To shivanisharma9... its really nice to see your harsh comments but I would have accepted your all bashing if I also got your appreciative comments... I never give dhamki that I am not going to continue... But in my professional busy schedule its really difficult for me to write on daily basis... if my story is not worth to read then spending time on it is does not make any sense so i asked for free comments from those... hwo values the writer
If You are regular reader then why don't you comment on daily basis... or you only knows bashing to others...
other thing never forget writers have there personal life too... so if they are busy in it and not able to update for some time... don't treat them as of they are the cause of destroying world... I read your harsh comments on others story to and that time also I challenged just write a story... in free flow and then do harsh comments as you do on daily basis...
Sorry to others for my above post...
final Knock down
Daya left Manisha in that room and slowly move towards the room where Doctor takes those girls before…. He checks the door of the room… When he enters, he can see a mini operation theater….. He over further inside… on a table 5 places name and near to name of place one bomb is visible… but there are only 4 bombs….. they are different in nature… before he can touch that bombs two men enters inside… Daya move under the bed…
M1: Isss room ka darwaja khula kaise tha…..
M2: pata nahi under toh koi nahi dikh raha hai…..
M1: Hmmm ek kam karo chalo jaldi se yaha se bahar nikalo or door locks kardo…
M2: haan agar boss aagaya toh hum dono ko jinda nahi chodega….. akhir itani mehnat se yeh bombs Indiake bahar se yahatak pohoche hai….
M1: haan sahi kaha per agar inko remot se operate kiya ja sakata hai toh unn ladakiyo ke pet se isse nikal ne ki jarurat kya thi…..
M2: kue ki agar yeh bombs unke sharir me rehe toh inke barud se unnki jaan ja sakti hai….. fir yeh boms unnke destination tak carry karne ke liye kis or ki madat lene padti bas issi liye….
Both left the place…. Daya come out from hiding place check the bombs….. he tries to understand it's a karo ya maro situation he has to take the risk and diffuse all the bombs… he finally…. After so much discussion with him self he decided to cut the red wire…..
He cut for first bomb and it got diffused….. then second third and fourth…. As soon as he finished fourth one listen Baldev's voice…. So in hurry he try to move at hiding place… but here his bad luck catches him….
Drugs, no food and water situation makes Daya to feel uneasy and he fall down….. When he fall down his head bang with three things first with the equipment stand then at the age of bed and last on floor… In a result, He becomes unconscious immediately…
Back from Flash back
Daya: or Jab sham ko hosh aaya… maine moka pake picheke raste se bhag kar high way pohoch gaya….
Abhijeet (he is confused): Daya sham ko nahi tu dusare din sham ko hosh aaya tha….. or intani der tu waha behosh tha kisine dekha kaise nahi…
Daya also be come shocked…
ACP: Abhijeet hota hai aaisa kabhi kabhi.… acha Daya Ab tum aram karo bad me bat karte hai…..
Before Daya start Manisha takes leave from them…
Here out side…..
ACP said some thing in Abhijeets ear…. Abhijeet is stunt to listen it….
ACP: Abhijeet hume yeh karan hi hoga
Abhijeet in tears: Sir woh Bhai hai mera…. Dost hai…. sare rishte muse ussise mile hai….. nahi sir hum aaisa nahi karenge…. Agar galti se bhi chotisi glati ho gayi na toh sab kahatam ho jayega…..
ACP: Abhijeet mat bhulo ki tum or woh dono CID officers ho….
Abhijeet in firm tone: issi liye humari life itani sasti haina sir…..
ACP look at Abhijeet a pain in ACP's eye make Abhijeet realize that the decision for this thing is not so easy for him: Abhijeet yeh mere orders hai or inhe tumhe pura karana hai…
Abhijeet in determining tone: yes sir (he further raise the query) Sir per aap ko aaisa kue lagat hai ki yeh sab kal hi hoga…
ACP: takes out a sketch from his pocket…. Yeh Manishane banwaya hua Baldev ka skect…. Agar isski dadhi muche hatwaye or isse thoda young kare toh yeh aaisa dikehega….. ACP shows him edited pictures print out… Abhijeet see towards it and shocked…..
In the evening….. Abhijeet took Daya at Hidding place… in whole way Abhijeet is tensed…..
Daya who is at passenger seat… feeling dowzy…. When he try to sleep in between he open his eayes with jerk Abhikeet after seeing his jerk stops the car…..
Abhijeet with concer: kya bat hai Daya aaise kue uthe…
Daya hide his all emotions: Nahi kuch nahi bas aaise hi….
Abhijeet can smell something wrong but currently he is concern with some thing which is worst than this…..
After this Daya d close his eyes but not for more than a minute… he is forcing to his eyes not to close…..
Finally they reach at a place… Daya was shock to see the place…
Daya in shock: Abhi kaha leke aayeho muse….. muse laga hum ghar ja rahai hai….
Abhijeet hide his face in car dickey to remove bags: Daya please kuch mat puch abhi…
Daya like a obeyed child follow Abhijeet… they spend night there…. For two different reasons both Abhijeet and Daya spend sleep less night…Its one of the rare night when there is a pin drop silence when only DUO are alone in same room….. no teasing no masti….. Abhijeet seating on rolling chair with open eyes and Daya at bed…
In the morning, Abhijeet went out to call ACP sir as the room where they kept Daya is a room that had a signal jammer….. no out side signals can work in it….
Daya was at wash room taking batha….. when he heard a door sound… At onece he feel that its not Abhijeet who enters…. So he takes quick shower and come out…
He saw Abhijeet entering in room… Abhijeet came near to him
Abhijeet: kya hua…. Aaise kue dekh raha hai ho,…
Daya: agar tum ab ander aayeho toh thodi der pehele kon aaya tha…..
A voice rose: mai aaya tha
Duo turn around and See Baldev in front of them…
Abhijeet (In harsh) tumhari yaha aane ki himat kaise hue tuse toh mai nahi chodunga..
He move towards Baldev but stop at once… As Baldev is carring a remot in His hands
Baldev: Thoda bhi hilana mat Abhijeet warana tumhara pyaara dost iss duniya ko alwida kar dega…
Abhijeet stops at his place….. but Daya started moving fuether in full anger… Abhijeet cluch his wrist and singnal him to stop… Daya was shocked…
Baldev: aaise hairan mat ho Daya Abhijeet joh kar raha hai woh sahi hai…..
Abhijeet (firm but a bit pleading tone): Jony dekh uss remot ko chod de…..
Baldev: Ohh toh tumne muse pehechan liya Abhijeet
Daya (smirks): Snr Insp Abhijeet Mujrimo ka na pehechan sake aaisa ho hi nahi sakta Jony
Jony: Bohot ghamad haina Daya tuse apane dost pe… (Daya only give koi shak look to him and walk towards Abhijeet he stand exactly one step behind Abhijeet)… acha per kya jante ho aaj tumhari joh bhi halat hai ussaki wajah tumhara yeh dost hai…..
Daya move ahead in anger…. But Abhijeet stops him….
Jony: Itaana ghusa sehat ke liye thi nahi hai Daya… pata hai tumhe woh painful din uss kamre me kue bitane pade… kue tuhare setiments ko maine itani buru tarah se hurt kiya hai ki ab tum do minute aapni aankhe band bhi nahi kar sakte….. (Abhijeet look at Daya… Daya look at him and move his head down)…. Or Janate ho aaj tumhara yeh dost tumhe kue rok raha hai kue ki mere hath me yeh remot hai….. yeh remot jisme tumhari jindagi band hai…. (Daya give look to Abhijeet and now Abhijeet move his head down)
Abhijeet pleading to Jony: Dekh Jony tumhe agar musase problem hai toh tum musase bala lo tum Daya ko kue bich me la rahai ho….
Jony: Ab samaj raha haina… ki aapno ko dard hota hai toh kaisa lagata hai… mere Billu ka kya kasur tha… museum me chori maine ki thi ACP se paise maine liye the…. Toh tumne mere bhai Billu ko kue goli mar…. Muse marte na…. nahi jaise mai tadapa hue na aapne Billu ke liye waise tum bhi tadpo ge ab… puri jindagi…..
Jony press his thumb on remot and Abhijeet takes out his gun and shoot and his hand all happened in a bink of time…..
Abhijeet look at Daya who gives him a smile and assure him as he is ok…..
Jony: koi bat nahi Abhijeet mai isse mar nahi paya toh kya hua….. Issaki humesha khuli ankhe….. jinme humesha nind ki talash hogi….. jab thak ke yeh sona chahega or nahi so payega… usski humesha ki baichaini tumhe her waqt todti rahai gi….. jaise mai tut raha hue waise….. (a really scary laugh by Jony makes Abhijeet shiver)
Daya then give jhapad to Jony….. and he says that after coming out from jail he Join this Gang and who gives this mission to him… in a parralor he planned all this things for Daya….. he not able to complite his mission as Daya and Abhijeet difused all the bombs…. When he retun with fifth bomb….. He saw all 4 bombs are difussed and Daya was lying on the floor….. so he placed a cheap bom in Daya's body and left the place with Fifth bomb…
He wanted to kill Daya on the 11th September as it's a date when Billu died…..
Duting the operation he got Daya's blood sample which he use to mislead Abhijeet by placing it on the wooden trap door and sending that CD to bureau.
here is the end of the suspense some light movements and a special surprise scene will be waiting for you all ahead... which i will update on sunday...