Please read;;
As I re-read through my story deciding on whether or not I'll update soon, it has come to my attention that Jace might as well be a Mary-Sue. I casually let her father die off and let her recover quickly. She only has the intentions of saving L and has not an ounce of care to help the Task Force and ensure and save lives. The super-natural part, well, I'm not sure if that's Mary-Sue as well, considering the fact that there is super-natural things in Death Note; but, the angel is slightly overused and I'm beginning to wonder if she should be the opposite or stay the same.
I would like your opinions on whether or not that I should change the story and rewrite it (which I will have all chapters completed, that I can promise you). I will take down the chapters and rewrite, if you guys don't mind.
Please leave an opinion on whether or not I should rewrite. The thought of Jace's slight (or much) cliche-ness irks me.