Searching for the Heir of the Time Lord

by arKlight.RevIsion

Sequel to Chance Meeting. Carter and Sadie find a prophecy, which tells of the only possible demigod son of Kronos. Now, they go on a quest to find him, before the other Titans do, and use him to destroy the gods. But what will happen? Review please.

10. An Important Author's Note READ PLEASE

Important Author's Note:

Chapter 10 is still unfinished, oh say around 1000 words still, but I really need to ask you guys a few questions, and I REALLY need to know these:

1. Are my OC's becoming, oh I don't know… Mary Sues and Gary Stus?

2. Is the plot a little overused? Should I change it (because it's still early in the story…)

3. Are you guys even reading this story? ('Cause I'm getting a feeling that it's being neglected…)

4. Should I still continue this story?

Tell me your honest opinions guys, because as much as I enjoy praise, constructive criticism is actually a bit helpful too. :D