"Talking"
'Writing'
'Thinking'
"Person on other side of phone"
/Bitbeast talk/
//Bladers talking to bitbeasts//
"Russian"
"Italian"
Ages:
Spencer - 18
Bryan - 17
Tyson, Max, Hilary, Tala, Kimmy(Oc) - 16
Kenny, Ian - 15
Kai, Ray - 6
Kimmy belongs to kimmyHiwatari.
A/N: Do you wanna know what I hate the most?This story was great, until you brought Kimmy in. She's not needed and is
rather pointless. Anyone canon can do the same thing she's doing now.
And the fact that's she Kai's sister makes it worst. Get rid of her.
I'm sorry, but i will no longer be reading this. Kimmy ruined it completely
for me.
----Reader ()
This was a review from someone. Now the pointing out the bad parts and complaining about the story is fine, I don't care. In fact, I always thought getting complaints is good, you can make a better story built on complaints. If you don't get any then either you're super good, it sucked so bad that no one bothered to complain or the ones who reviewed are absolutely new and haven't read the good fanfics yet.
But, what I hate the most is when they don't leave an email address or a name, so you can't have their help in improving the story. If you want to say something bad about a story, don't be a coward and not mention a name or email. It's pathetic and one of the biggest things I hate about posting online.
Anyway, I'm done ranting now, on with the story!
Chapter 5 - Day 5
"It's not surprising you made coffee, Tal'. You're addiction seems to be getting worse." - Kimmy
The girl yawned and stretched, slowly turning and standing up. She moved away from the warm cocoon of blankets that seemed to be calling her back. She hesitated slightly before shaking her head and getting changed at a ridiculously slow pace.
Glancing in the mirror and catching sight of her long blue hair in a case of bad super bed hair, as she quickly snagged her brush from the dresser and worked on tugging out the nots.
Kimmy sighed as she worked on her hair, looking at the clock as she did so. It was just a little past eight in the morning and she yawned again.
Finally she finished brushing her hair and pulled it into a simple, loose ponytail before heading for the kitchen where she heard low voices. Entering, she saw Tala, looking as calm, cool and casual as ever, leaning against the counter with a steaming mug in his hand as he talked quietly to Julia, who also had a mug, though it was on the table in front of her.
Julia leaned back and ran a hand through her orange hair, smiling softly as she talked. Kimmy idly wondered what they were talking about and felt a spark of jealousy as she saw Tala give a half-smile in return.
She plopped down into a chair, pouting slightly as the redhead turned and stared at her with a raised eyebrow.
"Kim? You alright? How'd you sleep?" He asked, turning and grabbing a mug from the nearby, open cupboard and pouring some of the steaming liquid from the pot into it before sliding it over to Kimmy.
She took the cup gratefully and inhaled the strong smell of coffee, she sighed happily and leaned back in her seat, looking up at Tala.
"It's not surprising you made coffee, Tal'. You're addiction seems to be getting worse." She commented and watched in amusement as Tala coloured slightly. Julia raised her eyebrows.
"You're addicted to coffee?" Tala gave a wolfish grin.
"If you want to call it that." He replied and Kimmy opened her mouth to comment when Tala shoved a hand into his pocket and pulled out a cellphone, opening it. He gave both girls a semi-apologetic look before answering.
"Yeah?" He answered in Italian and Kimmy huffed, not knowing the language.
"We've got a problem." Tala raised an eyebrow.
"Oh? And what kind would that be?" He asked lowly and turned to head out the door.
"We got the files but while we were there we found another. This is really serious. The file has information on Kai, Dranzer, Black Dranzer and Ray Kon. Something about giving them proper training and wiping out their memories." Tala frowned.
"Kai and Kon are both six again. They don't remember us, is that how they planned to erase their memories?" There was shuffling of papers on the other end.
"It doesn't say, but it's a good guess. How long have they been like that?" The redhead sighed and leaned against the wall.
"Roughly five days. Granger and Tate found them like that one morning, no warnings. And they were both acting fine the night before." There was a pause before a tired sigh.
"Look, it doesn't say anything about messing with their age but if they plan to carry on with this plan of theirs, they'll attack soon. I'll get the others and rent out a room in a hotel or somewhere nearby. And don't you dare try and argue that it's too dangerous. You and I both know that we'll never stand back and watch you take the fight on by yourself." Tala forced himself to relax and let a tiny smile cross his features.
"Alright but call Dickinson. He may be able to help you find somewhere to stay." There was a soft chuckle from the other side.
"Yeah, alright Tal'. Bye." Tala closed his eyes briefly.
"I'll see you later then. Oh and Bry? Thanks." Then he hung up. The Russian rolled his eyes and muttered 'idiots' under his breath before he head back into the kitchen, sliding his phone back into his pocket. He really needed another cup of coffee.
Kimmy looked up when he entered the room again, she jumped up.
"Well?" She demanded, "What the hell was that about?" Tala just shrugged nonchalantly, grabbing his mug from where he had left it on the counter.
"Nothing you need to worry about, Kim." He answered and Kimmy scowled.
"It obviously has something to do with my brother, so don't you tell me I don't need to worry!" She glared venomously but the look didn't even bother the redheaded Russian.
Julia sat back and decided not two get involved, letting the two Russians sort it out.
"Kimberly." The girl cringed at the use of her full name. "Don't get yourself involved." She stiffened but then looked away, unable to stare into the ice blue eyes that were narrowed in a very dark and very scary glare.
"Fine." She grumbled, barely audible and slammed her cup down. "Then I'll use my own resources to find out what the hell is going on." With that, she turned and stormed out of the room, Tala not making a move to stop her.
Julia watched him closely.
"You're just going to let her go? What if she gets hurt or something?" Tala sighed, turning his head to stare out the window.
"She needs to learn that not everything about her brother needs to be about her too. I know she's worried and will probably do something reckless but you can't always rely on someone else to watch over you. She still needs to grow up, even if she tries to act like Kai, she really doesn't know how dangerous people can be." Julia nodded slightly.
"Even though I understand what she's going through, I have to agree with you. There are times where I don't help Raul because I know he needs to learn to be independent when the time comes that I'm not around to protect him." Tala took a sip of his now cold coffee.
"She'll come back when she realizes that." He said, placing his cup in the sink and walking out of the kitchen. Julia sighed as she heard the front door slam closed and knew that Kimmy had just stormed out.
Things were really starting to get out of hand and she began to wonder what she had dragged herself and her brother into.
Hey, sorry for the lateness of this update but with Christmas coming up, I had to do the last minute shopping. Also, I'm sorry for the shortness but I did kinda rush this chapter a lot. Sorry about there being no Kai and Ray being cuties in this chapter, so I'll just have to add lots in the next!
Anyway, happy holidays (or happy break if you don't celebrate Christmas) and new year.
Laterz,
Shadow
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