I only have 4 views on my last chapter. *sad face* I guess I should re-right my first chapter.. 'cause people don't really like it.
Third persons P.O.V
Every thing is perfect, well except the uneven asymmetrical number of people who will be here. Liz and Patti spent hours picking out a nice enough outfit that Kid thought was appropriate for the event. Kid spent ten minutes on his since he only decided on simple white dress shirt and black slacks. Liz thought it was quite strange that he had a few buttons at the top of his shirt not done up. Kid had to admit, he was quite excited for the little 'get together' he called it. Him and his friends haven't had one of these in a few months since the Kishin met its demise. With Liz and Patty downstairs putting some of the drinks in a cooler, Kid went to the grand living room and sat down in a recliner.
The black-haired boy started thinking of the events of today. When he got to class everything seemed normal. Every one was there and ready for another one of Steins dissections That's when we over heard Maka's pervert dad start flirting with some one out side the door. When that door was opened a young girl about the rest of the classes age was revealed. Kid wasn't a normal kid, every sense was amplified due to his heritage and what he was. The girl was beautiful that was known, but something about her seemed off. She was perfectly symmetrical, so that didn't bother Kid. But what could it be? He sensed something that wasn't quite visible.
Kid was snapped out of his thoughts by the sound of the door bell. He Leisurely got up to answer the door. It was Black*star and Tsubaki dressed in their casual attire.
"Now the party can begin. Sure enough it isn't a party if a big star like isn't there!" Black*star gloated. Tsubaki shook her head while they walked in together. Patti ran in giggling, but when she saw who was there a sudden wave of disappointment hit her.
"What's wrong Patti?" Tsubaki asked. The youthful pistol looked down and sighed. Liz came in from where Patti had and joined in to hear what her sister had to say.
" It's nothing. I was just hoping that Soul was going to be here with that new girl. I saw him take her to his apartment while you thought I was preparing every thing. She was giggling at every thing he said. Something must have been funny. OH! And Maka wasn't with them." Every ones jaw dropped.
"There's no way-" Kid said astonished at what he heard about his friend.
"He wouldn't do something like that-" Black*star continued.
" I can't believe it. They just met!" Liz said.
" Disgusting. I'm going to talk to him about this tonight. I'm so disappointed, but kind of proud at the time. He sure wasn't getting any from Maka." Kid said. Tsubaki and Liz both hit him in the stomach and muttered 'pervert'. They were all standing in the foyer in front of the door when there was a knock on the door. Everyone looked at each other seeing if some one would open the door. Kid took a deep breath and walked over to the door. Straightening up his back he put his hand on the doorknob and opened it.
There they were. Soul, Maka, and the new girl.
I really like this story but no one else seems to like it. Please review and tell me what I can work on! THANK YOU VERY MUCH!