Sorry this chap is only a few hundred words..... But, I want to skip past all the training and stuff to going to S.S. I want to get to the main story part, sorry if you guys wanted me to write it all and if I got what they say some times I can't remember what people did or said sometimes, SORRY! But, the story is going to be very different in a lot of ways, so?........
RUKIA! NO! You are arrested for willingly giving a human your power. The boy drew his large sword. I WON'T LET YYYYYOOOOU!!!!!!!!!! the black haired noble ached as he walked through the rice paper door. The boy on the ground behind him, helpless in the rain, barely consciousness, bleeding horrible!
Urahara's place
you have finally awoken! The strange blond snapped his fan shut.
It's ok if your still thirsty! But, if you get hungry you know that you are going to become a hollow. Jinta said in an unnaturally, serious air to the fire truck red haired boy. His body language and words were heavily laced with a bit of pitty and harshness.
AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! As the blinding smoke cleared a out line was visible of the monster that they all had thought die in the deep dark hole! Urahara protectively stood in front of the two strange children ready to defend them. The smoke cleared and to all of there surprise, a very human looking hollow with a sword and the clothing of a Soul Reaper was standing only feet away! Before anyone had the chance to act the hollow? Smashed its mask into little bits with the butt of its sword! Your ok, Urahara said quietly with relieve. Ya-yaya..... the orange haired teen grinned and scratched the back of his head.
Thanks for reading through it! Tell me what I should change if you think that I should change anything.
Well thank you and please review! BWIY!!! Silver blear suddenly glomps my computer. ECK! Meechee Grins a toothy smile. HWIY PEOPLE! She waves at the screen.... Wheeeeere is Flower-chan? Uuuuuuuhhhhhh............