Welcome back, gang. I've discovered the source of behind the story purges. Regular Fan Fiction users known as "Critics United." They will post any forum they don't like on their forum and then they have their members mass report it until the story is deleted. In their forum they have stated that they hope to cause another purge soon. These aren't critics ladies and gentlemen these are bullies. "Critics United?" More like "Bullies United!" They don't offer constructive criticism, they flame and poke fun and they call the authors whose stories have been deleted because of their villainous nature: immature and likely to complain about them. They often use condescension in their poorly named "constructive criticism. Now that I've gotten that out there, we now return to your reading enjoyment. Enjoy.
Discoveries of Children
The three kids walked down one of the paths in the tomb. The path was the one that had been going left and the three kids plus Snarf found there to be something eerie about tomb. Eerie, scary, spooky, those were all words they had used to describe the tomb.
As they walked through the tomb, Kit looked at Balor and compared him to Gard. While he did resemble Gard, Balor had the acrobatic build that she and her brother had. Gard was a bit like Panthro physically and Balor's contrast in physical appearance made him less of a mirror of a young Gard and more of what Balor was, a young relative, not Gard but his own person. Balor wore what looked like a combination of a bandana and a scarf around his neck, red in color. Everything Balor was red. His shorts, his wristbands, the single band around his right ankle all of it was red. Kit wondered why Balor would wear red. If it was to be thankful for life wouldn't black be better since evabon blood was black?
The kids came to a dead end. Kat let out an annoyed sigh. What was the point of going this way if they were only to come to a dead end?
Balor tapped on the wall and a hollow sound was heard. Kat and Kit both looked at the wall. What was behind it? No one would make a tomb with a dead end. Actually, this was basically just a cave that was turned into a tomb and this wall was clearly made from bricks. They had been poorly been placed there. Something was being hidden.
Balor tapped the wall again and this time the bricks fell over completely. What was behind it caused the children and Snarf to gasp.