New Place But Similar Part 3
A/N Before I begin, I want to question a guest's comment I got on chapter 4. Has this dude been corrupted by Discord or something because he seems to be giving me more flames than professional criticism. From now on, I'll be removing reviews that are not giving me advice on how to make my story better and are just there to insult me. BTW dude who commented, your insult failed and I'll continue making this. Why don't you just grow some balls and go somewhere else for all I care? Anyway on with the story. A/N
"Where should we begin?" Twilight asked as they overlooked Ponyville.
The whole place was exactly the same as their Ponyville...well almost the same. The parks were slightly bigger, White-Tail Woods encroach the border of the town and Sweet Apple Acres was nowhere in sight.
"Perhaps we should-" David was about to finish when, suddenly, Kimono was galloping up towards him.
David and Twilight could now see how different Kimono was to the other ponies. She was larger than Twilight but she was lean and muscular. She was a pretty fit runner because after galloping she was not out of breath.
"Did you hear me?" Kimono said while tilting her head.
"No, sorry, we were busy taking in the scenery" David joked.
"I've only just remembered: sometimes, in the morning, a light comes from the top of that mountain over there" Kimono said as she pointed a hoof at the peak of the mountain.
David and Twilight could recognize it as the mountain that the red dragon was, looking over Ponyville while sending smoke over the town. If it wasn't for Fluttershy, Twilight and the others would all be underground by now.
"In retrospect, it may hold a clue to your portal. Just a theory, mind you" Kimono said.
"Thanks! I'll check it out" Twilight replied as Kimono soon gave a nod and galloped back to her house.
"Ok David no-" Twilight stopped as she soon realised that David was nowhere in sight.
"David? David, where did you go?" Twilight and the group shouted for the, now missing, human.
Twilight and the others will have to look for David later, they had other important matters to attend to.
"We'll find him later girls, for now, let's focus on our task. I'll take the mountain. I don't think anything dangerous would be up there, otherwise it would've done something to the town by now. I'm not sure these ponies are up for much fighting or running away" Twilight said.
"I'd like to see where my Boutique is so I'll take the east side of the town" Rarity said.
"Can I come, too?" Pinkie asked, to which Rarity nodded in approval.
"Flutts and I will check the west side then. I wanna see what your library looks like" Rainbow Dash said.
"Ah think y'all know what Ah wanna go see" Applejack said while looking over the now missing Sweet Apple Acres.
"When you're all finished, let's meet on the mountain. If I'm done first, I'll see you all at the foot and we'll find David. If I run into trouble, I'll send up a flare" Twilight said as she walked off to the mountain.
Meanwhile in a bush, David was looking for a place to vomit up his breakfast. Apparently, David's body doesn't take a liking to savory Rice Porridge.
"Ahhh, much better now. Ok girls sorry if I was gone but I had to-" David stopped as he soon realised that the girls were not where they were anymore.
"*Annoyed Grunt* At a time like this stomach, you had to make me go throw up my breakfast while they just walked off without me" David scolded his stomach.
"Right so if this place is almost the same as the G4 one then I should know where the critical buildings are. I guess I'll go see if Rarity's shop is still in this place" David said to himself as he sneaked around the buildings, avoiding any fat ponies he saw.
"Oh my, this doesn't seem right at all" Rarity said, alerting David to her position.
"Rarity, Pinkie, there you two are. Why'd you leave me behind?" David asked.
"We thought you got lost and decided to find you later silly" Pinkie replied.
"Well if my stomach wasn't in a bad mood today then I'd probably would have stayed with you. Hey, where is your-" David stopped and covered his mouth as he soon realised that they didn't know his knowledge of their world.
"How did you know of my boutique?" Rarity questioned David.
"Ummm...your shop is quite popular where I'm from, the dresses you made are fabulous and you're rich" David lied, trying to cover up the truth.
"Oh wonderful, I can't believe I'm famous in another world but anyway back to important matters. My boutique is nowhere in sight, that is very odd" Rarity replied, fooling for the lie.
"So what building is this in the place of your boutique?" David asked.
"Oh! This is Sweetberry's Cafe! Kimono said we should look here first, anyway. Kinda convenient, huh?" Pinkie Pie replied.
"Ok so that's cleared up" David said.
"I suppose...but must you insist on wearing that horrible thing" Rarity cringed.
"Yeah especially if we know where it'd came from" David also cringed, the nightmare of those ponies hooves still lurking in his mind.
"I really really think this's gonna come in handy. I don't wanna lose it, that's all" Pinkie replied.
As the three all looked in the window, Rarity and David were absolutely shocked by what they saw. There was a small pink unicorn in the room that had a chromatically-rainbowed mane and tail plus she had a cutie mark that was shaped like a heart with a yellow and green swirl in it.
"*GASP*" Rarity exclaimed in shock.
'I didn't think that was possible!' David thought in his mind.
"I know! That is a way unbalanced cake-to-frosting ratio! Everypony knows it's sixty percent cake, forty percent frosting! Otherwise, you get all sugar and gritty and blarg!" Pinkie complained about the frosting being too much.
David and Rarity both glared at Pinkie who just gave a shrug.
"It might not last forever, but a cake's still a form of art!" Pinkie said.
"I can't argue with that BUT I wasn't referring to the cake, I was referring to her!" Rarity said, pointing at the pink unicorn.
"That filly, the unicorn? Now, you're going to think this is strange, but she is my great-great-great-great-great aunt!" Rarity said.
Both Pinkie and David looked at her and the pink unicorn multiple times, thinking how is that possible...well David was.
"She doesn't look that great" Pinkie said.
'Well what'd you expect, that Rarity was voiced by-...Spike...wow...that is disturbing, no wonder Spike and Rarity were made for each other...even if Rarity doesn't know it yet" David thought with a sly smile on his face.
(For anyone who doesn't understand, Cathy Weseluck also voiced Rarity in My Little Pony: The Runaway Rainbow as well as Spike in Friendship Is Magic...this was researched BTW, I didn't watch The Runaway Rainbow because it's...too...*Shudder*. ANYWAYS, BACK TO THE PLOT!)
"At any rate, we should meet back up with Twilight. I'm sure she'd want to know about this" Rarity said, snapping David out of his thoughts.
"And that other pony too" Pinkie added.
"What pony, I don't see him/her" David said.
"The one that looks like me, right there!" Pinkie said as she pointed to her fat doppelganger.
This Pinkie Pie was wearing everything that was pink. She had a pink coat and mane plus she had a pink hat, pink cup, pink plate and pink chair. Only her eyes and cutie mark were a different colour.
"Do you think she likes pink?" David asked flatly.
"Yes she does" Rarity replied.
"Yeah, that's too much pink, even for me" Pinkie added.
Unfortunately for them, the words, somehow, got to the fat Pinkie Pie doppelganger and she responded by pulling out a glare which would have made Fluttershy's Stare run home to its mommy.
Pinkie, David and Rarity all screamed and ran off, albeit Rarity and Pinkie ran to the mountain while David hid in a bush.
"Ok, that is, officially, the scariest thing I ever saw, the torture scene can run home for all I care!" David shouted.
"Wait...ah crap they ran off without me again...oh well, I guess I can go find Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash" David said out loud as he sneaked his way to the centre of town.
"Now if I'm right, Twilight's house should be right...here" David finished as he soon saw that there was no tree house.
Instead in its place there was a large, square, gaudy yellow building with some large square windows. Something about the building was trying to tell David that it was modern but he thought it looked forced.
"Weird" Rainbow Dash said, alerting David, again, to her position.
"Ah there you two are" David said as he came around a corner of the building.
"David, we were worried you might have got lost" Fluttershy said softly.
"I wasn't" Dash said, which David responded with a glare.
"Hey what does this say: POSER'S Photos by Fluttershy...Fluttershy?" David questioned as he looked to the timid pegasus and back to the poster.
"Posers? Never saw a more accurate sign in my life" Dash huffed.
"Should we go in?" Fluttershy asked timidly.
"Well...hey, don't forget we're lookin' for some kinda magic object or somethin'. Guess it wouldn't hurt to check it out. Then we'll go back to that deep-fried chocolate-covered donut shop. Those looked kinda good" Dash replied.
'...there's a deep-fried chocolate-covered donut shop in this place?' David thought to himself as they all entered the building.
As they walked in they were by the fast clicks of a camera accompanied with flashes of bright light. They saw a blue pony that wore a broad black sunhat and a large, rainbow-colored boa plus on her hooves she was wearing tiny black slippers.
"Oh yeah, Rainbow Dash! Just like that!" the Fluttershy doppelganger said while squealing with delight.
"Rainbow...Dash? Ugh!" the blue pegasus replied with disgust.
"*Chuckle* I didn't think you would be into fashion Rainbow Dash" David said quietly, which Rainbow Dash replied with a hard hit to his leg, causing pain.
"Guess it's undercover time, Posey" Dash said to Fluttershy as they both walked in the room.
"Sure thing, Prism" Fluttershy replied with a few giggles remaining.
'Oh, I have got to see this' David thought as he looked in a window.
"Just like that! Now, toss it over your shoulder – good! Now, around to the other side! Show me that flank! Yeah, Dashie! Give it to the camera – give it! Turn, the other side! Smile! Now pout, show me some lip!" the Fluttershy doppelganger instructed.
"Should we be seeing this" Dash said while coughing.
"Wow, Photo Finish was never that demanding, she just kinda...took pictures" Fluttershy said while pawing the floor.
'Oh I wonder what's going to happen next' David thought as they finished up.
"That's enough for today, Fluttershy, darling!" the Rainbow Dash doppelganger said.
'Oh my god, she just acts like Rarity. Man I have got to tell this to her when I find her again' David thought as they continued speaking.
"The camera absolutely loves you, Dashie" the Fluttershy doppelganger cooed.
"Well, of course, darling! I am absolutely dashing, after all! And your eye for beauty makes all of my photos fantastic!" the Rainbow Dash doppelganger replied as they soon kissed each other.
'...what?' David thought with shock as they continued kissing.
David looked down to see Dash and Fluttershy were standing there with their mouths agape. He was trying so hard not to laugh at this point but it was becoming too much for him. Finally, their alternate selves finished kissing.
"Let's go in the back and...develop some of these pictures" the Fluttershy doppelganger said to the Rainbow Dash doppelganger as they went into the back room.
"Let's go check out that donut shop. I don't see how these guys get any business. I mean, who's watching the store?" Dash said while they walked out of the building.
"Wait...where's David?" Fluttershy asked as they soon realised that David was nowhere in sight.
David made sure that nopony was looking in the field before bursting out with laughter. He couldn't believe that in another alternate universe, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash would make out.
"That has got to be one of the most funniest things I have ever seen" David said while laughing away.
When he finished laughing, David had a look around to see if Applejack was anywhere in sight. Finally, he spotted her near a hillside and went up to her.
"Applejack what's wrong?" David asked.
"David, ah thought you wer' gon'" Applejack asked in return.
Too be continued...
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