Avalar's Redemption Chapter 6
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As I started to breath out, I tried to brace myself for the onslaught that was sure to come.
"We're under attack!"
Upon my voice running out, Cynder ducked as quickly as he brought a fist to my face, knocking me hard into the far back wall.
Upon noticing who he hit, he stood up from his bed, "Damn, Manuel, you know better than to wake me up that way!"
As I hit the ground from the impact, Cynder ran to me, quickly looking over me for any signs of injury.
Spyro, on the other hand, was staring down Zunde, should he wish to strike again.
"Are you ok?" Cynder yelled out to me.
As she was hesitant to move me off the ground, fearful that she would injure me further, I started to laugh through clenched teeth, "Yeah, I definitely deserved that one. Yes I know better, but under the circumstance, it was the only way I knew that would get you up."
Cynder then gently lifted me to my feet and gently paced be onto the bed.
When Zunde's furry cooled down, that he then noticed Cynder and Spyro, "Don't tell me that these are the two you've been seeing since you were a kid."
Groaning out through pain, "Yea, they are the two I've mentioned time and time again."
Placing that to thought, he then asked, "So what is with the purple one here, Spyro right? He looks as if he's holding me prisoner."
"Well, you wouldn't be too far off, seeing as you keep trying to kill me!" I laughed out.
"Well, with that little stunt you pulled back at the guard post I just might!", Zunde yelled, laughing as he walked up to my bed, placed his fingers into a tight fist and punched me in the chest.
"Uuhhgg, now your lucky I deserved that one!"
As me and Zunde started to laugh, Cynder and Spyro were even more puzzled by the laughter that rang out every time we seemed to argue.
Cynder's curiosity got the better of her and she asked, "Why do you deserve all the punches that he threw at you?"
As me and Zunde slowly stopped laughing, I slowly recalled the so-called last minute of my life. "The reason behind it all, is that we were attacked so many times through our struggle for survival, that each time we would be outnumbered by at least 30:2. Each time a new scouting party found its way to our guard post we were using for defense, we were always injured severely, of Zunde always being hurt beyond defending himself, leaving me to finish off the rest in reckless haste. Of course, each time he would be grateful that we would make it out another day, but he was always left to either treat my injuries or we would be out trying to hunt for food and gathering water. My last attempt to save him, didn't go well at all."
Right as I was about to close the metal door right behind me as I put Zunde down, the man that was behind us quickly made to stab me in the back, his blade piercing my lungs and coming out the other side.
Maddened by rage, Zunde quickly raised his sword with his only good arm and quickly pushed the blade where his heart would be, instantly killing him where he stands before he could retrieve his blade out of my back to defend himself.
As the man fell over, Zunde quickly put me on my side to inspect the wound as blood came out both sides and out of my mouth.
As I coughed out blood, I said in a raspy voice, "I told you I would have your back and prefer to fall for you than you to perish. I just wish I would have pushed a little harder to the gate, but my body was already dying on me trying to get you through the gate and lock it behind us.
As I coughed out a larger amount of blood, Zunde quickly made to look for any medical supplies to bandage the wound or ease the pain in a panic to try and save me. When he came across the supply kit, he staggered back to me near the metal gate that separated us from the outside. Before he could get close to me, he fell onto the ground, the kit falling to the ground and busting open, sprawling all over the ground.
As Zunde's adrenaline effects gave way, he begun to feel the full effects of his injuries and fatigue on his body, quickly falling into a coma as I fell into a coma from the loss of blood and all the pain, all fatigue forgotten from it all.
Pointing at my back, "That last blow that hit me that I took for Zunde while trying to get the door closed, should of killed me on the spot. That's why Zunde here is so furious at me, I pulled that little stunt to let him live. That's why I deserved all those punches, and more if you ask me", looking at Zunde smirk, "I don't think that would be necessary Zunde, that sword was enough that what I deserved."
Upon hearing my supposedly last minutes of my life, Cynder broke down into tears, crying on my bare chest, knowing full well what I did for Zunde, was something Spyro did for her.
Kevin Slett
2011-07-26 . chapter 5
I NEED MOAR OF THIS STORY! WHERE'S CHAPTER 6?
But seriously, this is really good. You've got some real talent and I like the way you got the humans in the dragon world. I can't wait to read the next chapter, and the one after that, and the one after that, and the one... well,you get the idea.
Ty, as what your review stated, I had promised you that I would get another chapter up before the 31st ended. Well, barely beat the clocked on that one. /shot
Reviews would be apreciated
~Spyro's heart and soul stuck on Earth. ~~SpyroOnEarth