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Meanwhile...
A certain shadow person by the name of Pitch Black was standing by a campfire with a shadow, lightning-stricken log, a bucket of water from Jack/Clan lake, and a burned heather plant; this stood for the four Clans. Pitch began to chant: " I unite shadow, thunder, river and wind to resurrect the lost cat: Tigerstar!" (Oh crap.) A striped tom appeared in front of him. "Twoleg, why did you summon me? Thank you for releasing me." Pitch looked at the cat that was Tigerstar. "We need to have a two-way deal. You help me banish the Guardians, I'll help you defeat the Clans." Pitch explained to Tigerstar. "I am Pitch Black, by the way." "So," Tigerstar said." These are the cats I need bowing down me." Tigerstar made an image of Firestar appear in front of them. Tigerstar then explained the Clan ways to Pitch. "So, we should attack at night." Tigerstar said. "Okay, this is the bunch I need down." Pitch said, making an image appear of the strangest Twolegs Tigerstar has ever seen. "So, let's make a plan." Tigerstar said evilly. The two shared an evil cackle together.
Back at the lake...
Firestar whispered to Leafpool, "Take care of Squirrelflight, and me and Brambleclaw will examine the Twoleg. Maybe he's the one in the prophecy." Then, Firestar called to Brambleclaw, who was informing the elders about the situation. "Brambleclaw! Come with me, I have to tell you something." As Brambleclaw and Firestar walked to the spot where the Twoleg lay, Firestar told Brambleclaw all about the vision, the lake, and the prophecy. When Firestar was finished, Brambleclaw said,"So, the Twoleg might be the Twoleg in the prophecy? I mean, what can be worse than Tigerstar?" Then, Firestar saw the Twoleg. The fur on his head was silver, like the color of Feathertail. He wasn't pink, like the other Twolegs, but silver, and his pelts were blue and brown. "He doesn't smell like a Twoleg. He smells like leaf-bare." Brambleclaw noticed. "Plus, he's still breathing. He's not dead." Firestar said. Firestar looked at the Twoleg and recognition pierced him like a thorn. He was the Twoleg from the vision and the prophecy. Then, the Twoleg got up and moaned. Then he noticed the cats and yelled in Catnese, "Ah! Why are there cats looking at me like I'm crazy?!" He then lifted his stick-thing at them, and both cats said,"Calm down! We're not tying to hurt you!" Brambleclaw muttered,"Jinx blackout." Firestar then declared,"Twoleg! What is your name and story?" The Twoleg said,"My name is Jack Frost and.." He then told Firestar and Brambleclaw his story, who he was, and a bunch of other stuff. He even told the cats about when he drowned in the lake. When Jack was done, Firestar said,"I'm Firestar and this is Brambleclaw. Would you like to stay with us for a while?" Jack said, "Of course. But if we see the aurora borealis-" "What's aurora borealis? Do you mean the lights in the sky?" Firestar interrupted. "Yes, if we see those, I have to go up north." Jack said. "Okay. C'mon, let's go back to camp. We need to tell the Clan."
Cliffy! Now, scram!
-Grasstar, the loco Windclan leader