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The High Demon Lord- Thank you for pointing that out.
cruel vamp- He is going to change a lot, but it's because he didn't just get Madara's knowledge.
fanbasher865- I made it like that on purpose. Naruto's not trying to clever right now, he's trying be obvious, to the Third at least, since he's going to one of the only few to see that note.
Hakkyou no Yami- Thank you for all the suggestions.
Fayneir- I agree with you on the CRA being clan matter and outside the councils business. That will be used, but it's for more complicated reasons.
Trinity Fenton-Phantom- You'll see.
Julian Carax- I always found those reacations odd as well.
starwarsdude8221991- Kyuubi chakra being sealed, near death, and that last I'm debating on a little.
Orpheon- Thank you. Honestly, I've thought about bashing characters, but the wayt they act in Bashing fics don't really compute when I write my stories. I like reading a bashing fic every now and then, but I don't think I could make a good bashfic if I tried. Odd isn't it?
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Regular speak
Thoughts and Emotions talking to person outside mind
Demonic or Animalistic speak
Demonic or Animalistic Thoughts
non-demonic Higher Beings will change depending on mood
Translating to English
Naruto sat on his bed, indian-style. He wondered how long it would be before Sarutobi told the ANBU to bring him to his office. He made the note obvious enough for him that it shouldn't take him long to figure out who delivered the girl to them. While he was waiting, he figured it was time he had meeting that was LONG over due. He closed his blue eyes and concentrated for a moment.
When he opened his eyes, he was in a sewer with ankle deep water. As he walked through his mindscape, his only thought was, 'I need to redecorate.' After a few minutes of walking, he came to a giant gold cage. As he got closer, he noticed there were chain in the cage; all tight, leaving no slack in them, and going deeper into the cell. 'Must be the result of Orochimaru's seal. The design isn't the best, but it's doing it's job quite nicely.' The blond thought as he slid between the bars.
As he traveled deeper into the cage, he noticed how the changes came lower and closer together. This meant that Kyuubi was either in a smaller fox form or a human form. His second hunch proved correct as he noticed the outline of it's form. First thing he noticed were the two fox ears on her head and nine tails attached to the base of the spine, all of which were blood red in color-along with the hair of course. The next, as the form became more apparent in the dark, was that it was a she. A very beautiful naked she. Shoulder length, fire-red hair. Perfect hour-glass figure. Whisker marks that were darker and more defined then his. Claws on her hand and feet. Slightly pointed ears. D-cup breasts and a nice firm and round ass to top it all of made her what all men dreamed of having. If Naruto hadn't gone through his 'mental change,' he would have passed out from a nose bleed by now. He found it odd that she seemed around his age though.
That brought him to take notice of her current situation. She was currently in a knelling position due to how the chains were attached to her. Her fine legs had very short chains, too short to do anything with, going to the floor right where she was. A chain on each wrist attached to a far off wall, keeping her arms strechted out as far as possible. Several more on her arms keeping them in place with no chance of moving. Nine claps on the ground kept her tails down. A chain that kept a collar around her neck high, so she couldn't even hang her head without choking. Her eyes were closed, she seemed tired...and sad.
Naruto sighed before muttering, "Keep your head out of the gutter," This looked incredibly hot and kinky to him.
"Your head...is a gutter," Kyuubi said softly, as a tired and defeated smirk appeared on her face, showing off her vampire-like canine. She opened her red eyes, which once glowed with an untamible fire, now had a subdued look to them. As if someone ripped the fire right out of her.
'What happened to her?' Was the only thing Naruto could think.
"I suppose you're here for some payback?" Kyuubi asked, causing Naruto to raise an eyebrow. "I don't blame you really, I would do the same in your position."
"What are you talking about?" Naruto asked generally confused, he came here because he thought it was time they met face to face.
Kyuubi glared as she spoke, "Don't play dumb! Since that bastard's gift have awakened, you can have your revenge on me," her voice started off strong and got weaker as she went on. Naruto was shocked as he saw a tear slide down her face.
"I didn't come here for revenge, Kyuubi." He said in a calm, but honest voice.
Kyuubi's eyes widen at this. She may not be able to read his mind with this new seal, but she could tell when he was lieing, and right now, there was no lie in his words. "Why? I'm the reason your life has been hell. If it wasn't for me, you would have had a family and friends. Why...don't you hate me?" She asked this after searching his eyes for any hatred and found none directed at her.
"You may have been the reason for my birth families death, but you didn't make my life hell. The village needed a scapegoat and Sarutobi gave them one. He may have tried to protect me, but the old man has lost his spine and become far too leinent in his second reign. The Professor has become a fossil of his old self." Naruto ranted slightly, more to himself then to Kyuubi. He shook his head and readressed her, "Well, I came here so we could proper introduce our selves, but I think you may need a little help first."
As he said this, he closed his eyes before opening them to reveal the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan, only with a slight difference. Inside the circle made by the three tomoe surronding the pupil, was a ten point star in each eye, centered on the pupil.
Kyuubi's eyes widen in fright, Madara's Sharingan was incredibly gift in controlling her. Now her jailer had an even more adance version of it. Her eyes relaxed slightly as he looked over the restraints. She felt a pull on her chakra before she realized what he was doing. He was manipulating her chakra to try and break the seal. Not surprising really, Naruto still hadn't gotten used to having all of Madara's memories being put in his head, so he wasn't a hundred percent sure about doing this how a seal master would. A moment later, Kyuubi heard the chains cracking before breaking and desolving into chakra.
As Kyuubi rubbed her wrists, Naruto held out a hand to help her up. "I think it's time we were introduced. I'm Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze and I should probably add Uchiha to that. Heir to the Uzumaki clan, Namikaze clan, and Madara's power." He gave her a soft smile, which she returned.
"I'm Benatami, current holder of the title of Bijuu Queen. Ruler of a Demons and your prisoner." She said 'prisoner' in a sexy tone, causing Naruto, who had turned his sharingan off, to grin.
"Best behave or I'll have to disipline my prisoner." Naruto countered, deciding to play along.
Benatami gave a chuckle, she hadn't found someone that could flirt with her and not die of blood loss. If it wasn't that she knew about his memories from Madara, she'd swear he was gay. That brought up another point she needed to talk to him about, "Um, Naruto?" She asked in a shy and guilty voice.
"Hmm?" He replied with a raised eyebrow.
"I'm...sorry about surpressing the memories and powers Madara gave you. I was scared that you would be like Madara and try break to break my will. I thought-" She was cut off by him kissing her right on the lips. It surprised her so much, that she didn't notice him slipping his tongue into her mouth.
After he broke the kiss, "What part of 'I don't blame you' don't you understand? I can understand you were scared. Since you made sure I was always healed, self-preservation or not, I'll call us even on that bit," He turned to leave after he finished speaking. His parting words were, "See you later Kitsune-Jotei!(Fox Empress)
A small smile crept on the demoness's face as she thought about this turn of events, 'Beings of all kind have tried to break my will. Over time, though my will stayed strong, my spirit began to feel hollow. Now after all this time, the one who could completely breaks me has me in the perfect situation and instead he tries to ignite the fire in my spirit again. Maybe it's the fact he could that won't do it. But by that logic, I would obey someone if they didn't try to break me.' She looked towards the direction Naruto left with a polayful smirk, 'I don't think I would mind that too much with him.'
As she finished this thought, the mindscape changed from a sewer into a forest, and the seal into a leather collor on her neck. She felt it and found a whirlpool seal engraved on it, along with the original seal design on a different spot. "Ohh, the irony," She then spot a few nice size rabbits, "THANK YOU MASTER NARUTO!" She yelled this so loud, Kami and Yami both swore they heard something from their respective domains.
Benatami paused as she considered what she said, "Oh well. He plays his cards right and I'll shout that all through the night. I wonder what kind of bed-name he'd give me?" She wondered with a dreamy grin. She knew exactly what the blond was packing and well...Madara was a bastard at time, but there is a reason none of his wives complained about him being married to so many. That made her wonder if him and Jiraiya were distantly related. "I wonder what people would say if it got out the the founder of the Uchiha clan was a bigger and better pervert then that Toad Sage?"
End of Chapter
And it's finally here. Hope you all like it. To that last bit people, I'm taking a different and funnier approach on Madara's character.