I'm not exactly sure what style my bro was going for here (he says he doesn't know himself), and neither of us are sure if it works or not. You'll have to let us know what you think.
Frodo stirred from his sleep by the sounds of voices and a warm light. They had traveled to Weathertop all that day, and he was exhausted. Once he woke up fully, he turned, and, to his horror, found that Merry, Sam and Pippin had lit a fire and were cooking food! He quickly got up and put out the fire, which was followed by the horrifying scream of a Black Rider...
Later, Sam vowed never to make a campfire again when, every year on October 6th, he saw Frodo cringe in pain from the knife wound of a Morgul Blade.
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