Yeah I'm going to take a break on the Notebook for a little while, at least till I watch a few more episodes of Death Note and get familiar with what happens next. Last time I left off with a cliffhanger where Big Macintosh was going to screw Glossy Coat and break the promise that was made between him and Luna. So I'm just gonna pick up from that point. Write a review and tell me what you think about the story.
Big Macintosh looked down at his intoxicated lover. She was kissing his chest and beckoning him to take her. He didn't know what to do, he wanted her but something in the recesses of his mind told him not to. He wanted her so bad and whatever thought he had against it was thwarted be desire. He arched his hips back to thrust into her but everything suddenly stopped. He looked down to Glossy Coat to see that she had a look of pleasure on her face that seemed to be locked. He tried to move but couldn't move. He suddenly saw a flash of blue light emit from the corner of the room. Out of it walked Princess Luna. "I can't believe you Macintosh, after everything that life has given you, you throw it all away for a little sex. You're despicable." Luna said pulling him off Glossy Coat. Macintosh had a look of terror on his face "I'm sorry princess, but she and I were drugged by the varnish." Macintosh said pleading for mercy from Luna. "Only because it was not all your fault I will give you a second chance but not without ramification," Luna said as she levitated Macintosh back over Glossy Coat and froze him there. "What are y'all doin'?" Macintosh asked. "I will not be the one to punish you," Luna said before disappearing in a flash of light. Macintosh lay there, looming over the floor repair maid. He was starting to panic. "Who's gonna be the one to punish me?" After a little while he heard a shackling on the door and he came to the realization that this was going to be the pony to punish him. Coming through the door was Fluttershy, she was holding Angel Cake on her back as she entered the house. All of a sudden Macintosh and Glossy Coat became unfrozen and continued where the two had left off. "Please Macintosh put it in me!" Glossy Coat screamed. Fluttershy stared at her husband with nothing more than a look of sheer terror. "Macintosh how could you do this to me and not only that but to the foal." She screamed before running out of the house. "Fluttershy!" he screamed after her before getting up and ran after her. Glossy Coat had regained her composure and ran out of the house.
Twilight walked into Celestia's room and approached her mentor. "Oh good morning Twilight." Celestia said. "Morning Celestia, I just wanted to know what is required after I've finished the books." Twilight said walking up and lying down on Celestia's bed. "After that it's about two months' worth of brewing a potion that would resurrect him." Celestia said walking over and rubbing her hoof over Twilight's belly. Twilight thought before asking a difficult question. "Celestia can you have children?" Twilight asked. "Well, being immortal I can't give birth to life." Celestia said dropping her head. "Well if I can't resurrect Red Dawn, I'm going to give up the foal and if you want I'll give it to you." Twilight said. Twilight's belly suddenly jolted and the two suddenly began to rub Twilight's belly. "Boy this is a feisty little foal." Celestia said. "Yeah I really hope it can see his father." Twilight said getting up and walking back to her room. "Twilight," Celestia called back to her. "Yes princess," Twilight called back to her. "I would be honored to raise your foal."
Rainbow Dash was walking through Ponyville with Pinkie Pie. Pinkie felt good knowing that Fluttershy was watching Angel Cake and that she would have Rainbow Dash all to herself. The two had stopped to eat at Sugarcube Corner to get something before returning to the house. "Geez Pinks you were right, this date night was an awesome idea." Rainbow Dash said before diving into a cake that the two were sharing. "Yup no foal, no stress just you and me." Pinkie said before also diving into the cake. After lunch, they walked through the street to return home. "Dashie, what are we gonna do when we get home?" Pinkie asked in a seductive tone. Rainbow Dash knew what Pinkie was asking for and she was just as eager to please. "Believe me Pinkie we're gonna be glad that Angel Cake isn't in the house." Rainbow Dash said in an equally seductive tone. Upon entering the house, Pinkie took control and pushed Rainbow Dash to the ground and bombarding her with kisses along her face, neck and belly. "Dashie I love you so much." Pinkie said moaning between each kiss. "Pinkie I'm so glad we're together," Rainbow Dash said starting to move her hips, bouncing Pinkie Pie into the air with every thrust. After ten minutes Pinkie began to orgasm. "Dashie I'm gonna…." Pinkie screamed. "Me too," Rainbow Dash screamed. At the same time they covered each other with their juices. They just laid there covered in each other's juices that smelt of cotton candy and Skittles. "Rainbow Dash and Pinkie were almost asleep when Pinkie rolled over onto Rainbow Dash and asked "Dashie are we gonna be together forever?" "Ummmhummm." Rainbow Dash said before rolling over and going to sleep.
Twilight had returned to Ponyville that night and made her way home. She opened the door and walked in. Spike was sleeping when he heard a noise coming from downstairs. He was terrified, "man where is Twilight or Red Dawn when you need them. He grabbed the nearest thing that he could grab which just happened to a large textbook. He hid by the doorway and waited for the intruder to enter the room. Twilight just entered the room when she was stuck in the face. "What are you doing here you…Oh my Celestia, Twilight are you okay," Spike said panicking. Twilight felt dizzy and her head was wobbling like crazy. "Oh Spike it's just me," Twilight said. She just noticed that the book was skewered onto her horn. Spike pulled it off her and asked her a question. "Where is Red Dawn and why have you been gone for so long?" Spike asked. Twilight held Spike and told him the story about how Red Dawn sacrificed himself to save her and that Angel Cake had been safely returned. "Are you okay?" Spike asked. "Yes, Celestia is going to help me bring him back to life." Twilight said. "Really because ever since you got married, you've been a lot less boring." Spike said laughing a little. Twilight then grasped his scaly hand and placed it to her belly. "What are you doing?" he asked. She didn't answer but after a few minutes there was no need. Spike felt a light jolt coming from her belly. "Twilight are you…." Spike asked. "Pregnant, yes Spike I am." Twilight said in a cheery voice. Spike didn't know what to say. In all the years that he had be her assistant, he had never envisioned her having children. Twilight went to her bed and laid down to sleep with something peculiar in her thought as she slept. It was hope, hope that everything would be okay and that Red Dawn would be in her hooves once again. After that they would be a real family; Her, him the foal and even Spike. Spike was thinking as he slept as well. "Man I can't believe Twilight is going to have a foal." Spike always felt like Twilight was a mother to him and he had a feeling that she felt the same way. Now that she was having a foal, he felt like he was going to have a little brother or sister and he could wait for that.
Fluttershy was on cloud crying her eyes out while Angel Cake rolled around on the soft surface of the cloud. She felt so alone, none of her friends were available to help her and she didn't want to burden Pinkie and Rainbow so she just took the Pegasus filly with her. She didn't know what to do Macintosh cheated on her just a day after learning that he was going to be a father. She wanted to disappear from the face of Equestria but she didn't have anywhere to go. She thought about it and there was only one Mare in Equestria that would understand her pain. Angel Cake let out a soft coo before resuming rolling. Fluttershy stopped crying and stood up. She put Angle Cake on her back before taking flight. She flew through Ponyville at insane speeds, for she felt more determined than anything to reach her goal. She stopped at the home of Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie. She wiped the sad look of her face and knocked on the door. After a few seconds Pinkie answered the door. She was wearing a leather vest and hat and was holding a riding crop in her mouth. "Hi Fluttershy she said in her always cheerful voice. "I'm here to drop off Angel Cake." She said while handing over the little filly. Pinkie took the foal in her hooves. "Where's Rainbow Dash?" Fluttershy asked. "She's a little tied up at the moment." Pinkie said. Fluttershy took flight and continued toward her destination. She saw the tree house in the town and landed on the balcony. She slowly and quietly entered the house to see Twilight in her bed. She walked over to her and nudged her awake. "Twilight," she asked. "Twilight slowly opened her eyes and looked at the yellow Pegasus looming over her. "Fluttershy, what are you doing here?" She asked. "Big Macintosh cheated on me, and can I stay here for the night." Fluttershy asked pleading. Twilight couldn't help feel extremely sympathetic for her friend. How anypony could do that to the kindest mare in Equestria. "Sure you can stay," Twilight said. She scooted over to make room for Fluttershy. She got into the bed and pulled Twilight into a hug. "Thank you so much." Fluttershy said. The two fell into a deep sleep.
Yeah I can understand if the chapter is poor. I didn't truly feel like this one was that good; sadly I didn't have time to correct it sorry. I know it might sound like it but there won't be any Flutterlight shipping. Write a review and tell me what you thought of the chapter.