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So here's the next chapter and I really hope you like it.

Chapter 4: the bar part 2

I felt the cool night breeze gently caress my face as I drove with the windows down. At the stop light my eyes flickered right to see a sleeping Edward, with drool slipping out of his mouth. I sighed knowing he'll have a hangover tomorrow; He looks so small and delicate sleeping in the seat. And I couldn't help but think, man I'm a pedophile. But that thought aside I like him like this silent. At that thought a smile graced my face as the light turned green and I continued my drive. I looked out the window thoughtfully wondering what I'd have for dinner, maybe some pasta. That's always good, oh but then there's the part where I have to make it and it just seems to tiring. Maybe I could get Ed to make it for me? Just the thought of it made my mouth water. I could almost smell the delicious pasta sauce and taste the warm noodles; Ed's spaghetti was the best. Too bad he's a sleeping drunk now. Hmmm maybe something simple like toast...
"Bastard... d-don't you dare... "
Hearing the voice of my teenaged lover pulled me out of my head, as I turned to look at him in question, wondering if he's woken up.
As my eyes gazed down at his tired form I could see he was still very much asleep, though his eyes seemed to flicker and move a lot.
Guess he's dreaming about me.

I sluggishly got out of the car as I carried Ed bridal style to the door, goddamn it! Ed's a lot heavier than I thought. When I tossed him over my shoulder at the bar I guess I didn't notice, but this way is hurting my tired arms.
I shoved my left hand in my pockets, letting Ed's legs fall a bit as I searched my pockets for my keys. Hearing the jingle and feeling the warm metal, heated up by my thighs, I pulled it out of my pocket and shoved it in the hole. (That's what he said lol :P) As I opened the door I could feel the cool breeze of an air conditioned house and smell the non-fresh recycled air. Hmmm it's good to be home.
With Ed still in toe I walked up the stairs, and taking the first door on my right, I entered my room. Well technically our room, Ed has his own room but he always sleeps in my bed at night. I've gotten so use to it I can't sleep without him now and I know he feels the same.
I laid him down on our bed and, gently brushed some stray hair out of his face. My plan now was to go to the kitchen and get something to eat, but as I got up to make my way to the kitchen, a hand tugging on my shirt stopped me. I turned to look at Ed wondering why he stopped me.
Then his mouth moved beginning to forming words. "Stay, please sleep with me," he said looking up at me with half lidded golden eyes, I could hear the sleep in his pre-pubescent voice.
"But Ed I'm tired, you look dead and I'm not sure if I'm in the mood," I said a goofy smile on my face as Ed realized what I implied and turned red.
"Bastard you know that's not what I meant..." I could hear in his voice that all he wanted to do was sleep. And I chuckled lightly at my attempt at humor.
"Alright fine I'll stay," I said kicking my boots off and curling up next to my blonde alchemist. And soon enough we drifted off into sleep.

So there it is hopefully this chapters better and I hope you liked it. Btw I'm going to Orlando tomorrow and will be there for 5 days so I won't be able to update everyday like I've been doing. But I will be writing so when I do update on like Tuesday or Wednesday I should have like 2 or 3 stories. So until then bye ^_^ REVIEW?!