This is one of my favorite drabbles my bro has written. It took very little editing, limited to a few word adjustments, and I think he accomplished the style really well, considering I haven't given him any tips on styling. Where he comes up with these ideas I'll never know...
G.R.I.T. Commander
T'was passion that led to great ruin.
The passion for minerals, rocks, and precious stones led to so many deaths.
The passion to dig deeper, build bigger, and mine farther led to too many deaths.
The passion to explore almost wiped out an entire race.
Passion... unleashed one of the greatest evils in Middle-earth.
Passion... made a great, thriving city of trade and colonization into a pit of fear, evil, death, and pain.
Passion... created one of the greatest displays of stoneworks of the ages, then turned it into the greatest tomb of the ages.
Passion... was Moria's downfall.
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