IMPORTANT: Where I wrote nineteen years old I meant 17.I hope you don´t mind but I would like her to still be on high school.

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"- Ethan you useless piece of life go close the door,FAST!" -Yelled the lunatic in the sinister and harsh voice that Jade was already used to but still made her shake inside. Maybe out of pity,sympathy , mercy or any creepy reason the psycho took care of Jade right when her heart was starting to stop to beat and it was getting harder and harder to breath,her lungs were slowly closing,she was put down on a old ,yellow and torn on the right being gently put down , Ethan , a good looking guy , with dirty blonde hair and green eyes , probably in mid-twenties , and somewhat alike with the crazy disinfected every and each wound Jade , carefully to not hurt her alot , gave her painkillers and with the maximum discretion so the crazy wouldn´t see,yes it was it that told him to take care of Jade but not to make her well enough to try to escape gave her a bottle of water and a weird orange mixture of what it seemed to be fruit mash . She quickly with no hesitation drank the bottle of water but about the food she looked at the boy with a skeptical look , to which he laughed."

"- Sorry,but is all I can give for now without getting caught,don´t worry you will get out of here ," the boy said with a caring and warm voice (not that Jade trusted him or anything but what choices did she had? ) that made Jade wonder how could he be helping the monster that kidnapped and tortured her. "

"-W-Why?" "She asked quietly with a scratchy and rough voice . She still was very limited but her brain was slowly starting to work."

"-Why what? "Repeated him her words laughing softly again."

" Was he insane ? " Didn´t he knew that she was kidnapped starved and tortured during days and nearly died ? With that though Jade looked down at her now burned wrists before answering : "

"- Why are you helping me ?"

"- It´s just- ,he sighed - I don´t agree with what you are suffering and or the reasons of you captivity here but there is nothing I can do to make it other way so I´m going to help the much I can and help you runaway. He said slowly and expelled a big breath."

"- Oh , thanks I-I guess- Answered Jade forcing a smile."

"- It´s fine I´m used to do this anyway... He said getting up."

"-Wait WHAT?-Asked Jade suddenly much more wake."

"-What ? You though you were the first ? If I can remember clearly before you there were : Peter , Chester , Amy, Patrick , Jared , Benjamin , Mike , Hayley , Adam and that kid who hanged himself? Humm Johnathan. Yeah but don´t worry not all of them died . Two survived so you got big chances."

"Jade could only stare shockly at the sweet kid as they said all those names . How could he remain this calm when talkign about people that were mutilated abucted and killed ? She had to get out of there with his help too because alone she couldn´t obviously, so she had to put on an act . She had to pretend that she trusted him and believed him while trying to a safer way to get out of there..."

"-Jade , Jade can you hear me ? Said the boy worry full while waving his hand in her face."

"-Yeah but how do you know my name?"

"- Do you think you are here for random ocasion ? I know everything about you : Where you go to school , where you live , who your friends are , who is your boyfriend , your relationship with everyone around you and I must say you seem nicer in person. He said cracking a smile ."

"Jade felt her blood boil at the though of being observed but it was not like she could hit him , he was big and strong and she was physically and emotionally desgasted , hurt and weak."

"- But can´t be all good news so I got a bad one for you . He said sitting down on the aged bed and stretching his arms well high ."

"- Great , just when I though the party couldn´t get better - "Jade said sighing ." "- Well what now ?"

- This is serious , just listen and try to remain calm . "With those words Jade started shaking . What will she be doing now ? Be a slave ? Getting lost on the desert ? The options seemed unimaginable."

"- If you though you had already suffered it all , oh I am sad because you are so wrong . If the pattern is being followed and , I think it is, the torture is not over yet ."

"-WHAT? Yelled the poor girl at the top of her lungs."

"- I´m sorry but it takes time to get you out of here you know ? The victims never stay in the same place ."

"Jade looked around at the dusty room and its white concrete walls looking for a way out but nothing seemed helpfull. It was just a big , old , dark room with two small square windows next to the black and made of old tiles roof and another one next to a door that led to an corridor. In the middle was the rope and the enormous stain of Jade´s blood . This though made her shiver and she looked behind her to look for any weapons and or clues to where she was. But there was nothing only a wide blue basin with water all over it that she deduced to be the place that she nearly drowned . Nothing . She sighed by what it looked like the thousand time that day .

Ethan , that had been watching her got up , cleaned the dust out of his wrinkled jeans and started leaving."

"- Wait , where are you going ? ""Jade asked with an eyebrow rose ."

"- I though you didn´t wanted me here ." - "He said Making a cocky smile ."

"- Is not paradise but anything is better than to be alone ." -She answered quietly ."

"- Yeah i´d love to stay and chat but I bet things are getting suspicious ."

"-Kay bye - She whispered suddenly remebering again where she was. "


HI AGAIN!So your reviews and follows and etcs made me want to write fast for you. I don´t if you noticed but I don´t tell you if the raptor is a girl or a boy *wink* .Do you know what connection Ethan has with the raptor? I haven´t decided yet ...

OH i quoted Evanescence without meaning it if you can find it I will give you a preview of the next chap . Well when I start writing it. Oh and last thing all the people that were kidanpped before Jade were the vocalists/members of some bands I love know? Okay

Peter Wentz -Fall Out Boy

Chester Bennigton - Linkin Park

Amy Lee- Evanescence

Patrick Stump -Fall Out Boy,

Jared Leto -Thirty Seconds To Mars

Benjamin Buntley-Breaking Benajmin

Mike Shinoda- Linkin Park

Hayley Williams - Paramore

Adam Gontier- Three Days Grace ( Or it used to be :( )

Johnathan Davis - Korn

OH and (if you care) while I was writing this I was listening to three songs

Evil angel - Breaking Benjamin

Y´all want a single - Korn

Dancing with the devil - Breaking Benjamin

KAY Bye!

See you soon

A girl who likes rock problem ?