To all of my dear readers:
Firstly, YAY! For the first time, I actually updated it within a month so I hope you will enjoy reading this chapter as much as I've enjoyed writing it.
Secondly, I know I might sound like a total control freak but it has come to my attention that plots have been continuously stolen in the Detective Conan section of fanfiction. I would just like to ask all of you out there please do not support any stolen stories. It pains me to see plots being stolen from original creators, it destroys the purpose of fanfiction and takes away the originality and creativity to all stories. It also does no good to both authors.
Now To all of my dear writers who has contributed to fanfiction:
Just a word of reminder:
Stories are only real if the vision was written and created by yourself, making it all come true in your mind then sharing it with the rest is what makes it special. Getting compliments from your readers because you brought joy to them through your own imagination is what true happiness feels. We writers write to bring happiness to others, don't forget that.
There's no point coping something that isn't yours, your creativity will be limited and the story won't come out vivid in people's mind. And the compliments given won't be for you and deep down you know it, because it isn't your story, you didn't think of it.
I'm really sorry I have to write this, it's not exactly a pleasant issue and I'm not here to judge. I just want writers to write what they imagined, then bringing it alive. Good plot, bad plot, it doesn't matter, as long as it came from the heart.
Sorry to bring that message across like this, back to the story, here's chapter 7, probably one of my favorite chapters written so far, hope you all enjoy it. xx
Reacp: The ball greeted the man in black with such strong force it made him lose balance and flew backwards, his head hit the cold hard concrete floor. He lay there, unconscious.
"Oh my god!" Haibara's mom cried out as the man lay there bleeding.
"What did you do?" Haibara screamed at Shinichi's face as he examines him. "You… you could've killed him," she carried on. Shinichi checked his pulse and quickly wrapped the jacket Haibara was wearing around his head like a bandage to stop the bleeding.
"I'll drive the car here, we'll put him in the car and I'll find a doctor," Shinichi decided.
"We have to take him to the hospital," Haibara said instead
"We can't take him to the hospital, he's part of a secret society if anyone sees him, the organization will kill him so he won't let slip of a word, its better if they think he's dead," Shinichi reasoned. Haibara considered the facts and agreed with Shinichi.
It wasn't long till Shinichi drove back to the alley, they lay the tall skinny man down at the back seat and moved his legs so they're bent and closed the car door behind. Shinichi found a private doctor nearby quickly, they drove over and Atsushi (Haibara's dad) was treated, by the end of the day he was resting, making a recovery. Elena (Haibara's mom) took a liking in Haibara and the two of them got on really well. She did put up quite an effort by refusing to get in the car. She stated clearly that she did not want any part of what they were doing, Haibara tried persuading her but she won't listen. Shinichi had no choice but to put her in the car by force. She had a sour face on in the first few hours when they were driving to the doctors yet with a hint of concern in her eyes although she tried not to show it. She warmed up to Haibara's odd personality and started to cooperate with the situation she was in. Haibara refused to spend the night in the car, Shinichi bought some tents and they camped out instead. Haibara and Elena shared one tent while Shinichi had to take his nap outside and keep guard. So that Atsushi can have the other tent recover and be hidden away. Shinichi fell into a sweet dream a few hours into the night. Elena couldn't sleep, went to get some water and realized Shinichi had fallen asleep. And took over guarding the tents voluntarily.
"W-where am I?" he questioned as he woke up in a sleeping bag inside the tent.
"You're awake," Elena said softly, she was sat by the open door. Her head leaning up against the tent, eyes gazing upon the starry night. Her arms wrapped around her knees, as if she was comforting herself. Turning to look at the stranger, their eyes met for the first time. Under the moonlight her soulful blue eyes twinkled like sapphires. Her long angelic blonde hair flowing naturally along her face structure. The ray of moonlight came from the right and was shone onto the right side of her face, reflecting the smoothness of her pastel skin. It was picture perfect, like an edited fashion catalogue photo.
"Who are you?" he asked
"I'm Elena, and you?" she murmured
"A-Atsushi," he whispered, influenced by her soft tone. His heart was captured by her beauty. He was mesmerized by the angel sent from above. Elena returned her gaze back up into the sky, Atsushi sat there silently studying her every small detail of her. The silence between them was calm and peaceful, until Atsushi came to his realization.
"How did I get here?" he asked
"By car," Elena simply answered
"No I mean, why am I here? What happened?"
"You fell unconscious, we brought you to the doctors to treat you, and then we brought you here to rest" Elena explained, eyes not parting away from the astounding sight
"We? There are more people who know I'm here?" Atsushi choked out. Hearing his anxious tone, Elena tore her sight from the sky and turned to look at him once again.
"Yeah, but it's okay, they're nice people," Elena assured.
Atsushi shook his head "No, this is bad, I have to get out of here," he said and hurriedly got out of his sleeping bag.
"But you need to rest!" Elena protested as Atsushi tried to get up. But failed and let out a painful hiss.
"Are you okay?" Elena worried and rushed over to help him ease the pain
"My back! What happened to me?" Atsushi hollered
"You cracked your spine when you fell, the doctor said that it's not fatal but in order to heal, you need to stay sat or lay down," Elena answered
"But I need to leave! You will all be in danger if I don't go" Atsushi said
"You can't, you'll break your spine and you'll die," Elena looked at him with sorrow eyes.
"I… have to, even if I die," Atsushi insisted "it's for your own safety," he said softly. Staring deeply into her ocean blue eyes. Elena smiled. Her smile warmed him to the depth of his heart, hypnotizing him to make him almost rethink his reasons.
"You remind me of my dad," Elena began "he was my hero, my only hero. He will do anything for me, and I guess he did, which… cost his life, just so he could protect us,"
Atsushi could sense the sad aura she was giving off. He wished he could do something, but he couldn't, he didn't know what to do.
"That's stupid" Elena carried on, looking directly at Atsushi "I didn't ask for your protection, don't try to be the hero my dad was, he was an idiot. He could've been alive, instead…" her voice fade out and into a small whimper, a drop of crystallized tear fell onto the cold floor. She was crying, tears flooded out of her eyes uncontrollably drowning her in sorrow. Atsushi moved closer and hugged her for comfort, her tears dampened his shirt but he couldn't care less. He wanted to leave, now that he's found one more important reason.
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