. I'll ask a question and I'll pick my favorite answer and dedicate the next chapter to. Good deal?
Again, thanks for reviewing, it really means a lot to me :D
Question: What is your favorite song and why?