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Red.
Beautiful, bloody red.
The whole world…just turned red.
Fuck, snap out of it already, bitch!
No…no!
Leave me alone.
I don't want to go away from here…it's so beautiful.
It's not beautiful at all, retard! You killed Madara already, so stop it!
Ma…dara?
Stop…what?
SAKURA! STOP IT! Y-YOU'RE GOING TO HURT SASUKE!
Hurt…I like hurt…hurt is red…
You…You IDIOT! Stop it! …Please…Sasuke is…
Sasuke…Sasuke…
I…know Sasuke…
Sasuke-kun…is…
HURT?
No, no, no! That's not true! You're lying! LYING!
Let me out of here!
GET me out of here!
And once again Sakura opened her eyes but this time they weren't a cold and at the same time brutal violet…they were deep green like the sea filled with warmth.
Blinking she took in her surroundings.
There wasn't one tree that wasn't slashed in half and everything was covered in blood.
Hell, she was covered in blood but she felt no pain.
In front of her lay a bloody mess of a body.
She could barely recognize it as Madara.
But…where was…
Turning around she saw him.
It was like the pressure on your ears popped.
Suddenly she could feel again.
She felt scars she got from previous battles.
She felt the nearly unbearable pain in her eyes.
She felt her body covered in blood.
She felt the wounds taken from Madara.
And the worst was…she could feel the fear again.
Finally her legs couldn't hold her any longer and she fell to the ground.
Pain radiated from the big slash on her right leg but she ignored it.
He was all she could see.
"Sas…uke…"
Her eyes widened and again realisation hit her.
"No! No, Sasuke, you can't leave me alone again.
Not after I just found you."
She crawled over to him.
"Please, Sasuke, please."
Finally she reached him.
"Sasuke…open your eyes…"
Her hands reached out on their own taking Sasuke's wrist professionally and checking for a pulse.
After some impatience waiting a little thump made Sakura's life suddenly seem a lot brighter.
He's…alive.
GOD DAMN HE'S ALIVE!
Hurriedly she pumped all chakra she could muster up into her hands where an odd green light occurred.
She healed him as long as she could. It was as if she tried to pour her whole life into him.
After some time Sasuke' breath finally became normal again and his abnormal pale skin wasn't that pale anymore.
Relieve washed over Sakura's body.
Now the only thing she'd had to do was carry 2 bodies to Konoha while she even hadn't enough strength to stand up.
Lovely, just lovely.
YOSH, WE GONNA DO THIS OR WHAT?
FIGHT!
FIGHT!
Sighing she pushed herself off the ground and roughly threw Madara's corpse over her shoulder.
More gently she picked up Sasuke and started a nerve wrecking journey towards her home.
It started to rain.
And again…lovely, just lovely.
(A/N: Oh…just so you guys won't be confused…before I wrote from saku's pov in 3th person…now it's going to be…kinda narrator speaking or something :DD)
Even on rainy days like these Konoha's streets were busy.
But the gates were, as usually, empty because the most traveller didn't want to be travelling through such a strong storm.
So it was even more surprising for the two gate guards to see a shadow approaching in the distance.
After some while they were able to make out a person carrying a person and dragging another one.
The dragged person looked kind of dead.
And kind of…like Madara!
"Sakura-sama is back!", one of the guards cried out happily.
(A/N: Now it's Saku's POV again ;) )
She could see it already.
The gates were coming closer behind it the newly rebuild Konoha.
For a second she smiled.
Then her expressions deformed into a grimace of pain.
Her back was sore.
Her hands hurt from clinging so long to various clothes and body parts.
Her stomach hurt because she was just this hungry.
She was cold from the rain.
Her eyes hurt like hell from using the Sorengan.
Her legs were sore and her one leg hurt because of the big, bleeding slash.
All in all Sakura was in living hell.
But it was worth it. Every thing was worth it if she could just save Sasuke.
Determination shone in her emerald eyes while she left behind the last meters between her and Konoha's gate.
Just 3 steps.
Her unharmed leg moved forward, dragging the other one behind it.
Adjust her shoulder to carry Sasuke more gently.
Flip her hand forward to move Madara's corpse.
2 steps.
Repeat the task.
1 step.
Repeat the task.
She…was there.
Finally, she was home again.
Coughing up blood she spoke before collapsing on the ground.
"Ta…daima."
The guards were rushing towards her.
Sakura looked around.
She sat in a beautiful garden she didn't recognize.
Cherry blossom trees were nearly everywhere and when a strong wind picked up she was blinded by cherry blossoms.
She strechted out her hands to catch some of them and just when she twirled around, she saw Sasuke approaching her.
Happily she jumped into his arms.
"Sakura…", her murmered, his voice muffled as he spoke into her hair.
She enjoyed the tingling his breath brought her.
She lifted her head, knocking his off hers in the process, and looked into his eyes.
Sasuke leaned down and she could feel his hot breath near her ear.
"I love you."
Shocke crossed her face but soon was replaced by a gentle smile.
"Ah, I love you too, Sasuke."
He began kissing her ear, wandering to her cheekbone, along her jaw and finally he kissed her onto the lips.
It was a gentle kiss full of love.
Careful he shoved his tongue into Sakura's slightly opened mouth and glided over her tongue.
After he explored her mouth thoroughly they broke apart needing to catch their breath.
Now it was Sasuke's turn to gently smile at her.
Before blood began to trickle down at the sides of his lips.
Suddenly the scenery around Sakura changed.
Everything was gray, dark and dead.
There wasn't one single cherry blossom on the paltry covered trees.
She looked around her and noted that everything…was covered in blood.
And when she said everything, she meant everything!
Every stone, every tree and even the no longer really existing grass.
Again she searched for Sasuke's eyes.
He was still smiling at her but the blood didn't stop.
And his eyes looked…kind of empty…dead.
Then, looking down, she saw a katana stuck thorough his back right into his heart.
Suddenly Sakura's eyes shot open and she was blinded by bright, hospital lights.
But there was only one thought evading her mind.
Sasuke.
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