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Thank you Kittychow for reviewing. Yes they are going to attempt to kill Fangles
...multiple times. MUHAHAHAHA!
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I have many ideas that will make this story just that much creepier. Everything that happens in Nevermore just makes it even easier for me to make this story as creepy as possible. For that reason, I think it just helped my mind fall in love with the book just that much more, since I didn't really start to put all my thoughts into this story until I finished reading the book.
But you guys don't know what parts of the plot and quotes in the books that are helping me put my creepy thoughts together.
Read Nevermore!
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From this point on I'll be pretty much going by the basic plot of the actual books. I'm not going to use every single detail that happens in the books into this story, just like I am not going to put everything everyone says into here either. I'll save that for my Gazzy story. I'll just put enough so that this story makes sense. This story IS a retelling of the books but there is so much more to it then just that.
Font key: Telepathic toy talking to each other will be written in bold italics. Telepathic toys talking to Angel or anyone else will be in bold. Max and anyone else thinking back to THE voice is in italics. Angel speaking telepathicly back to the voice in HER head is underlined.
This font key is going to be in every chapter just in case anyone needs it.
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Chapter 3: The Beginning of the End
It's time. Time for our plans to officially begin. Our plans of domination. Of sacrifice and elimination. It's time.
For years, these strange voices have been implanting thoughts into the minds of the inhabitants of the School. Plotting, planning, preparing.
Far away in a place of evil and scientific research, the lonely director hears a voice. A voice melting into her thoughts. A soft little voice. A voice of evil and power. A voice that is so far away, yet oh so close.
It's time. Get the girl. I need the girl. The small girl. Subject eleven. I need her. She and the rest of the experiments are in the the canyon. They are in the canyon. I need the girl. I need her now.
"I want subject eleven. Get me subject eleven. Now!" The director yells. The School sends out their army of Erasers. Off to the E shaped house.
Deep within the room of a certain small, blond headed, little girl lays the creatures. Plush, cottony evil creatures of destruction and chaos.
Max comes up the steps ready to wake up her girls. Drawing back Angel's curtains Max smiles at her. Waking Angel up and doing up her buttons.
I just loved, loved, loved Angel.
Max hears 'herself' think.
'Maybe because I'd been taking care of her practically since she was a baby. Maybe because she was just so incredibly sweet and loving herself' Max wonders.
"Maybe because I'm like your little girl. But don't worry Max, I won't tell anybody. Besides, I love you best, too," Angel says.
They go downstairs. Joining the rest of the Flock. They eat their breakfast.
They're coming. They're coming. They're coming.
Go pick strawberries, child. They're ripe now. Go pick strawberries, child. Go pick them.
"I want to go pick strawberries today. They're ripe now," Angel says.
Gazzy agrees then let's one rip. Soon the rest of Flock also agrees, all ready to get out into the fresh air.
Holding their buckets and baskets, they leave the house.
Over to the right, child. To the right.
Angel goes to the right. Leading the Flock to a giant patch of wild strawberries.
While Gazzy uses him mimicry powers to make fun of Max's cooking skils, the animals probe into the mind of the Eraser, Ari.
He wants Max. Yes. He wants Max. Poor, sad Eraser. Neglected by his own father. So much pain. He could be useful. All that pain could be useful
They're coming closer. They're coming. Yes. They're coming.
They're coming, child. The Erasers. They are here. Here to take you away. They must not take you away, child. They can't.
Angel freezes and then she screams staring up into the sky.
They must take her. Take her away. It's the only way for our plans to work.
Erasers drop out of the sky. Angel screams. They grab at her and grab at her. She tries to fight them off as hard as she can. But her hardest is not hard enough. Three Erasers grab her, stuffing her into a brown bag and driving away.
Max is knocked out. The rest of the flock have a variety of cuts and bruises.
Max wakes up to find that they had taken Angel. They go after Angel, only to have her thrown into the doors of a helicopter.
Not being able to save Angel, the Flock go back to the house and try to cope in their own ways.
Max flies away slamming her fist into the tree.
She comes back.
Fang watches from the side while eating from a can of ravioli.
They took her to the School. Jeb had that map. I should get the map.
Fang's shakes his head again. Something doesn't feel right. He shakes his head again then shrugs and goes to the closet to get the map.
Dangerous boy. Dark, strong willed boy.
He comes back.
Fang and Max share a glance.
They're going to the School.
"We have to go after Angel. You can't be thinking that we would just let them take her. The six of us look out for each other... no matter what. None of us is ever going to live in a cage again, not while I'm alive."
The blind one and the small one are no use to us. We don't need them. We'll call someone to get rid of them later. The dark one is useful, dangerous but useful. We'll dispose of him later. When he suspects too much. He will go.
Iggy and Gazzy can not come. They'd be a liability. They'll just slow us down. They can not come.
"But actually, Nudge, Fang, and I are going after Angel. You and the Gasman... I need you to stay here. Hold down the fort. On the off chance Angel escapes and makes her way home."
Max, Fang, and Nudge leave the house without two fuming boys.
Everything is going just as planned.
AN: Hope you guys liked it. Hopefully there is enough action. Sorry, there is not that much action action. As in there is not that much physical action. I do not think that there is going to be too much of that in this story. I am just not that good at those. But I promise that there is going to be a lot of mental suspense and action, in ways that you guys would not be expecting.
Gosh, these stuffed animals are everywhere!
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