chapter 2
I looked over to the other side of the room and saw nothing at i walked over to see a figure moving. " Whose there?"
when there was no response came i went closer and saw something i thought i would never see. Queen Chryalasis. " you.. your the queen of the changelings arnt you. Queen chryalasis." i said. " how did you know?" she asked. "wel your on earth and on earth everything that happens on your world is a tv show." i said. "so you saw my failure right? (sigh)." she said. "i would have sent twilight a little deeper you know." i said. I noticed her leg was hurt. "my god your hurt. here let me help you." i said. " No dont toucch me please. i'm all right." she said. she tried to get up but to no avail." ouch." she said." here let me at least move this old matress so you have somewhere more comfertable to lay." i said as i moved my old matress over to where she was laying. she used her wings and hovered so i could move the matress under her. "thank you... i still dont know your name. i'm sorry" she said. " I am jake shadowfang, human, gamer extrodenair. welcome to earth." i said.
I went to bed. I woke up the next day and emeidiatly went downstairs to see if this was a dream. it wasn't. chryalasis was sleeping on the matress. I walked down the stairs more. " you are so kind to me if you know i tried to take over canterlot?" she asked with her eyes still closed. "well you were actually my favorite the instant i saw you." i said. "How is your leg?" i asked. "it still hurts a little." she said. "will you allow me to look at it now?" i asked. "(sigh) yah I just want to be able to walk again." she said. I walked a little closer to her and looked at her leg. it looked like it was twisted.
ok one i dont have spell check i dont have word so i will write these stories the way i will the way i want. i like the constructive critiisum but just remember no word