Back at the Simpson house, Bart and Lisa were hanging out in front of the television. Both were completely disoriented.

"Wait, what just happened?" asked Bart. "I thought I just got into trouble for making an Arnie story."

"You did, Bart," answered his sister. "It's called a plot hole. So, in other words, we'll never know what went on."

"Plot hole? You mean those things writers put in when they've completely forgotten the story line, or at least can't think of a way to continue? I thought those things weren't supposed to show up."

"They aren't. However, since we're pointing it out, it's funny. I think we can let it slide."


"Come on, come on," Milhouse urged his computer. "I want to see some reviews."

Ping.

"Yes! Here's one from a comicbookguy01!"

"I have read many fanlits, and I must say, this is the worst. Gary. Stu. Ever. I can't believe someone would do such an utter disgrace to Radioactiveman. And what is with shadow powers? All you have done is given him the ability to teleport, control people, and create things and dubbed them shadowportation, shadowcontrol, and shadowerecting. You sound like a very immature writer."

"Why do people keep on saying Milton Hoover's a Gary Stu? He has flaws! See, he clumsily fell in front of his girlfriend, who thought it was cute. I also made it where he loses his shadow powers if he touches pure plutonium! I don't get it!"

Sitting back in his chair at the shop, Comic Book Guy had an idea. "Hmm... it seems a lot of stories could use some criticism," he stated. "I know! I'll make a forum. It shall be Nitpickers United!"


"Nitpickers United?" mused Ned Flanders. "I think I'll join the noble cause!" Quickly, he got busy at the computer. "Now, this SYOC has to go, and this songlit, and..."


The two elder Simpsons children were out on the school playground. Lisa was busy chatting with Janey, while Bart was with Nelson and Ralph.

"My story is about an original character," gushed Janey. "She falls in love with Krubb, and he becomes a good guy!"

Lisa stared at her friend through narrowed eyes. "So, you've forgotten that that character is evil. He killed Greystache, tried to kill Angelica, and he teased those poor baby dragons. This is all because you've found him attractive." However, her remark fell on dead ears. Lisa shrugged.

Meanwhile, the boys were huddled in a group around a laptop that somehow made it to an elementary school without being confiscated.

"Huh?" Nelson looked at the FanbaseLit website. "My story got deleted! WHY! I just used all caps because I wanted attention!"

"My story was deleted because it had bad grammar and they said I was trolling," said Ralph, not knowing what he was talking about, as usual. "I'm going to go troll under a bridge next time."

"Hey, somebody's getting all of our fanlits deleted!" exclaimed Bart.

Author's Note: Hey, it's me, MysteryAgain. Like always, I like to know about the hits and misses. :)