Chapter 12
Leddie in Beddie.
AN: okay the title isn't my best work but it's funny and gives you an idea on what the chapters about. Now I know ya'll are all craving more Leddie scenes and here it is. I'm SUPER nervous about this chapter on how ya'll will react so PLEASE REVIEW or I'll die of embarrassment and never write again. hehe okay so Beware this chapters is intense.
. don't sue me, I'm changing the setting. And like I said I'm real nervous. If u don't like it pm me and if you do REVIEW THAT SHIT DAWG. Hehe okay so taken the wonderful advice from (get ready, shout out) oh wait never mind a guest made that review, crap. Gosh, if you write an awesome review please put your name so you can get a shout out goshhh! Haha well thanks to the advice from a guest, this chapter and JUST THIS CHAPTER. Will run a bit different, first of all I used a lot of metaphors and hyperboles for things. (if you know what I mean;] ) and I changed the point of view to first person (Loren's point of view) chapter 13 will go back to 3rd person like usual but this chapters in Loren's point of view lol. So you get the feeling your doing Eddie lol jk ENJOY!
SETTING: EDDIE AND LOREN's ISLAND BUNGALOW:
Eddie threw me on the bed, and I kissed his warm tender lips like there was no tomorrow. His hands ran up my hips and chest, and stopped as he cupped my face releasing his gentle rhythmic breaths into my lungs.
Each kiss, sweeter then the last took me out of this planet. Although I was no longer on Mars, I was plummeting to Earth like a shooting star, with Eddie Duran kissing and nibbling my neck like I was a gentle peach.
Eddie sat up, still above me, and dragged his palm from the center of my chest to the bottom of my stomach, leaving chills running up my spine.
We sat there gazing upon each other with our caring eyes. His told me he loved me, and I just smiled enjoying the moment.
Our bodies sank into the 19th century king bed. I sat back in the embrace of a million cloud soft peach pillows.
The transparent creamy colored sheets hanging from the bed's canopy swayed from a breeze and gave us a sense that we were the only two people on Earth.
And as far as I was concerned…we were.
Eddie bit his lip and ripped off his shirt revealing his perfectly chiseled chest and arms.
Unable to resist, I sat up and caressed his six pack. My delicate hand trailed up towards his pecks, his shoulders, and down his brawny arms.
Eddie's skin was smooth, hot, and slightly sweaty.
Diffidently to make a big move, I began kissing his neck as he ran his hands through my long scrunched hair.
He tasted like sunshine and sea salt. My lips and tongue traveled up his neck over to his right ear. I nibbled his lobe seductively, before going to his heart shaped lips.
I put my one arm around his neck, and my other with my hand on his chest, feeling his heart beat.
Our hearts beat in sync. Rapidly beating with each other, longing, yearning, craving each other.
His tongue cuddling with mine made the butterflies in my stomach go through metamorphosis.
My body responded to every touch, and before I knew it, our passion grew fierce.
Together, we ripped off my shirt and threw it who cares where.
The heartthrob then picked me up and sat me on his lap, facing him with my legs wrapped around his waist.
I threw both my arms around his neck and pulled him closer, kissing him. His skin was smooth and soft. He was a cloud and I was in heaven.
The angels were singing the ballad of love, although the place was silent disregarding the heavy breaths and moans.
Eddie ran his hands up and down my back and neck, letting the pads of his fingertips trickle and caress my skin.
Although the scene was hot, Eddie gave me goose bumps.
He slowly unhooked my bra and threw it elsewhere. In that motion, he tackled me to the bed, straight on my back.
Exposing myself still seemed strange, but Eddie was to be mine, and in return I was to be his.
We swapped candy coated saliva, and I hugged him to be closer, though he was never close enough.
He lifted his head from our kissing. Eyes dazed, he smiled and spoke softly, "I love you Loren." he whispered caressing my cheek with his palm.
I looked up at my prince charming and nearly died.
His chiseled bronze-olive chest, his luminous sparkling brown eyes gazing at me like I was a candy bar. And his black hair that was beginning to curl due to getting longer hung to the nape of his neck. All made him gorgeous. He bit his pouted pink lips and broke with a sweet smile.
"I love you too, Eddie." I whispered back.
Eddie grinned and leaned down, giving me a soft, tender, loving kiss.
He then turned his focus elsewhere and unbuttoned my shorts. Along with my panties he gently slid them off, down my legs, and threw them elsewhere.
His eyes were the lock and key to my heart and with a final sparkle they aimed for my lips and he began kissing me again.
I ran my hands through his thick black hair and his neck, and wrapped my left leg around his right pant leg.
We released the kiss and Eddie scoped me and I put my hand on his cheek scoping his eyes.
He unbuckled his pants and dropped them to his ankles.
He then jumped on me and there we began the slow dance of love.
A spark flared into the sky and ignited a conflagration of the stars. A pyrotechnic display of love danced in the sky as we moved.
I wrapped my legs around his waist and locked my ankles together. I scratched his neck and back, and closed my eyes.
Eddie smiled and panted, resting his head on my chest.
We moved as one to the song of the angels. Up down, back and forth, circle to circle, kiss to nibble we had found love in a hopeless place.
Out of the darkness and into the sun, my heart had opened up to great lengths as I accepted Eddie's love, trust, and compassion.
Last night had been different. It was still remarkable, no doubt. But now, I could enjoy him.
I thought beautiful thoughts. Eddie and I were in the utter most love and the moans and screams were codes of our confessions of love.
Eddie had finally loved me as much as I loved him. We had survived through so many dire tragedies and dramas, there was no stopping us now.
I was his fiancé, his real, one and only true love, his everything.
His love was a river and my insecurities were the dam. He had broken through and flowed into my heart.
His embrace flowed through my veins and every thought in my mind, was wrapped around him.
"Eddie.." I moaned as he fell to the bed beside me
He chuckled satisfied and happy
"I could defiantly get used to this." he whispered leaning over for a kiss.
"mmmhmm" I agreed kissing him softly.
We had both gotten dressed and stable before walking out our front door to see what everyone else was doing. As I walked out the porch feeling the sun and ocean breeze I stood there befuddled and dazed holding Eddie's hand.
How can one just go back to reality from traveling the galaxy?
AN: okaaayyy short chapter, super worried, not one of my best but here it is. Hopefully this wonder Leddie scene will keep to satisfied until I post something new.
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