Back to writing on Twilight's Foal and I'm working to get this done before the end of Christmas Day. I'm still trying to etch the story along till it hits some major points but until then I'm just trying to build details that lead up to such events. Last time I left of, Applejack had just been kicked out of her home because Granny Smith had just found out about her relationship with Rarity. So I'm going to do this next chapter on Fluttershy and Big Macintosh just so I can expand the story. So here we go.
"What did it say?" Big Macintosh called into the bathroom. "Hold on just a few more seconds and we should have an answer." Fluttershy said as she walked into the bedroom. In her hoof she held a small white object in her hand. After a little while longer a small pink negative sign appeared on the object. "Oh not again," Fluttershy said starting to hold a grim expression as she made her way over to the bed. "It's not your fault Fluttershy." Big Macintosh said as he to climbed onto the bed and laid next to her. "Well wait if it is what if I can't have foals." She said laying her head in her hooves. "Now Fluttershy, I'm sure you're as healthy as can be," Big Macintosh said trying to her to feel better. "Well maybe it's not me," she said starting to think. "Now hold on little missy, ain't nothin' wrong with my body parts." Macintosh said starting to get on the defensive. "Well if there is something wrong don't you wanna know?" Fluttershy said sitting up and getting off the bed. "Yeah I mean I want ta be a dad and all but how do we learn that?" "We could go to the doctor's office and see." "Okay, but wait I think we should try one more time before go see this doctor." Big Macintosh said pulling her back onto the bed and crawling on top of her.
Twilight had just walked into the palace and made her way toward Celestia's bedroom. Escorted by two guards she made her way to the large door. Celestia was reading a book when a disgruntled Twilight walked into her presence. "Twilight what's wrong?" Celestia asked getting up and walking over to her student. She brought her back student and laid her down on her bed and wrapped her wing around her body. Twilight then told the horrible story of the night before and how she had lost her husband. "Oh my god, Twilight I am so sorry, is there anything that I can do to help." "Not unless you can resurrect." Twilight said rubbing her belly and feeling for her foal. Celestia laid her hoof on her students belly and felt the tiny moments as well. "You're going to have a beautiful foal Twilight." Celestia said as she felt the tiny mass of baby pony. "As for resurrection, I think I might have a possible solution." Celestia said. "Really," Twilight" said as she perked. "Please tell me princess, I can't live without him in my life." "Alright but this is very advanced magic and would take a long time to create." Celestia said. "How long?" Twilight asked. "Possibly half a year." Celestia said. "But princess within half a year, I could deliver the foal." Twilight said getting out of her wing's embrace. "I'm sorry Twilight but this is the only way that you can get him back." Celestia said.
Back at Fluttershy and Macintosh's house.
Macintosh laid next to his sleeping wife and thought to himself. "Man, I might be a dad soon, unless somthin' goes wrong at the doctors' office." He then thought about how Fluttershy would take it if in fact one of them couldn't produce any foals, she would be heartbroken. He knew that she wanted to be a mother and he himself wouldn't mind being a dad but he just prayed to Celestia that nothing would go wrong. He finally shut his eyes and fell into a deep sleep. He was suddenly woken up when a large blue flash that appeared from the room's corner. He leaned over to see that Fluttershy was still asleep. He was about to nudge her awake when a thundering voice called out to him. "Stop, don't awaken her, let her rest." "Who are you?" Big Macintosh asked as he reared up in his bed. The pony came into his view. "Princess Luna?" he called out to her. "Yes, it is me and I have heard your prayers and I have an offer for you to decide." Luna said walking over to his side of the bed. "What is it?" he replied. "I know that you and Fluttershy wish to have children." Luna said. "Yes maam," "Well I'll impregnate Fluttershy with your foal," Luna said. "Really," Big Macintosh said ecstatic. "Yes, but the deal is that if I do this for you, you are never to sleep with another mare again because if you do you shall meet an unfortunate end." Luna said becoming very serious. Big Macintosh thought about it, how he promised Fluttershy that he would never be unfaithful again and this was going to enforce that promise. If he was unfaithful he would suffer the consequence. "I accept," Big Macintosh said. "Know that I will always be watching you and I will know if you wind up in bed with another mare." Luna said as she walked over to Fluttershy's side of the bed and levitated the covers to about her waist then she touched her horn to her belly. The horn illuminated to the cobalt blue. She then walked away but not before stopping and saying something back to Macintosh. "Your foal should be born in the next 7 months; congratulations you're going to be parents." She then flashed her way out of the room. Big Macintosh then pulled Fluttershy close to him and began to rub her belly. He then fell into a deep sleep.
The next day, Macintosh awoken to see Fluttershy walking into the bathroom. "Was that all a dream?" Macintosh thought to himself. He then heard an ecstatic yell from the bathroom. "Macintosh come quick." Fluttershy yelled for from the bathroom. Big Mac jumped out of bed so quickly that he fell onto the floor. Never the less he quickly made it to the bathroom when a small white object was presented to him. The slender white object had a small pink cross on it. Fluttershy jumped into his hooves. "I can't believe we're going to be parents," Fluttershy squeaked. Big Macintosh almost shed a tear. "We have to tell someone, how about your sister?" Fluttershy said. "Um… alright," He said nervously. Macintosh went to the phone on the bedside table and dialed the number for Sweet Apple Acres. After a few moments of dial tone Granny Smith answered. "Hello Granny, can I talk to Applejack?" If you wanna talk to that little whore, call her at her skank girlfriend's house." She screamed before she hung up. Right before he hung up he heard a voice still coming from the phone. "Macintosh, Fluttershy is that you?" Applebloom asked. "Yeah, lil' sis what is Granny going on about?" Macintosh asked. "She kicked out Applejack a couple days ago and since then she's totally taken over the farm." "What do you mean?" Big Mac asked. "I mean she making me do the applebuckin' and she's gonna make me drop out of school to work the farm." Applebloom said whisper yelling "Oh no," Fluttershy said. They thought about it for a second. "I'm gonna go get her would you set up a guest bedroom for her." Big Macintosh said walking toward the door. "Wait I don't want you to get in trouble with your granny." Fluttershy said trying to stop her husband. "Now Fluttershy I can't sit by while Applebloom's forced to do labor." Macintosh said walking toward the farm.
"Applebloom are you here," Macintosh called out as he walked through the gates into the farm. Applebloom was trying her very hardest to applebuck but was doing it to no avail. She had stopped to breathe when she heard a very familiar voice. "Macintosh is that you?" she called out to him. Big Macintosh walked up and saw his little sister. Her legs were bruised and battered from all the applebucking she was doing. "Macintosh you're here!" she screamed as she ran up and hugged him. "what are ya doin' here?" Applebloom asked letting go of her brother. "I'm gonna see if I can take y'all to live with me and Fluttershy." Big Mac said as he made his way toward the house to talk with Granny Smith. "No you can't, she's crazy now and I don't she how you'll convince her to let me go with you." She yelled trying to reason with her brother. "Now just stay here and I'll talk with granny." Big Macintosh said as he entered the home. Once he entered he saw Granny Smith on rocking in her chair. "Granny, I've got somthin' to tell ya." Macintosh said. "What would it be grandson?" Granny Smith said. "I wanna take Applebloom to live with me and Fluttershy." Macintosh said in a direct tone. "Then who would do the applebucking?" Granny Smith starting to sprout and angry face on her face. Macintosh started to look around the room. This wasn't a question that he was prepared to answer. "Well I thought Applejack was taking care of the farm since I got married." Macintosh said still slightly confused about the argument that she and Applejack had a few days ago. "Well she doesn't live here anymore and she not coming back." She yelled in her elderly voice. "Why did you make her leave?" he asked her. "Because she's a filly fooler and it just ain't natural." She yelled. "Well she's your granddaughter and you're supposed to love her no matter whom she loves." Macintosh trying to push the blame back onto her. "I'm sorry but I just can't accept her decision and I may be cruel but it's my choice." Granny Smith said before turning away. "Okay, I wish things were different, but I am taking Applebloom with me so unless you got anything to say about it I'll be leaving." Macintosh said before walking out of the house. Granny Smith said nothing as he walked out but rather started to cry. I just a matter of days she lost the love and respect of three of her grandchildren.
Fluttershy was pacing around as she set up the room for Applebloom. She was singing for the unborn foal that was now developing in her body. From across the room another expression was being held. Angel Bunny stared angrily at Fluttershy. The last eight months had been horrible for him. Ever since she had gotten married his power in the household was all but taken away from him. Macintosh had even convinced her to stop listening to him. Now that she was pregnant he was going to lose even more privileges. Everything was the fault of Big Macintosh; he knew that if he was out of the picture everything that was great before in life would be back. He also knew of the deal that was made between him and Luna. One mare and he would die. All he had to do was to get a weak stallion to be unfaithful. But how would he find such a mare. He walked around the house when he found an advertisement on a newspaper. On it was an ad for hardwood floor repair. The ad also showed a picture of the ad's owner. It was a shiny tan mare with a blue mane and a paintbrush for a cutie mark. Her name was Glossy Finish and she would be the perfect mare to get Macintosh to break his promise. Angel Bunny then ran onto the hard wood flooring and started to scratch and claw at it. After about 20 minutes the floor was in need of a good repair. He grabbed the ad and ran over to Fluttershy. "Oh Angel Bunny what do you have there?" She said taking the ad from him. He then gestured to the scratched hardwood flooring. "Oh boy we do need to get that repaired." Fluttershy said grabbing the phone and dialing the number on the ad. Angel Bunny's plan was now in motion all he had to do is wait.
Yeah I know a lot to comprehend but I just want to get the ball moving. This story actually comes second to the Notebook but I do enjoy writing this story as well. I will probably update the Notebook a few times before this is re updated. Thanks for reading this and write a review. Till next time.