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Determination
When Cat finished her breakfast she cleaned up the kitchen and made sure she put everything away in its place. Then she set off down the hallway to explore. She had decided she would try each door she came to unless it looked like something she should not open. As she traveled down the halls she pulled on each doorknob, but each one held fast. She decided to go up one floor to see if any were unlocked there. She found the front staircase with ease and gave herself a pat on the back. Not many doors were unlocked on this level either. The ones that were contained either covered furniture or nothing at all. She quickly became tired of her failure and moved to the floor above hoping there would at least be bedrooms. The first hallway she went down was completely locked except for one which contained only a sheet on the floor. Cat thought maybe someone had planned to paint it, but never got around to it. It was understandable. Who had time to paint a room when they were running a monster hunting organization? She closed the door on the pathetic room and turned down the next hallway. This one was more fruitful. She found many doors unlocked and most of them were furnished bedrooms. None of them were as fabulous as her room up stairs, but they were all more beautiful than any room she had seen before. She spent only a moment looking into each room before she moved to try the next door.
After seeing about thirty rooms she became tired of seeing the same thing so she sat on the floor to think. She was sure a place like this had something interesting hiding in one or more of the rooms. The trick was to find which floor and which room it was in. If she was an organization that hunted vampires and even harbored one on the premises, where would she hide paranormal secrets?
The basement of course, so she got up and quickly found the stairs again. Once she was on the ground floor she set off down the hallway towards the kitchen and continued on until she came to the end and made a right. She checked each door, but none had the dismal stone stairs she was looking for. She made a left turn after she had been walking for awhile and saw that it came to a dead end. She checked the doors on either side and found them all locked. Exasperated, she walked to the end of the hall and looked at the stone wall. Unlike the rest of the house its wall was bare. She turned around in defeat and leaned against the cold stone. She felt the wall shift under her back and whipped back around in time to see the wall move backward and then slide to the side leaving an opening leading to a dimply lit hall. Finally all of Cats efforts had paid off.